2026年名校课堂八年级英语上册人教版湖北专版第86页答案
假如你是李想,你校正在举办以“我是料理达人”为主题的英语征文大赛。请你根据以下图片提示,写一篇80词左右的英语短文,跟大家分享一下制作水果沙拉的过程。

▶▶审作文题
1.文体:
说明文

2.人称:
第二人称

3.时态:
一般现在时

4.写作要点:
描述制作水果沙拉的过程

▶▶搭建框架
(温馨提示:请先完成下面的写作提纲)

▶▶小试身手
Fruit salad is not only healthy but also delicious. Now let me show you how to make it.


To make fruit salad, you need to have some yogurt and some fruit you like. For example, you can buy an orange, an apple, a banana and some strawberries. First, wash the apple and strawberries, and peel the banana and the orange.


Then, cut the fruit into pieces and put them into a bowl. Finally, pour the yogurt into the bowl and mix it with the fruit pieces. Make sure to mix them well.


Now it's time to enjoy it.


How simple it is to make fruit salad! Why not have a try?





答案

▶▶审作文题
1. 说明文
2. 第二人称
3. 一般现在时
4. 描述制作水果沙拉的过程
▶▶搭建框架
Beginning: Lead into the topic: How to make fruit salad
Body: Describe how to make fruit salad
Ending: Express your feeling
▶▶小试身手
【基础版】
One possible version:
Fruit salad is healthy and delicious. Do you know how to make it?
To make fruit salad, you need to have some yogurt and some fruit you like. For example, you can buy an orange, an apple, a banana and some strawberries. First, wash the apple and strawberries, and peel the banana and the orange. Then, cut the fruit into pieces and put them into a bowl. Finally, pour the yogurt into the bowl and mix it with the fruit pieces. You must mix them well. Now you can enjoy it.
It's quite simple to make fruit salad. You can have a try.
【提升版】
One possible version:
Fruit salad is not only healthy but also delicious. Now let me show you how to make it.
To make fruit salad, you need to have some yogurt and some fruit you like. For example, you can buy an orange, an apple, a banana and some strawberries. First, wash the apple and strawberries, and peel the banana and the orange. Then, cut the fruit into pieces and put them into a bowl. Finally, pour the yogurt into the bowl and mix it with the fruit pieces. Make sure to mix them well. Now it's time to enjoy it.
How simple it is to make fruit salad! Why not have a try?

解析

【分析】
这是一道英语征文写作题,解题分三步:1.审题:明确文体为说明文,人称用第二人称,时态为一般现在时,写作要点是描述制作水果沙拉的过程;2.搭建框架:分为开头引入制作水果沙拉的话题、主体详细说明制作步骤、结尾表达制作感受;3.撰写短文:用First、Then、Finally等连接词清晰呈现步骤,控制词数在80左右,语言简洁通顺。
【解析】
先通过审题确定写作核心要素:文体为说明文,人称第二人称,时态一般现在时,写作核心是描述水果沙拉的制作过程;再搭建“引入话题-说明步骤-表达感受”的三段式框架;最后按框架,结合所需材料(水果、酸奶)和具体操作(洗水果、切水果、加酸奶搅拌),用连接词串联内容,完成符合要求的短文。
【答案】
▶▶审作文题
1. 说明文
2. 第二人称
3. 一般现在时
4. 描述制作水果沙拉的过程
▶▶搭建框架
Beginning: Lead into the topic: How to make fruit salad
Body: Describe how to make fruit salad
Ending: Express your feeling
▶▶小试身手
【基础版】
One possible version:
Fruit salad is healthy and delicious. Do you know how to make it?
To make fruit salad, you need to have some yogurt and some fruit you like. For example, you can buy an orange, an apple, a banana and some strawberries. First, wash the apple and strawberries, and peel the banana and the orange. Then, cut the fruit into pieces and put them into a bowl. Finally, pour the yogurt into the bowl and mix it with the fruit pieces. You must mix them well. Now you can enjoy it.
It's quite simple to make fruit salad. You can have a try.
【提升版】
One possible version:
Fruit salad is not only healthy but also delicious. Now let me show you how to make it.
To make fruit salad, you need to have some yogurt and some fruit you like. For example, you can buy an orange, an apple, a banana and some strawberries. First, wash the apple and strawberries, and peel the banana and the orange. Then, cut the fruit into pieces and put them into a bowl. Finally, pour the yogurt into the bowl and mix it with the fruit pieces. Make sure to mix them well. Now it's time to enjoy it.
How simple it is to make fruit salad! Why not have a try?
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语说明文写作、英语写作技巧
【点评】本题以贴近生活的“料理达人”为主题,考察学生英语写作的审题、框架搭建及语言表达能力,难度适中,能有效检验学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6