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Ⅷ. 书面表达
春之繁华,夏之碧叶,秋之硕果,冬之静雪,四季更迭,每一季都有独特的韵味。你校将开展以“My Favourite Season at School”为题的英语征文比赛,假如你是 Peter,请你根据以下问题提示和要求,写一篇英语文章。
提示:
1. What is your school like during that season?
2. What do you often do at your school during that season?
3. Why do you like this season most at your school?
要求:1. 短文需包含所有问题要点,并适当发挥;
2. 词数 100 左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Favourite Season at School
My favourite season at school is
题中题 160
春之繁华,夏之碧叶,秋之硕果,冬之静雪,四季更迭,每一季都有独特的韵味。你校将开展以“My Favourite Season at School”为题的英语征文比赛,假如你是 Peter,请你根据以下问题提示和要求,写一篇英语文章。
提示:
1. What is your school like during that season?
2. What do you often do at your school during that season?
3. Why do you like this season most at your school?
要求:1. 短文需包含所有问题要点,并适当发挥;
2. 词数 100 左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Favourite Season at School
My favourite season at school is
题中题 160
答案
Ⅷ. One possible version:
My Favourite Season at School
My favourite season at school is spring. In spring, our school comes alive. Trees grow new leaves, and flowers bloom everywhere. The air smells fresh, and the weather is perfectly warm. We often have outdoor lessons under the blue sky, read books on the grass, or play football with friends. I also love watching birds build their nests in the old tree near our classroom. I love spring most because it feels like a new beginning. It brings energy, beautiful colours and smiles to our school. Everyone seems happier and more active. Spring turns our school into a cheerful and beautiful place to learn and grow.
思路梳理
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿。
②时态:全文主要使用一般现在时。
③提示:需完整回应三个提示问题,通过细节描写展现校园季节特色。
【写作步骤】
第一步,介绍最喜欢的季节是春天,描述校园春天时的天气、景色。
第二步,描述春天在校园里经常做的活动。
第三步,阐述喜欢春天的原因。
My Favourite Season at School
My favourite season at school is spring. In spring, our school comes alive. Trees grow new leaves, and flowers bloom everywhere. The air smells fresh, and the weather is perfectly warm. We often have outdoor lessons under the blue sky, read books on the grass, or play football with friends. I also love watching birds build their nests in the old tree near our classroom. I love spring most because it feels like a new beginning. It brings energy, beautiful colours and smiles to our school. Everyone seems happier and more active. Spring turns our school into a cheerful and beautiful place to learn and grow.
思路梳理
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿。
②时态:全文主要使用一般现在时。
③提示:需完整回应三个提示问题,通过细节描写展现校园季节特色。
【写作步骤】
第一步,介绍最喜欢的季节是春天,描述校园春天时的天气、景色。
第二步,描述春天在校园里经常做的活动。
第三步,阐述喜欢春天的原因。
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“My Favourite Season at School”为题，结合三个提示问题完成短文。解题思路：首先结合插图确定最喜欢的季节为春天，再按提示分三部分写作：第一部分描述校园该季节的景色（对应提示1），第二部分写在校园该季节的活动（对应提示2），第三部分阐述喜欢该季节的原因（对应提示3）；写作时需使用一般现在时，词数控制在100左右，开头已给出，需衔接自然并适当补充细节。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头已给出，点明最喜欢的季节是春天；2. 描述校园春天的景象：树木长出新叶，到处鲜花盛开，空气清新，天气温暖；3. 列举校园春天的活动：户外上课、在草地上读书、和朋友踢足球、观察教室旁老树上的鸟筑巢；4. 说明喜欢春天的原因：春天是新的开始，带来活力、美丽色彩与笑容，让校园成为学习成长的美好场所；5. 检查时态（统一用一般现在时）、词数，确保覆盖所有提示要点，语言流畅自然。
【答案】
My Favourite Season at School
My favourite season at school is spring. In spring, our school comes alive. Trees grow new leaves, and flowers bloom everywhere. The air smells fresh, and the weather is perfectly warm. We often have outdoor lessons under the blue sky, read books on the grass, or play football with friends. I also love watching birds build their nests in the old tree near our classroom. I love spring most because it feels like a new beginning. It brings energy, beautiful colours and smiles to our school. Everyone seems happier and more active. Spring turns our school into a cheerful and beautiful place to learn and grow.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，季节话题，一般现在时
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有提示问题，细节丰富生动，时态运用准确，语言通顺流畅，符合初中英语书面表达的要求，是一篇优秀的范文，能为学生提供清晰的写作思路参考。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“My Favourite Season at School”为题，结合三个提示问题完成短文。解题思路：首先结合插图确定最喜欢的季节为春天，再按提示分三部分写作：第一部分描述校园该季节的景色（对应提示1），第二部分写在校园该季节的活动（对应提示2），第三部分阐述喜欢该季节的原因（对应提示3）；写作时需使用一般现在时，词数控制在100左右，开头已给出，需衔接自然并适当补充细节。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头已给出，点明最喜欢的季节是春天；2. 描述校园春天的景象：树木长出新叶，到处鲜花盛开，空气清新，天气温暖；3. 列举校园春天的活动：户外上课、在草地上读书、和朋友踢足球、观察教室旁老树上的鸟筑巢；4. 说明喜欢春天的原因：春天是新的开始，带来活力、美丽色彩与笑容，让校园成为学习成长的美好场所；5. 检查时态（统一用一般现在时）、词数，确保覆盖所有提示要点，语言流畅自然。
【答案】
My Favourite Season at School
My favourite season at school is spring. In spring, our school comes alive. Trees grow new leaves, and flowers bloom everywhere. The air smells fresh, and the weather is perfectly warm. We often have outdoor lessons under the blue sky, read books on the grass, or play football with friends. I also love watching birds build their nests in the old tree near our classroom. I love spring most because it feels like a new beginning. It brings energy, beautiful colours and smiles to our school. Everyone seems happier and more active. Spring turns our school into a cheerful and beautiful place to learn and grow.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，季节话题，一般现在时
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有提示问题，细节丰富生动，时态运用准确，语言通顺流畅，符合初中英语书面表达的要求，是一篇优秀的范文，能为学生提供清晰的写作思路参考。
【难度系数】
0.4
