【小试牛刀】
人们常说:“没有规矩,不成方圆。”为了让同学们保持身心健康,能更好地学习,学校制定了相应的规章制度,同学们遵规守纪也成为一种必然。请你以“Our school rules”为题写一篇英文演讲稿,结合自身实际情况和以下内容,谈谈你们的校规,并呼吁同学们遵守规则。

写作要求:
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
(2)不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;
(3)词数:80词左右(作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone. Today I want to talk about our school rules.
Thanks for listening!
人们常说:“没有规矩,不成方圆。”为了让同学们保持身心健康,能更好地学习,学校制定了相应的规章制度,同学们遵规守纪也成为一种必然。请你以“Our school rules”为题写一篇英文演讲稿,结合自身实际情况和以下内容,谈谈你们的校规,并呼吁同学们遵守规则。
写作要求:
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
(2)不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;
(3)词数:80词左右(作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone. Today I want to talk about our school rules.
Thanks for listening!
答案
Possible version:
Hello, everyone. Today I want to talk about our school rules. As an old saying goes, "Nothing can be done without norms or standards." School rules can provide us with a friendly environment for study. School rules can also help us live safely and study well in school. Here are some important rules in our school.
To begin with, we shouldn't bring smartphones and snacks to school. Also, we should listen carefully in class and respect teachers. In addition, we should finish our homework and hand it in on time.
To sum up, I call on all students to follow the school rules.
Thanks for listening!
Hello, everyone. Today I want to talk about our school rules. As an old saying goes, "Nothing can be done without norms or standards." School rules can provide us with a friendly environment for study. School rules can also help us live safely and study well in school. Here are some important rules in our school.
To begin with, we shouldn't bring smartphones and snacks to school. Also, we should listen carefully in class and respect teachers. In addition, we should finish our homework and hand it in on time.
To sum up, I call on all students to follow the school rules.
Thanks for listening!
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求:以“Our school rules”为题写英文演讲稿,开头和结尾已给出,需结合思维导图的三个核心部分(对校规的看法、校规内容、呼吁遵守),适当拓展信息,词数80左右,不得出现真实学校和姓名。解题思路:第一步,承接已给开头,阐述对校规的看法,说明校规的作用;第二步,列举校规,结合思维导图内容并适当补充合理校规;第三步,呼吁同学们遵守校规,完成演讲稿。
【解析】
根据题目要求和思维导图,按以下步骤写作:
1. 衔接开头:承接已给开头,引用俗语说明校规的重要性,阐述校规能提供良好学习环境、助力学习生活;
2. 列举校规:结合思维导图的禁止携带手机、零食,补充课堂认真听讲、尊重老师、按时交作业等合理校规;
3. 结尾呼吁:呼吁全体同学遵守校规,完成演讲稿。注意控制词数,语言通顺,符合演讲稿语气。
【答案】
Hello, everyone. Today I want to talk about our school rules. As an old saying goes, "Nothing can be done without norms or standards." School rules can provide us with a friendly environment for study. School rules can also help us live safely and study well in school. Here are some important rules in our school.
To begin with, we shouldn't bring smartphones and snacks to school. Also, we should listen carefully in class and respect teachers. In addition, we should finish our homework and hand it in on time.
To sum up, I call on all students to follow the school rules.
Thanks for listening!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、校规话题表达、演讲稿格式
【点评】
本文严格遵循题目要求,结构清晰,覆盖思维导图所有要点,适当拓展了课堂纪律、作业要求等内容,语言通顺,符合演讲稿语气,词数达标,是一篇符合要求的习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确题目要求:以“Our school rules”为题写英文演讲稿,开头和结尾已给出,需结合思维导图的三个核心部分(对校规的看法、校规内容、呼吁遵守),适当拓展信息,词数80左右,不得出现真实学校和姓名。解题思路:第一步,承接已给开头,阐述对校规的看法,说明校规的作用;第二步,列举校规,结合思维导图内容并适当补充合理校规;第三步,呼吁同学们遵守校规,完成演讲稿。
【解析】
根据题目要求和思维导图,按以下步骤写作:
1. 衔接开头:承接已给开头,引用俗语说明校规的重要性,阐述校规能提供良好学习环境、助力学习生活;
2. 列举校规:结合思维导图的禁止携带手机、零食,补充课堂认真听讲、尊重老师、按时交作业等合理校规;
3. 结尾呼吁:呼吁全体同学遵守校规,完成演讲稿。注意控制词数,语言通顺,符合演讲稿语气。
【答案】
Hello, everyone. Today I want to talk about our school rules. As an old saying goes, "Nothing can be done without norms or standards." School rules can provide us with a friendly environment for study. School rules can also help us live safely and study well in school. Here are some important rules in our school.
To begin with, we shouldn't bring smartphones and snacks to school. Also, we should listen carefully in class and respect teachers. In addition, we should finish our homework and hand it in on time.
To sum up, I call on all students to follow the school rules.
Thanks for listening!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、校规话题表达、演讲稿格式
【点评】
本文严格遵循题目要求,结构清晰,覆盖思维导图所有要点,适当拓展了课堂纪律、作业要求等内容,语言通顺,符合演讲稿语气,词数达标,是一篇符合要求的习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
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