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十三 书面表达。（8分）
你想有个理想朋友吗？是男孩还是女孩？他/她的外貌特征、性格特征、喜欢的食物、最喜欢的某一天……是什么？请你用简单的几句话来介绍一下你理想的朋友吧！
My Ideal Friend
My ideal friend is
你想有个理想朋友吗？是男孩还是女孩？他/她的外貌特征、性格特征、喜欢的食物、最喜欢的某一天……是什么？请你用简单的几句话来介绍一下你理想的朋友吧！
My Ideal Friend
My ideal friend is
a quiet girl. She is tall and thin with a pair of glasses. She is kind and hard-working. Her favourite food is vegetable salad because it's fresh and healthy. She likes Friday best because we have art class together. She can draw very well, and we often read books in the library at the weekend.
答案
参考范文:
My Ideal Friend
My ideal friend is a quiet girl. She is tall and thin with a pair of glasses. She is kind and hard-working. Her favourite food is vegetable salad because it's fresh and healthy. She likes Friday best because we have art class together. She can draw very well, and we often read books in the library at the weekend.
My Ideal Friend
My ideal friend is a quiet girl. She is tall and thin with a pair of glasses. She is kind and hard-working. Her favourite food is vegetable salad because it's fresh and healthy. She likes Friday best because we have art class together. She can draw very well, and we often read books in the library at the weekend.
解析
【分析】
本题要求用英语介绍理想朋友，需紧扣题目指定的要点：朋友的性别、外貌特征、性格特征、喜爱的食物、最喜欢的一天。写作时要使用简单易懂的英语句子，确保内容完整、逻辑清晰，符合初中英语写作的基础要求。
【解析】
先确定理想朋友的身份设定，依次展开描述：1. 点明朋友的性别（如安静的女孩）；2. 描述外貌（高瘦、戴眼镜）；3. 说明性格（善良、勤奋）；4. 介绍喜爱的食物及原因（蔬菜沙拉，新鲜健康）；5. 说明最喜欢的一天及原因（周五，一起上美术课）；补充合理的日常活动（周末一起看书），让内容更饱满，语言简洁规范。
【答案】
My Ideal Friend
My ideal friend is a quiet girl. She is tall and thin with a pair of glasses. She is kind and hard-working. Her favourite food is vegetable salad because it's fresh and healthy. She likes Friday best because we have art class together. She can draw very well, and we often read books in the library at the weekend.
【知识点】
英语书面表达（介绍类）、形容词用法、原因状语从句
【点评】
本篇范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖了理想朋友的所有指定要点，语言简单规范、逻辑清晰，符合初中学生的写作水平，是一篇合格的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求用英语介绍理想朋友，需紧扣题目指定的要点：朋友的性别、外貌特征、性格特征、喜爱的食物、最喜欢的一天。写作时要使用简单易懂的英语句子，确保内容完整、逻辑清晰，符合初中英语写作的基础要求。
【解析】
先确定理想朋友的身份设定，依次展开描述：1. 点明朋友的性别（如安静的女孩）；2. 描述外貌（高瘦、戴眼镜）；3. 说明性格（善良、勤奋）；4. 介绍喜爱的食物及原因（蔬菜沙拉，新鲜健康）；5. 说明最喜欢的一天及原因（周五，一起上美术课）；补充合理的日常活动（周末一起看书），让内容更饱满，语言简洁规范。
【答案】
My Ideal Friend
My ideal friend is a quiet girl. She is tall and thin with a pair of glasses. She is kind and hard-working. Her favourite food is vegetable salad because it's fresh and healthy. She likes Friday best because we have art class together. She can draw very well, and we often read books in the library at the weekend.
【知识点】
英语书面表达（介绍类）、形容词用法、原因状语从句
【点评】
本篇范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖了理想朋友的所有指定要点，语言简单规范、逻辑清晰，符合初中学生的写作水平，是一篇合格的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
