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每逢夏季，部分地区因强降雨等天气影响，容易遭遇洪涝灾害。如何在洪水中保护自己呢？你班在英语课上就这一问题进行了讨论。请你根据以下提示，用英语说说自己的观点。
要求：
1.包含所有给出的提示要点，可适当发挥，省略号部分要求至少自拟1点；
2.词数不少于70（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I'd like to talk about how to protect ourselves in the flood.
每逢夏季，部分地区因强降雨等天气影响，容易遭遇洪涝灾害。如何在洪水中保护自己呢？你班在英语课上就这一问题进行了讨论。请你根据以下提示，用英语说说自己的观点。
要求：
1.包含所有给出的提示要点，可适当发挥，省略号部分要求至少自拟1点；
2.词数不少于70（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I'd like to talk about how to protect ourselves in the flood.
Firstly, we should often watch the news about the flood during the rainy season. We should make preparations like water, food and medicine before the disaster comes. Secondly, when there is a flood, we must move to higher places at once and stay there to wait for rescue. Remember not to swim in the floodwater. If the flood washes us away, we should keep calm. We can catch something made of wood and it can help us get out of water.
By understanding how to react during disasters and preparing in advance, we can face natural threats with more confidence. I hope these tips can help you stay safe. Thank you!
答案
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I'd like to talk about how to protect ourselves in the flood.
Firstly, we should often watch the news about the flood during the rainy season. We should make preparations like water, food and medicine before the disaster comes. Secondly, when there is a flood, we must move to higher places at once and stay there to wait for rescue. Remember not to swim in the floodwater. If the flood washes us away, we should keep calm. We can catch something made of wood and it can help us get out of water.
By understanding how to react during disasters and preparing in advance, we can face natural threats with more confidence. I hope these tips can help you stay safe. Thank you!
Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I'd like to talk about how to protect ourselves in the flood.
Firstly, we should often watch the news about the flood during the rainy season. We should make preparations like water, food and medicine before the disaster comes. Secondly, when there is a flood, we must move to higher places at once and stay there to wait for rescue. Remember not to swim in the floodwater. If the flood washes us away, we should keep calm. We can catch something made of wood and it can help us get out of water.
By understanding how to react during disasters and preparing in advance, we can face natural threats with more confidence. I hope these tips can help you stay safe. Thank you!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题类书面表达题，要求围绕“洪水自救”展开写作，需包含表格中给出的所有提示要点（灾前关注洪水新闻、准备水/食物/药品；灾中转移至高处、不要游泳），并补充至少1个合理的自救要点，词数不少于70，开头已给出。解题时需先梳理结构，将内容分为灾前准备、灾中应对两部分，用连接词串联，确保要点齐全、语句通顺。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 明确写作框架：分为“灾前准备”和“灾中应对”两部分，对应表格的两个板块；2. 覆盖所有提示要点：灾前部分写“关注洪水新闻、准备水/食物/药品”，灾中部分写“立即转移至高处、不要在洪水中游泳”；3. 补充1个合理要点（如：若被洪水冲走，可抓住木质漂浮物等待救援）；4. 使用firstly、secondly等连接词使逻辑清晰；5. 结尾总结，确保词数达标，符合书面表达要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I'd like to talk about how to protect ourselves in the flood.
Firstly, we should often watch the news about the flood during the rainy season. We should make preparations like water, food and medicine before the disaster comes. Secondly, when there is a flood, we must move to higher places at once and stay there to wait for rescue. Remember not to swim in the floodwater. If the flood washes us away, we should keep calm. We can catch something made of wood and it can help us get out of water.
By understanding how to react during disasters and preparing in advance, we can face natural threats with more confidence. I hope these tips can help you stay safe. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达，话题写作，灾害防护
【点评】
本题贴近生活实际，考查学生的话题写作能力，要求结合给定提示拓展内容，既注重基础要点的覆盖，又考查合理拓展的能力，是常见的初中英语书面表达题型。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语话题类书面表达题，要求围绕“洪水自救”展开写作，需包含表格中给出的所有提示要点（灾前关注洪水新闻、准备水/食物/药品；灾中转移至高处、不要游泳），并补充至少1个合理的自救要点，词数不少于70，开头已给出。解题时需先梳理结构，将内容分为灾前准备、灾中应对两部分，用连接词串联，确保要点齐全、语句通顺。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 明确写作框架：分为“灾前准备”和“灾中应对”两部分，对应表格的两个板块；2. 覆盖所有提示要点：灾前部分写“关注洪水新闻、准备水/食物/药品”，灾中部分写“立即转移至高处、不要在洪水中游泳”；3. 补充1个合理要点（如：若被洪水冲走，可抓住木质漂浮物等待救援）；4. 使用firstly、secondly等连接词使逻辑清晰；5. 结尾总结，确保词数达标，符合书面表达要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I'd like to talk about how to protect ourselves in the flood.
Firstly, we should often watch the news about the flood during the rainy season. We should make preparations like water, food and medicine before the disaster comes. Secondly, when there is a flood, we must move to higher places at once and stay there to wait for rescue. Remember not to swim in the floodwater. If the flood washes us away, we should keep calm. We can catch something made of wood and it can help us get out of water.
By understanding how to react during disasters and preparing in advance, we can face natural threats with more confidence. I hope these tips can help you stay safe. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达，话题写作，灾害防护
【点评】
本题贴近生活实际，考查学生的话题写作能力，要求结合给定提示拓展内容，既注重基础要点的覆盖，又考查合理拓展的能力，是常见的初中英语书面表达题型。
【难度系数】
0.5
