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假如你是Alice，新学期你认识了一名来自中国的同学王琳，并且你们成了好朋友。请你根据下面的信息提示，以“My Good Friend”为题，写一篇60词左右的英语短文，介绍一下王琳的情况。
注意:1. 词数100左右,题目已给出,不计入总词数;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇:term 学期
My Good Friend
注意:1. 词数100左右,题目已给出,不计入总词数;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇:term 学期
My Good Friend
I'm Alice. I have a new good friend this new term. Her name is Wang Lin. She is twelve years old. She comes from Beijing, China, but now she lives in London with her family.
Wang Lin has a cute pet cat. Its name is Mimi and it is all white. She loves Mimi very much.
She has two great hobbies. She likes listening to music in her free time, and she is good at singing songs too. When we finish school, we often listen to music together.
Wang Lin is kind and friendly. I am happy to have such a nice friend.
答案
One possible version:
My Good Friend
I'm Alice. I have a new good friend this new term. Her name is Wang Lin. She is twelve years old. She comes from Beijing, China, but now she lives in London with her family.
Wang Lin has a cute pet cat. Its name is Mimi and it is all white. She loves Mimi very much.
She has two great hobbies. She likes listening to music in her free time, and she is good at singing songs too. When we finish school, we often listen to music together.
Wang Lin is kind and friendly. I am happy to have such a nice friend.
My Good Friend
I'm Alice. I have a new good friend this new term. Her name is Wang Lin. She is twelve years old. She comes from Beijing, China, but now she lives in London with her family.
Wang Lin has a cute pet cat. Its name is Mimi and it is all white. She loves Mimi very much.
She has two great hobbies. She likes listening to music in her free time, and she is good at singing songs too. When we finish school, we often listen to music together.
Wang Lin is kind and friendly. I am happy to have such a nice friend.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以Alice的身份写介绍好友王琳的英语短文，需先明确写作框架：开头点明身份与新朋友，接着依次介绍王琳的基本信息（姓名、年龄、籍贯、居住地）、宠物情况、爱好，最后补充与自己的互动或评价，确保内容完整、语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：说明自己是Alice，介绍新学期认识的好友是王琳；
2. 基本信息：依次写出王琳的年龄（12岁）、来自中国北京、现居伦敦；
3. 宠物：介绍她的宠物猫Mimi，是白色的；
4. 爱好：写出她的爱好是听音乐、唱歌，补充和自己放学后一起听音乐的细节；
5. 结尾：评价王琳友好，表达拥有这个朋友的开心，使文章连贯自然。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Good Friend
I'm Alice. I have a new good friend this new term. Her name is Wang Lin. She is twelve years old. She comes from Beijing, China, but now she lives in London with her family.
Wang Lin has a cute pet cat. Its name is Mimi and it is all white. She loves Mimi very much.
She has two great hobbies. She likes listening to music in her free time, and she is good at singing songs too. When we finish school, we often listen to music together.
Wang Lin is kind and friendly. I am happy to have such a nice friend.
【知识点】
英语写作、介绍类短文
【点评】
本题考查学生整合信息并运用英语表达的能力，要求结合给定信息适当拓展细节，使短文连贯完整，符合初中英语写作的基础要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以Alice的身份写介绍好友王琳的英语短文，需先明确写作框架：开头点明身份与新朋友，接着依次介绍王琳的基本信息（姓名、年龄、籍贯、居住地）、宠物情况、爱好，最后补充与自己的互动或评价，确保内容完整、语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：说明自己是Alice，介绍新学期认识的好友是王琳；
2. 基本信息：依次写出王琳的年龄（12岁）、来自中国北京、现居伦敦；
3. 宠物：介绍她的宠物猫Mimi，是白色的；
4. 爱好：写出她的爱好是听音乐、唱歌，补充和自己放学后一起听音乐的细节；
5. 结尾：评价王琳友好，表达拥有这个朋友的开心，使文章连贯自然。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Good Friend
I'm Alice. I have a new good friend this new term. Her name is Wang Lin. She is twelve years old. She comes from Beijing, China, but now she lives in London with her family.
Wang Lin has a cute pet cat. Its name is Mimi and it is all white. She loves Mimi very much.
She has two great hobbies. She likes listening to music in her free time, and she is good at singing songs too. When we finish school, we often listen to music together.
Wang Lin is kind and friendly. I am happy to have such a nice friend.
【知识点】
英语写作、介绍类短文
【点评】
本题考查学生整合信息并运用英语表达的能力，要求结合给定信息适当拓展细节，使短文连贯完整，符合初中英语写作的基础要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
