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学校是我们成长的地方,良好的同学关系能让校园生活更美好。请你以“Getting Along with Classmates”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对与同学相处的看法。
要点:1. 你认为与同学相处融洽重要吗?为什么?
2. 你平时和同学相处的方式(如互相帮助、尊重他人、学会倾听等)。
3. 呼吁大家友好相处,共建和谐校园。
要求:词数80-100。
Getting Along with Classmates
审题指导:
1.体裁:议论文 2.时态:以一般现在时为主 3.人称:第一人称
写作框架:
优秀范文:
亮点词块
①get along well with…与……相处融洽
②in trouble 处于困境;有麻烦
③cheering them up 使他们振作起来
④full of 充满;装满
高分句子
⑤ We often study and play together, which makes our friendship stronger.
(which 引导非限定性定语从句)我们经常一起学习、相伴玩耍,这让我们的友谊更加深厚。
学校是我们成长的地方,良好的同学关系能让校园生活更美好。请你以“Getting Along with Classmates”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对与同学相处的看法。
要点:1. 你认为与同学相处融洽重要吗?为什么?
2. 你平时和同学相处的方式(如互相帮助、尊重他人、学会倾听等)。
3. 呼吁大家友好相处,共建和谐校园。
要求:词数80-100。
Getting Along with Classmates
审题指导:
1.体裁:议论文 2.时态:以一般现在时为主 3.人称:第一人称
写作框架:
优秀范文:
亮点词块
①get along well with…与……相处融洽
②in trouble 处于困境;有麻烦
③cheering them up 使他们振作起来
④full of 充满;装满
高分句子
⑤ We often study and play together, which makes our friendship stronger.
(which 引导非限定性定语从句)我们经常一起学习、相伴玩耍,这让我们的友谊更加深厚。
答案
Getting Along with Classmates
It's very important to get along well with classmates. Good relationships make our school life happier and easier. When we help each other with studies or problems, we can learn and grow together.
To get along well with classmates, I always respect others and listen carefully when they talk. I also try to help them when they are in trouble, like sharing notes or cheering them up when they are sad. We often study and play together, which makes our friendship stronger.
Let's be kind and friendly to everyone. A harmonious class will make our school life full of joy.
It's very important to get along well with classmates. Good relationships make our school life happier and easier. When we help each other with studies or problems, we can learn and grow together.
To get along well with classmates, I always respect others and listen carefully when they talk. I also try to help them when they are in trouble, like sharing notes or cheering them up when they are sad. We often study and play together, which makes our friendship stronger.
Let's be kind and friendly to everyone. A harmonious class will make our school life full of joy.
解析
【分析】这是一篇英语议论文写作题，要求以“Getting Along with Classmates”为题，围绕三个指定要点完成短文。首先需明确体裁为议论文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称采用第一人称。第一步要先表明与同学相处融洽的重要性并说明原因；第二步要结合自身实际，写出具体的相处方式，可运用题目给出的亮点词块；第三步要发出友好相处的呼吁，共建和谐校园，同时注意词数控制在80-100之间，适当运用高分句式提升作文质量。
【解析】首先点明与同学相处融洽的重要性及原因：It's very important to get along well with classmates. Good relationships make our school life happier and easier. When we help each other with studies or problems, we can learn and grow together. 接着阐述自身与同学的相处方式，运用亮点词块：To get along well with classmates, I always respect others and listen carefully when they talk. I also try to help them when they are in trouble, like sharing notes or cheering them up when they are sad. We often study and play together, which makes our friendship stronger. 最后发出呼吁：Let's be kind and friendly to everyone. A harmonious class will make our school life full of joy.
【答案】Getting Along with Classmates
It's very important to get along well with classmates. Good relationships make our school life happier and easier. When we help each other with studies or problems, we can learn and grow together.
To get along well with classmates, I always respect others and listen carefully when they talk. I also try to help them when they are in trouble, like sharing notes or cheering them up when they are sad. We often study and play together, which makes our friendship stronger.
Let's be kind and friendly to everyone. A harmonious class will make our school life full of joy.
【知识点】英语议论文写作、英语常用短语运用、英语定语从句运用
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求的三个要点，结构清晰、逻辑连贯；运用了题目给出的亮点词块，还使用了which引导的非限定性定语从句这一高分句式，符合词数要求，内容充实自然，符合初中英语写作的优秀标准。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】首先点明与同学相处融洽的重要性及原因：It's very important to get along well with classmates. Good relationships make our school life happier and easier. When we help each other with studies or problems, we can learn and grow together. 接着阐述自身与同学的相处方式，运用亮点词块：To get along well with classmates, I always respect others and listen carefully when they talk. I also try to help them when they are in trouble, like sharing notes or cheering them up when they are sad. We often study and play together, which makes our friendship stronger. 最后发出呼吁：Let's be kind and friendly to everyone. A harmonious class will make our school life full of joy.
【答案】Getting Along with Classmates
It's very important to get along well with classmates. Good relationships make our school life happier and easier. When we help each other with studies or problems, we can learn and grow together.
To get along well with classmates, I always respect others and listen carefully when they talk. I also try to help them when they are in trouble, like sharing notes or cheering them up when they are sad. We often study and play together, which makes our friendship stronger.
Let's be kind and friendly to everyone. A harmonious class will make our school life full of joy.
【知识点】英语议论文写作、英语常用短语运用、英语定语从句运用
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求的三个要点，结构清晰、逻辑连贯；运用了题目给出的亮点词块，还使用了which引导的非限定性定语从句这一高分句式，符合词数要求，内容充实自然，符合初中英语写作的优秀标准。
【难度系数】0.7
