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二、书面表达。
你们班上设立了一个“心语信箱”，老师让大家把成长的烦恼写在纸条上，都投入信箱后，每人抽一张并根据自己的经验进行英语的书面回复，给出具体建议。
提示词：come to... for help, useful advice, keep on doing
要求：
1. 写一篇短文，词数不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
Dear ,
I’m sorry to hear that you are in trouble. But life is not only about happiness.
Yours,
你们班上设立了一个“心语信箱”，老师让大家把成长的烦恼写在纸条上，都投入信箱后，每人抽一张并根据自己的经验进行英语的书面回复，给出具体建议。
提示词：come to... for help, useful advice, keep on doing
要求：
1. 写一篇短文，词数不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
Dear ,
I’m sorry to hear that you are in trouble. But life is not only about happiness.
Yours,
答案
Dear Amy,
I'm sorry to hear that you are in trouble. But life is not only about happiness. I didn't do well in math at first, either. And exams always brought me lots of sadness. As a result, I was afraid of studying math. Later, I went to the math teacher for help. She gave me some useful advice. She also told me not to give up because nothing is impossible if I keep on trying. I was moved and worked harder than before. Finally, I succeeded. Besides, previewing lessons carefully before class is very helpful to understand the lesson better. At last, don't forget to do more exercises after class. That can improve your math quickly.
In a word, don't be afraid of any difficulty. We're always here to help you. I'm sure you'll make it with confidence and hard work.
Yours,
Lily
I'm sorry to hear that you are in trouble. But life is not only about happiness. I didn't do well in math at first, either. And exams always brought me lots of sadness. As a result, I was afraid of studying math. Later, I went to the math teacher for help. She gave me some useful advice. She also told me not to give up because nothing is impossible if I keep on trying. I was moved and worked harder than before. Finally, I succeeded. Besides, previewing lessons carefully before class is very helpful to understand the lesson better. At last, don't forget to do more exercises after class. That can improve your math quickly.
In a word, don't be afraid of any difficulty. We're always here to help you. I'm sure you'll make it with confidence and hard work.
Yours,
Lily
解析
【分析】
本题为英语建议类书信写作，解题思路如下：1. 确定收信人（如Amy），让书信有明确针对性；2. 用自身类似成长烦恼（如数学学习困难）开头，与对方共情，自然引出建议；3. 必须运用提示词：come to... for help（如向老师求助）、useful advice（如他人给出的有用建议）、keep on doing（如坚持努力）；4. 补充具体可行的建议（如课前预习、课后练习）丰富内容；5. 结尾鼓励对方，遵循书信格式，确保词数不少于80。
【解析】
写作时先承接给定开头句，结合自身学数学的经历与对方共鸣，接着运用提示词：went to math teacher for help（对应come to... for help）、some useful advice、keep on trying，补充具体建议（课前预习、课后多练习），最后总结鼓励并署名，保证语言流畅、符合书信格式，词数达标。
【答案】
Dear Amy,
I'm sorry to hear that you are in trouble. But life is not only about happiness. I didn't do well in math at first, either. And exams always brought me lots of sadness. As a result, I was afraid of studying math. Later, I went to the math teacher for help. She gave me some useful advice. She also told me not to give up because nothing is impossible if I keep on trying. I was moved and worked harder than before. Finally, I succeeded. Besides, previewing lessons carefully before class is very helpful to understand the lesson better. At last, don't forget to do more exercises after class. That can improve your math quickly.
In a word, don't be afraid of any difficulty. We're always here to help you. I'm sure you'll make it with confidence and hard work.
Yours,
Lily
【知识点】
英语书信写作、英语建议类书面表达、提示词运用
【点评】
本题贴近学生生活实际，要求结合自身经历给出具体建议，考查学生的语言组织能力、提示词运用能力和解决实际问题的能力，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，需注意书信格式和内容的连贯性。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语建议类书信写作，解题思路如下：1. 确定收信人（如Amy），让书信有明确针对性；2. 用自身类似成长烦恼（如数学学习困难）开头，与对方共情，自然引出建议；3. 必须运用提示词：come to... for help（如向老师求助）、useful advice（如他人给出的有用建议）、keep on doing（如坚持努力）；4. 补充具体可行的建议（如课前预习、课后练习）丰富内容；5. 结尾鼓励对方，遵循书信格式，确保词数不少于80。
【解析】
写作时先承接给定开头句，结合自身学数学的经历与对方共鸣，接着运用提示词：went to math teacher for help（对应come to... for help）、some useful advice、keep on trying，补充具体建议（课前预习、课后多练习），最后总结鼓励并署名，保证语言流畅、符合书信格式，词数达标。
【答案】
Dear Amy,
I'm sorry to hear that you are in trouble. But life is not only about happiness. I didn't do well in math at first, either. And exams always brought me lots of sadness. As a result, I was afraid of studying math. Later, I went to the math teacher for help. She gave me some useful advice. She also told me not to give up because nothing is impossible if I keep on trying. I was moved and worked harder than before. Finally, I succeeded. Besides, previewing lessons carefully before class is very helpful to understand the lesson better. At last, don't forget to do more exercises after class. That can improve your math quickly.
In a word, don't be afraid of any difficulty. We're always here to help you. I'm sure you'll make it with confidence and hard work.
Yours,
Lily
【知识点】
英语书信写作、英语建议类书面表达、提示词运用
【点评】
本题贴近学生生活实际，要求结合自身经历给出具体建议，考查学生的语言组织能力、提示词运用能力和解决实际问题的能力，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，需注意书信格式和内容的连贯性。
【难度系数】
0.5
