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[2026 原创]家的故事就像一本没有尽头的书,每一页都记录着我们的欢笑、泪水和成长。请以“My wonderful family moments”为题,描述你们家人在一起的美好时光。词数 90 左右。
[思路点拨]
1. 文体:记叙文。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:以第一人称为主。4. 要点提示:记录几个家人在一起的美好时刻。
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[妙笔生花]
My wonderful family moments
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[2026 原创]家的故事就像一本没有尽头的书,每一页都记录着我们的欢笑、泪水和成长。请以“My wonderful family moments”为题,描述你们家人在一起的美好时光。词数 90 左右。
[思路点拨]
1. 文体:记叙文。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:以第一人称为主。4. 要点提示:记录几个家人在一起的美好时刻。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
My wonderful family moments
I have a happy family. There are four members in my family: my father, my mother, my younger sister, and I.
We often spend our time together, and we enjoy every moment we have.
One of my favourite moments is when we have dinner together. We sit around the table, and my mother serves us delicious food that she cooks.
We talk about our day and share our stories.
It's a special time for us to understand each other.
Another happy moment is when we go on a trip together.
We love to travel and explore new places.
We take lots of photos and create beautiful memories.
It's a time when we can relax
and enjoy each other's company.
答案
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One possible version:
My wonderful family moments
I have a happy family. There are four members in my family: my father, my mother, my younger sister, and I. We often spend our time together, and we enjoy every moment we have.
One of my favourite moments is when we have dinner together. We sit around the table, and my mother serves us delicious food that she cooks. We talk about our day and share our stories. It's a special time for us to understand each other.
Another happy moment is when we go on a trip together. We love to travel and explore new places. We take lots of photos and create beautiful memories. It's a time when we can relax and enjoy each other's company.
One possible version:
My wonderful family moments
I have a happy family. There are four members in my family: my father, my mother, my younger sister, and I. We often spend our time together, and we enjoy every moment we have.
One of my favourite moments is when we have dinner together. We sit around the table, and my mother serves us delicious food that she cooks. We talk about our day and share our stories. It's a special time for us to understand each other.
Another happy moment is when we go on a trip together. We love to travel and explore new places. We take lots of photos and create beautiful memories. It's a time when we can relax and enjoy each other's company.
解析
【分析】本题为英语记叙文写作，要求以“My wonderful family moments”为题描述家人的美好时光，需遵循“开篇点题—幸福点滴—主题升华”的结构，采用一般现在时、第一人称，选取具体家庭场景体现温馨，词数控制在90左右。
【解析】1. 开篇点题：介绍自己的幸福家庭，引出家庭中的美好时刻；2. 幸福点滴：选取晚餐围坐分享日常、一起旅行探索两个典型场景，描述细节；3. 主题升华：说明这些时刻是家人增进理解、放松相处的特殊时光，呼应主题。
【答案】One possible version:
My wonderful family moments
I have a happy family. There are four members in my family: my father, my mother, my younger sister, and I. We often spend our time together, and we enjoy every moment we have.
One of my favourite moments is when we have dinner together. We sit around the table, and my mother serves us delicious food that she cooks. We talk about our day and share our stories. It's a special time for us to understand each other.
Another happy moment is when we go on a trip together. We love to travel and explore new places. We take lots of photos and create beautiful memories. It's a time when we can relax and enjoy each other's company.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、家庭主题表达、一般现在时应用
【点评】本文结构清晰，紧扣主题，选取贴近生活的事例展现家庭美好时光，语言简洁流畅，符合写作要求，有效传递了家庭的温馨氛围。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】1. 开篇点题：介绍自己的幸福家庭，引出家庭中的美好时刻；2. 幸福点滴：选取晚餐围坐分享日常、一起旅行探索两个典型场景，描述细节；3. 主题升华：说明这些时刻是家人增进理解、放松相处的特殊时光，呼应主题。
【答案】One possible version:
My wonderful family moments
I have a happy family. There are four members in my family: my father, my mother, my younger sister, and I. We often spend our time together, and we enjoy every moment we have.
One of my favourite moments is when we have dinner together. We sit around the table, and my mother serves us delicious food that she cooks. We talk about our day and share our stories. It's a special time for us to understand each other.
Another happy moment is when we go on a trip together. We love to travel and explore new places. We take lots of photos and create beautiful memories. It's a time when we can relax and enjoy each other's company.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、家庭主题表达、一般现在时应用
【点评】本文结构清晰，紧扣主题，选取贴近生活的事例展现家庭美好时光，语言简洁流畅，符合写作要求，有效传递了家庭的温馨氛围。
【难度系数】0.3
