校园是我们的第二个家,我们要用心守护它的整洁环境。请以“Let’s keep our school clean”为题,写一篇短文,呼吁同学们保护校园环境。要求语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,不少于5句话。

Let’s keep our school clean
Let’s keep our school clean
Our school is our second home. We should keep it clean and beautiful.
We will clean our classrooms every day. We will water the flowers and trees. We will also pick up the rubbish on the playground. We shouldn’t throw rubbish on the ground. We should put it into the bin.
A clean school makes us happy and healthy. Let’s do our best to keep our school clean together!
答案
Let’s keep our school clean
Our school is our second home. We should keep it clean and beautiful.
We will clean our classrooms every day. We will water the flowers and trees. We will also pick up the rubbish on the playground. We shouldn’t throw rubbish on the ground. We should put it into the bin.
A clean school makes us happy and healthy. Let’s do our best to keep our school clean together!
Our school is our second home. We should keep it clean and beautiful.
We will clean our classrooms every day. We will water the flowers and trees. We will also pick up the rubbish on the playground. We shouldn’t throw rubbish on the ground. We should put it into the bin.
A clean school makes us happy and healthy. Let’s do our best to keep our school clean together!
解析
【分析】首先明确写作主题为“Let’s keep our school clean”,核心是呼吁同学们保护校园环境。第一步,开篇点明校园是我们的第二个家,引出保持校园整洁的重要性;第二步,结合插图呈现的校园清洁相关场景(打扫教室、浇花浇树、捡拾垃圾、不随地扔垃圾),列举具体的行动;第三步,说明保持校园清洁的益处,最后发出呼吁,号召大家共同维护校园环境。写作时需注意语句通顺,运用正确的英语表达,不少于5句话。
【解析】按照上述思路,先开篇点题,再列举具体的校园清洁行动,接着说明好处,最后发出呼吁,确保语句连贯、语法正确,符合写作要求。具体内容如下:
Let’s keep our school clean
Our school is our second home. We should keep it clean and beautiful.
We will clean our classrooms every day. We will water the flowers and trees. We will also pick up the rubbish on the playground. We shouldn’t throw rubbish on the ground. We should put it into the bin.
A clean school makes us happy and healthy. Let’s do our best to keep our school clean together!
【答案】Let’s keep our school clean
Our school is our second home. We should keep it clean and beautiful.
We will clean our classrooms every day. We will water the flowers and trees. We will also pick up the rubbish on the playground. We shouldn’t throw rubbish on the ground. We should put it into the bin.
A clean school makes us happy and healthy. Let’s do our best to keep our school clean together!
【知识点】英语话题写作、校园环保表达
【点评】本题结合校园场景插图,围绕“保持校园清洁”的主题进行写作,既考查学生的英语写作能力,又渗透了环保意识,要求学生结合生活实际与插图内容完成表达,符合小学英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】按照上述思路,先开篇点题,再列举具体的校园清洁行动,接着说明好处,最后发出呼吁,确保语句连贯、语法正确,符合写作要求。具体内容如下:
Let’s keep our school clean
Our school is our second home. We should keep it clean and beautiful.
We will clean our classrooms every day. We will water the flowers and trees. We will also pick up the rubbish on the playground. We shouldn’t throw rubbish on the ground. We should put it into the bin.
A clean school makes us happy and healthy. Let’s do our best to keep our school clean together!
【答案】Let’s keep our school clean
Our school is our second home. We should keep it clean and beautiful.
We will clean our classrooms every day. We will water the flowers and trees. We will also pick up the rubbish on the playground. We shouldn’t throw rubbish on the ground. We should put it into the bin.
A clean school makes us happy and healthy. Let’s do our best to keep our school clean together!
【知识点】英语话题写作、校园环保表达
【点评】本题结合校园场景插图,围绕“保持校园清洁”的主题进行写作,既考查学生的英语写作能力,又渗透了环保意识,要求学生结合生活实际与插图内容完成表达,符合小学英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】0.7
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