写作例析
这个暑假你回自己的家乡了吗？与儿时的记忆相比，你的家乡发生了哪些变化呢？请围绕“家乡变化”的主题，根据下面的内容要点，以“The Amazing Changes in My Hometown”为题，写一篇80~100词的英语文章。
内容要点:1. 用现在完成时描述家乡近年来在环境、交通、建筑等方面发生的变化。（至少写出3点具体变化）2. 表达自己对这些变化的感受。3. 谈谈自己对家乡未来的期待。
[审题指导]1. 体裁:说明文
2. 人称:以第三人称为主
3. 时态:以一般过去时和现在完成时为主
[思路构建]

[精彩范文]
The Amazing Changes in My Hometown
In recent years, the development of society and technology has brought about great changes in my hometown.
In the past, we used to go to the city centre over the rough road by bus. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. However, at present, great changes have taken place. The roads have become wide. Most families have their own cars, so it's very convenient for them to travel to other places. People live in modern and big houses. The environment has improved greatly too. The river has become clearer, and more land has been covered with green grass. People are leading a happy life.

The Amazing Changes in My Hometown
In recent years, great changes have taken place in my hometown.
In the past, the roads were rough, houses were old and small, and the river was heavily polluted. Now, the roads have become much wider, and most families have private cars for easier travel. People have moved into large modern houses. The river has turned clear with lots of fish swimming in it, and the air is much fresher now.
I feel so proud of these amazing changes. I hope my hometown will become more beautiful and people will live a happier life in the future.

本题是九年级英语主题写作题，要求围绕“家乡变化”写一篇80~100词的说明文，写作需注意：1. 正确使用现在完成时描述变化，至少覆盖交通、建筑、环境三个维度的具体改变；2. 可以通过对比家乡过去的状态凸显当下的变化，逻辑清晰；3. 补充自己对家乡变化的感受，以及对家乡未来的合理期待，保证人称、时态符合要求，词数控制在规定范围内。

实战演练
随着社会的快速发展，我们的生活发生着巨大的变化，尤其是在居住环境、交通、购物、休闲活动等方面。John 是你的一位美国朋友，他是一名不折不扣的“中国迷”，尤其对近些年来中国的变化非常感兴趣。请你以“Great Changes Have Taken Place Around Me”为题，写一篇短文向他详细介绍这些变化。80 ~ 100 词。

Great Changes Have Taken Place
Around Me

Great Changes Have Taken Place Around Me
With the rapid development of society, great changes have taken place around me, especially in living environment, transportation, shopping and entertainment.
In the past, people lived in small houses. Now, there are many tall buildings. For transportation, in the old days, people mainly rode bicycles. But now, there are many kinds of transportation like planes, trains and cars. When it comes to shopping, people used to go to small shops. Now, large shopping malls are everywhere, making shopping more convenient. In terms of entertainment, people used to listen to the radio or play Chinese chess. Now, people can surf the Internet, travel and do many other interesting things.
I feel very happy and lucky to live in such a wonderful time. I believe our life will become better and better in the future.
【思路分析】第一段点明主题；第二段从住房、交通、购物、休闲娱乐几个方面详细对比过去与现在变化；第三段表达作者的感想和期待。