典型例题
请根据以下提示,以"Helping Others Makes
Me Happy"为题写一篇英语短文。词数 80 左
右。内容提示如下:
1. 过去我将钱花在买衣服和零食上;
2. 一个月前老师告诉我们有许多贫困地区的儿
童没有足够的生活用品,更上不起学;
3. 从那以后,我将零花钱捐给一个名为
UNICEF 的机构,此机构主要帮助贫困儿童;
4. 我的感受。




思路点拨
分析题意可知,本文的体裁应是一篇记叙
文。根据作文题目以及内容提示可知,文章应以
第一人称为主;在叙述自己帮助他人的经历时应
用一般过去时;在叙述现在一些贫困地区儿童的
生活情况时应用一般现在时。第一段:描述自己
过去的情况;第二段:描述自己现在发生的变化
及其原因;第三段:总结自己的感受和体会。

范文欣赏
Helping Others Makes Me Happy
My parents often gave me pocket money
when I was a child. I used to spend most of the
pocket money in buying clothes and snacks.
One month ago, our English teacher told us
that there are so many poor children around the
world. They are too poor to go to school. Some
of them don't have enough clothes or food. I
was surprised. From then on, I donated my
pocket money to UNICEF that helps poor
children.
I'm really proud that I can help others. And
helping others makes me happy.

假设你的学校下周将庆祝 Charity Day(慈
善日),下面有四个具有慈善性质的活动供你选
择,你可以选择参加其中的一个活动,请你介绍
自己的选择并阐述理由,最后,请表达你对此次
活动的愿望。词数 80 左右(不包括所给开头和
结尾)。
1. A visit to the House for the Orphans(孤儿)
2. A visit to a Hope Primary School
3. Handing out leaflets for Project Hope
4. A visit to the Home for the Elderly
We will have a Charity Day next week. It's
time to do something meaningful for people in
need.







I am looking forward to having a wonderful
day.

Onepossibleversion;
　　WewillhaveaCharityDavnextweek.It'stimetodo somethingmeaningfulforpeopleinneed.
　　I plan to go to visit the Home for theElderly with my friends.We shall clean the elderly's rooms.We can share someexciting news with them,and we may sing and dance for them,The elderly reallly need morecare.Our vli5sit will makethem feel less lonely.I think both the elderly and we willhaveagoodtimetogether.And Idohopemoreand|more peoplewill takeactionto helpthe elderly.
　　Iamlookingforwardtohavingawonderfuldav.
思路引[总体分析]
　1.体裁;本文是一篇记叙文。2.时态:以一般将来时为主。3,提示;需围绕“帮助弱势群体”这一主题，通过具体行动方案展现关爱精神。
[写作步骤]
　第一步，明确活动主题与参与对象(如:拜访敬老院)。第二步,分点说明具体行动计划(清洁环境、文娱表演、情感交流等)。第三步，阐述活动意义，并呼吁更多人参与公益行动。
[亮点词汇]
　①plantodosth计划做某事
　②sharesthwithsb与某人分享某事
　③moreandmore越来越多的
[高分句型]
　Wecan sharesomeexcitingnewswiththem,and wemay singanddanceforthem.(and连接的并列句)