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储备金句，提升语言质感
[开头句]
1. This is my new school.
2. Welcome to my new school!
[中间句]
1. There are three buildings and a playground.
2. There are 30 classrooms on the first and second floors.
3. There is a garden in front of the classroom building.
4. On the left of the garden is the library, and our dining hall is on the right of the garden.
[结尾句]
1. I love my new school.
2. My school is really big and beautiful.
3. I like my school very much.
[名言警句]
1. The first step is always the hardest, but it's also the most important.
第一步总是最难的，但它也是最重要的。
2. Introductions open the door to new opportunities. 介绍开启了新机会的大门。
3. Every new beginning comes with new possibilities. 每一个新的开始都伴随着新的可能。
4. Friendship is built on mutual understanding and shared experiences.
友谊建立在相互理解和共同经历之上。
写作演练
实战练笔，夯实写作功底
假设与我们学校合作的英国学校代表团到我校参观，请你根据下面的学校布局图，向英国朋友们介绍我校的布局及学校概况。
要求:1. 词数不少于80。
2. 内容要包括图片中所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[思路点拨]
1. 文体:说明文。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:第一人称和第三人称。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
储备金句，提升语言质感
[开头句]
1. This is my new school.
2. Welcome to my new school!
[中间句]
1. There are three buildings and a playground.
2. There are 30 classrooms on the first and second floors.
3. There is a garden in front of the classroom building.
4. On the left of the garden is the library, and our dining hall is on the right of the garden.
[结尾句]
1. I love my new school.
2. My school is really big and beautiful.
3. I like my school very much.
[名言警句]
1. The first step is always the hardest, but it's also the most important.
第一步总是最难的，但它也是最重要的。
2. Introductions open the door to new opportunities. 介绍开启了新机会的大门。
3. Every new beginning comes with new possibilities. 每一个新的开始都伴随着新的可能。
4. Friendship is built on mutual understanding and shared experiences.
友谊建立在相互理解和共同经历之上。
写作演练
实战练笔，夯实写作功底
假设与我们学校合作的英国学校代表团到我校参观，请你根据下面的学校布局图，向英国朋友们介绍我校的布局及学校概况。
要求:1. 词数不少于80。
2. 内容要包括图片中所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[思路点拨]
1. 文体:说明文。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:第一人称和第三人称。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
This is my school. There are three buildings in it—the teaching building, the library and the dining hall. Our teaching building is in the middle of the school. There is a garden in front of the teaching building.
On the left of the garden is the library, and our dining hall is on the right of the garden. Some of the students have lunch there.
Where is the playground? Look! It's behind the teaching building.
My school is really big and beautiful.
I like it very much.
答案
练写作
One possible version:
This is my school. There are three buildings in it—the teaching building, the library and the dining hall. Our teaching building is in the middle of the school. There is a garden in front of the teaching building. On the left of the garden is the library, and our dining hall is on the right of the garden. Some of the students have lunch there. Where is the playground? Look! It's behind the teaching building.
My school is really big and beautiful. I like it very much.
One possible version:
This is my school. There are three buildings in it—the teaching building, the library and the dining hall. Our teaching building is in the middle of the school. There is a garden in front of the teaching building. On the left of the garden is the library, and our dining hall is on the right of the garden. Some of the students have lunch there. Where is the playground? Look! It's behind the teaching building.
My school is really big and beautiful. I like it very much.
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一篇介绍学校布局的英语说明文，解题思路为：1. 明确文体为说明文，时态用一般现在时，人称结合第一、第三人称；2. 按空间方位顺序梳理学校各建筑位置，确保覆盖所有布局信息；3. 开头引入学校，中间详细介绍建筑分布，结尾表达对学校的喜爱，适当增加细节使行文连贯，满足词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：用指定开头句“This is my school.”引入，点明学校整体情况；
2. 中间：先总述学校有三栋建筑，再按方位依次介绍：教学楼在中间，其前有花园，花园左侧是图书馆、右侧是食堂（补充“Some of the students have lunch there.”丰富内容），最后说明操场在教学楼后方；
3. 结尾：用指定结尾句“My school is really big and beautiful. I like it very much.”表达对学校的喜爱，确保内容完整、语句连贯，词数达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
This is my school. There are three buildings in it—the teaching building, the library and the dining hall. Our teaching building is in the middle of the school. There is a garden in front of the teaching building. On the left of the garden is the library, and our dining hall is on the right of the garden. Some of the students have lunch there. Where is the playground? Look! It's behind the teaching building.
My school is really big and beautiful. I like it very much.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作，方位介词运用，一般现在时
【点评】
范文严格遵循空间顺序介绍学校布局，涵盖所有要求信息，时态正确，语句连贯，适当补充学生就餐细节使内容更饱满，符合写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求写一篇介绍学校布局的英语说明文，解题思路为：1. 明确文体为说明文，时态用一般现在时，人称结合第一、第三人称；2. 按空间方位顺序梳理学校各建筑位置，确保覆盖所有布局信息；3. 开头引入学校，中间详细介绍建筑分布，结尾表达对学校的喜爱，适当增加细节使行文连贯，满足词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：用指定开头句“This is my school.”引入，点明学校整体情况；
2. 中间：先总述学校有三栋建筑，再按方位依次介绍：教学楼在中间，其前有花园，花园左侧是图书馆、右侧是食堂（补充“Some of the students have lunch there.”丰富内容），最后说明操场在教学楼后方；
3. 结尾：用指定结尾句“My school is really big and beautiful. I like it very much.”表达对学校的喜爱，确保内容完整、语句连贯，词数达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
This is my school. There are three buildings in it—the teaching building, the library and the dining hall. Our teaching building is in the middle of the school. There is a garden in front of the teaching building. On the left of the garden is the library, and our dining hall is on the right of the garden. Some of the students have lunch there. Where is the playground? Look! It's behind the teaching building.
My school is really big and beautiful. I like it very much.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作，方位介词运用，一般现在时
【点评】
范文严格遵循空间顺序介绍学校布局，涵盖所有要求信息，时态正确，语句连贯，适当补充学生就餐细节使内容更饱满，符合写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
