2026年上海作业五年级英语上册沪教版五四制第36页答案
Ⅸ. Writing(写作)5%
请以“My plant poster”为题,写一篇不少于50词的短文。
要求:1. 语句通顺,书写规范。
2. 必须包含以下信息:介绍你最喜欢的一种神奇植物。描述植物的外形、生长环境和特殊特征等。





答案

参考范文:
My plant poster
Look! This is the green ivy. It has long and soft stems,and its leaves are green, even in cold weather. It looks like a green curtain hanging down when it grows well. It is very easy to grow. It doesn't need too much water or sunlight. It is strong and beautiful. It helps purify the air in my home and makes my room more lively. I love my green ivy very much,and I will take good care of it every day.

解析

【分析】
首先明确写作主题为“My plant poster”,需紧扣要求完成:选定一种神奇植物,依次介绍其外形、生长环境、特殊特征,保证语句通顺、书写规范且词数不少于50。写作思路为:先点明介绍的植物名称,再分述外形特点、生长条件、特殊作用,最后表达喜爱与养护意愿,贴合海报的介绍性风格。
【解析】
写作步骤:
1. 拟定标题“My plant poster”;
2. 开头引出介绍的植物(如常春藤);
3. 描述外形:长而柔软的茎、绿色叶片;
4. 说明生长条件:易养护,需水量和光照少;
5. 阐述特殊特征:净化空气,让房间更生动;
6. 结尾表达喜爱与养护决心,确保词数达标、语句通顺。
【答案】
My plant poster
Look! This is the green ivy. It has long and soft stems,and its leaves are green, even in cold weather. It looks like a green curtain hanging down when it grows well. It is very easy to grow. It doesn't need too much water or sunlight. It is strong and beautiful. It helps purify the air in my home and makes my room more lively. I love my green ivy very much,and I will take good care of it every day.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、植物相关英语表达
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求,涵盖了植物的外形、生长环境、特殊特征等指定信息,语句通顺,结构清晰,符合海报的介绍性文体要求,词数达标。
【难度系数】
0.6