(山东菏泽期末)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom很关心你在学校的情况,请参考如下信息给他回复一封电子邮件,介绍你进入初中以后的新生活。

第一步 学审题
学审题,明晰写作思路
1. 审主题:题干已给出写作话题"My new life in middle school",即介绍初中新生活;
2. 审文体:回复电子邮件,文体为应用文;
3. 审人称:题干中的"My"给出提示,人称以第一人称为主;
4. 审时态:介绍进入初中后的新生活,时态为一般现在时;
5. 审要点:①介绍学校生活:学校科目、学校老师、学校活动等;②初中新生活感受。
第二步 搭框架
搭框架,掌握写作技巧

第三步 背范文
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my new life in middle school. ①
Now I'm a student at No.1 Middle School. I'm very busy. I have many subjects. My favourite subject is English because my English teacher Mr Li is great and I think English is interesting. ② But I don't like maths because it's difficult for me. Lucy is my good friend. She thinks maths is easy and fun. And she always helps me with my maths homework. We get on well with each other. I usually have lunch in the school dining hall. There are different kinds of food and the food is delicious. ③ I like doing sports with my friends after school. My favourite sport is basketball and it makes me strong.
I like my new life very much because I think it is colourful. ④ I can learn something new and make new friends.
Yours,
Li Hua
背范文,品析高分佳作
亮点赏析
①此处用let引导的祈使句开门见山,直击主题;
②此处用because连接两个句子,介绍喜欢的学科以及原因;
③巧妙使用there be句型,介绍学校食堂的美食;丰富了文章句型;
④表达感受,总结全文。

Dear Tom,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my new life in middle school.
Now I'm a student at No.1 Middle School. I'm very busy. I have many subjects. My favourite subject is English because my English teacher Mr Li is great and I think English is interesting. But I don't like maths because it's difficult for me. Lucy is my good friend. She thinks maths is easy and fun. And she always helps me with my maths homework. We get on well with each other. I usually have lunch in the school dining hall. There are different kinds of food and the food is delicious. I like doing sports with my friends after school. My favourite sport is basketball and it makes me strong.
I like my new life very much because I think it is colourful. I can learn something new and make new friends.
Yours,
Li Hua

本题要求写一封电子邮件介绍初中新生活，属于应用文写作。写作时需以第一人称、一般现在时为主，围绕学校、学科、师生、三餐、运动等要点展开，采用“开头引出话题-正文具体描述-结尾表达感受”的结构，可运用祈使句、because引导的原因状语从句、there be句型等丰富句式，使文章结构清晰，内容完整。