九、2025·南京玄武区期中书面表达21分
假如你是丹尼尔Daniel,你的英国笔友本Ben计划来你的家
乡南京游玩,并给你发了封电子邮件,想详细了解你的家乡。请认真
阅读他写给你的邮件,并根据邮件内容用英语回信。

注意:1. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2. 回复须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、通顺;
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Ben,
Thank you for writing to me. I'm glad to hear you're coming to
my hometown—Nanjing. It is a good place to visit.





Best wishes,
Daniel

One possible version:
Dear Ben,
Thank you for writing to me. I'm glad to hear you're
coming to my hometown—Nanjing. It is a good place to visit.
Nanjing is a beautiful city in Jiangsu. Green trees are on
each side of the city streets, which makes the whole city green
and clean. The people in Nanjing are nice. My neighbours are
friendly and helpful. If I forget my keys, Uncle Ming, one of
my neighbours, will invite me to his house waiting for my
parents. What's more, if I have no time to walk my dog,
there will be warm-hearted neighbours to give me a hand. If
you come to Nanjing, you can go to different kinds of
museums to learn Chinese history. And you can have a good
time in Xuanwu Lake.
I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Nanjing!
Best wishes,
Daniel
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件。②时态:主要为
"一般现在时"。③提示:写作要点已给出,根据邮件内容用
英语回复,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,用"很开心听到你要来我的家乡"来
引出接下来要重点介绍的内容;第二步,从环境、当地的人
们以及景点等方面来介绍自己的家乡;第三步,书写结语,
表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①each side of……的每一边/每一侧 ②wait for等待
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
I hope my answer is helpful to you.(省略that的宾语从句)

【分析】
本题要求以Daniel的身份给笔友Ben回信，需覆盖Ben邮件中的三个核心问题：家乡南京的环境、邻里情况、南京可开展的旅行活动。写作时要注意词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，采用一般现在时，适当添加细节让内容连贯，符合英语书信的表达规范，确保所有要点都得到回应。
【解析】
第一步：承接开头，引出对家乡南京的介绍；第二步：回答环境问题，描述南京街道绿树成荫、干净整洁的特点；第三步：回答邻里问题，举例说明邻居友好热心的具体表现；第四步：回答旅行活动，推荐参观博物馆了解历史、去玄武湖游玩；第五步：结尾表达对Ben到来的期待，完成书信。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Ben,
Thank you for writing to me. I'm glad to hear you're coming to my hometown—Nanjing. It is a good place to visit.
Nanjing is a beautiful city in Jiangsu. Green trees are on each side of the city streets, which makes the whole city green and clean. The people in Nanjing are nice. My neighbours are friendly and helpful. If I forget my keys, Uncle Ming, one of my neighbours, will invite me to his house waiting for my parents. What's more, if I have no time to walk my dog, there will be warm-hearted neighbours to give me a hand. If you come to Nanjing, you can go to different kinds of museums to learn Chinese history. And you can have a good time in Xuanwu Lake.
I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Nanjing!
Best wishes,
Daniel
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般现在时应用、书信写作
【点评】
本文符合电子邮件格式，准确覆盖所有写作要点，语言通顺自然，添加的邻居帮忙的细节让内容更生动，符合初中英语书面表达的要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5