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假如你是李华，你对野生动物很感兴趣。寒假中，你想邀请Henry一起研究你最喜欢的一种野生动物，请根据导图写一封90词左右的电子邮件。
Dear Henry,
How is everything going? I like wild animals very much. I want to invite you to study my favourite animal with me.
I will be happy if you can join me. Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假如你是李华，你对野生动物很感兴趣。寒假中，你想邀请Henry一起研究你最喜欢的一种野生动物，请根据导图写一封90词左右的电子邮件。
Dear Henry,
How is everything going? I like wild animals very much. I want to invite you to study my favourite animal with me.
My favourite wild animal is tigers. Some of them live in Northeast China. I like tigers because they are big and strong. They like to live alone. They can run fast, but only for a short while. They can swim and climb.
We can take some water when visiting them, because it takes hours to watch them. Don't forget to take a pair of binoculars to help us see them clearly. Sadly, tigers are in danger. We can make some posters to let others know the importance of protecting them.
I will be happy if you can join me. Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案
写作提优练
范文:
Dear Henry,
How is everything going? I like wild animals very much. I want to invite you to study my favourite animal with me.
My favourite wild animal is tigers. Some of them live in Northeast China. I like tigers because they are big and strong. They like to live alone. They can run fast, but only for a short while. They can swim and climb.
We can take some water when visiting them, because it takes hours to watch them. Don't forget to take a pair of binoculars to help us see them clearly.
Sadly, tigers are in danger. We can make some posters to let others know the importance of protecting them.
I will be happy if you can join me. Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
范文:
Dear Henry,
How is everything going? I like wild animals very much. I want to invite you to study my favourite animal with me.
My favourite wild animal is tigers. Some of them live in Northeast China. I like tigers because they are big and strong. They like to live alone. They can run fast, but only for a short while. They can swim and climb.
We can take some water when visiting them, because it takes hours to watch them. Don't forget to take a pair of binoculars to help us see them clearly.
Sadly, tigers are in danger. We can make some posters to let others know the importance of protecting them.
I will be happy if you can join me. Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务：以李华的身份给Henry写一封电子邮件，邀请他共同研究自己最喜欢的野生动物，需围绕思维导图的四个维度（栖息地、喜欢的原因、需携带的物品、保护方法）展开，同时遵循邮件格式，词数约90。解题思路：第一步确定具体的野生动物（如老虎）；第二步对应思维导图的四个模块填充内容：Where（说明动物的栖息地，如中国东北）、Why（阐述喜欢该动物的理由，如外形和能力）、What&Why（说明观察时需携带的物品及原因）、How（提出保护该动物的具体方法）；第三步衔接开头与结尾，形成逻辑连贯、符合要求的邮件。
【解析】按照邮件结构，先问候并说明邀请意图，接着依次介绍：最喜欢的野生动物是老虎，部分生活在中国东北；喜欢老虎是因为它们体型大、强壮，能快速奔跑、游泳和攀爬；观察时需携带水和望远镜，因为观察耗时久且望远镜能帮助清晰观察；老虎处于濒危状态，可制作海报宣传保护的重要性，最后邀请对方加入。
【答案】Dear Henry,
How is everything going? I like wild animals very much. I want to invite you to study my favourite animal with me.
My favourite wild animal is tigers. Some of them live in Northeast China. I like tigers because they are big and strong. They like to live alone. They can run fast, but only for a short while. They can swim and climb.
We can take some water when visiting them, because it takes hours to watch them. Don't forget to take a pair of binoculars to help us see them clearly.
Sadly, tigers are in danger. We can make some posters to let others know the importance of protecting them.
I will be happy if you can join me. Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、野生动物话题表达、信息整合写作
【点评】本题结合思维导图设计应用文写作任务，既考查学生对书信格式的掌握，又考查围绕特定话题整合信息、组织语言的能力，贴近学生生活实际，能有效考查学生的书面表达综合能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照邮件结构，先问候并说明邀请意图，接着依次介绍：最喜欢的野生动物是老虎，部分生活在中国东北；喜欢老虎是因为它们体型大、强壮，能快速奔跑、游泳和攀爬；观察时需携带水和望远镜，因为观察耗时久且望远镜能帮助清晰观察；老虎处于濒危状态，可制作海报宣传保护的重要性，最后邀请对方加入。
【答案】Dear Henry,
How is everything going? I like wild animals very much. I want to invite you to study my favourite animal with me.
My favourite wild animal is tigers. Some of them live in Northeast China. I like tigers because they are big and strong. They like to live alone. They can run fast, but only for a short while. They can swim and climb.
We can take some water when visiting them, because it takes hours to watch them. Don't forget to take a pair of binoculars to help us see them clearly.
Sadly, tigers are in danger. We can make some posters to let others know the importance of protecting them.
I will be happy if you can join me. Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、野生动物话题表达、信息整合写作
【点评】本题结合思维导图设计应用文写作任务，既考查学生对书信格式的掌握，又考查围绕特定话题整合信息、组织语言的能力，贴近学生生活实际，能有效考查学生的书面表达综合能力。
【难度系数】0.6
