七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
假如你是李华,你的笔友杰克写信询问你的饮食习惯。请你根据以下
1. What do you usually have for three meals?
2. Where do you have the meals?
3. What do you think of your eating habits?
4. Something more about your eating habits.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数80左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I'm glad that you want to know about my eating habits.
假如你是李华,你的笔友杰克写信询问你的饮食习惯。请你根据以下
内
容
提
示
,用英语给他回一封信。内
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提
示
:1. What do you usually have for three meals?
2. Where do you have the meals?
3. What do you think of your eating habits?
4. Something more about your eating habits.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数80左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I'm glad that you want to know about my eating habits.
答案
[参考范文]
Dear Jack,
I'm glad that you want to know about my eating habits. Having a balanced diet is an important part of daily life. I usually have two eggs and a glass of milk for breakfast at home before I leave for school. Eggs are good for my brain and eyes. I often have lunch with my classmates. Beef and vegetables are my top choice, because they can provide me with enough nutrients to help me stay fit. When it comes to supper, I always have some rice, pork and tofu at home. I do not eat too much, since it's bad for my health.
Looking forward to hearing more about your daily eating habits!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jack,
I'm glad that you want to know about my eating habits. Having a balanced diet is an important part of daily life. I usually have two eggs and a glass of milk for breakfast at home before I leave for school. Eggs are good for my brain and eyes. I often have lunch with my classmates. Beef and vegetables are my top choice, because they can provide me with enough nutrients to help me stay fit. When it comes to supper, I always have some rice, pork and tofu at home. I do not eat too much, since it's bad for my health.
Looking forward to hearing more about your daily eating habits!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
首先,这是一篇给笔友的回信写作题,需紧扣题目给出的四个核心要点展开。解题思路如下:
1. 开篇承接给定开头,先点明均衡饮食的重要性,自然引出饮食习惯的话题;
2. 分三餐逐一阐述:分别说明每顿饭的食物、就餐地点,同时补充食物对身体的益处或饮食注意事项,覆盖“吃什么”“在哪里吃”的要点;
3. 评价自身饮食习惯:通过三餐的合理安排体现饮食均衡健康的特点;
4. 结尾按照书信规范,表达期待对方回信的意愿,让内容完整闭环。
【解析】
1. 开篇过渡:用“Having a balanced diet is an important part of daily life.”引出话题,衔接自然;
2. 早餐部分:“I usually have two eggs and a glass of milk for breakfast at home before I leave for school. Eggs are good for my brain and eyes.”明确早餐的食物、就餐地点,补充食物益处,符合要点要求;
3. 午餐部分:“I often have lunch with my classmates. Beef and vegetables are my top choice, because they can provide me with enough nutrients to help me stay fit.”说明午餐的就餐场景(可推断地点为学校)、食物,用原因状语从句解释选择理由,覆盖核心要点;
4. 晚餐部分:“When it comes to supper, I always have some rice, pork and tofu at home. I do not eat too much, since it's bad for my health.”用过渡语引出晚餐,说明食物和地点,补充饮食节制的健康常识,丰富内容;
5. 结尾:“Looking forward to hearing more about your daily eating habits!”符合书信结尾规范,表达期待,使书信结构完整。
【答案】
Dear Jack,
I'm glad that you want to know about my eating habits. Having a balanced diet is an important part of daily life. I usually have two eggs and a glass of milk for breakfast at home before I leave for school. Eggs are good for my brain and eyes. I often have lunch with my classmates. Beef and vegetables are my top choice, because they can provide me with enough nutrients to help me stay fit. When it comes to supper, I always have some rice, pork and tofu at home. I do not eat too much, since it's bad for my health.
Looking forward to hearing more about your daily eating habits!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
1. 英语书信格式
2. 饮食类词汇运用
3. 原因状语从句
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰,完整覆盖题目所有要求要点,语言流畅自然,运用了过渡语、原因状语从句等丰富句式,既准确传达饮食习惯信息,又符合英语书信写作规范,是一篇贴合要求的优秀写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先,这是一篇给笔友的回信写作题,需紧扣题目给出的四个核心要点展开。解题思路如下:
1. 开篇承接给定开头,先点明均衡饮食的重要性,自然引出饮食习惯的话题;
2. 分三餐逐一阐述:分别说明每顿饭的食物、就餐地点,同时补充食物对身体的益处或饮食注意事项,覆盖“吃什么”“在哪里吃”的要点;
3. 评价自身饮食习惯:通过三餐的合理安排体现饮食均衡健康的特点;
4. 结尾按照书信规范,表达期待对方回信的意愿,让内容完整闭环。
【解析】
1. 开篇过渡:用“Having a balanced diet is an important part of daily life.”引出话题,衔接自然;
2. 早餐部分:“I usually have two eggs and a glass of milk for breakfast at home before I leave for school. Eggs are good for my brain and eyes.”明确早餐的食物、就餐地点,补充食物益处,符合要点要求;
3. 午餐部分:“I often have lunch with my classmates. Beef and vegetables are my top choice, because they can provide me with enough nutrients to help me stay fit.”说明午餐的就餐场景(可推断地点为学校)、食物,用原因状语从句解释选择理由,覆盖核心要点;
4. 晚餐部分:“When it comes to supper, I always have some rice, pork and tofu at home. I do not eat too much, since it's bad for my health.”用过渡语引出晚餐,说明食物和地点,补充饮食节制的健康常识,丰富内容;
5. 结尾:“Looking forward to hearing more about your daily eating habits!”符合书信结尾规范,表达期待,使书信结构完整。
【答案】
Dear Jack,
I'm glad that you want to know about my eating habits. Having a balanced diet is an important part of daily life. I usually have two eggs and a glass of milk for breakfast at home before I leave for school. Eggs are good for my brain and eyes. I often have lunch with my classmates. Beef and vegetables are my top choice, because they can provide me with enough nutrients to help me stay fit. When it comes to supper, I always have some rice, pork and tofu at home. I do not eat too much, since it's bad for my health.
Looking forward to hearing more about your daily eating habits!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
1. 英语书信格式
2. 饮食类词汇运用
3. 原因状语从句
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰,完整覆盖题目所有要求要点,语言流畅自然,运用了过渡语、原因状语从句等丰富句式,既准确传达饮食习惯信息,又符合英语书信写作规范,是一篇贴合要求的优秀写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
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