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运动是保持身体健康的一种重要方式，无论是跑步还是球类运动都可以起到很好的锻炼作用。请根据提示，谈一谈你最喜欢的一项运动。
内容提示:1. What's your favourite sport?
2. Who do you usually do sports with?
3. What did you learn from doing sports?
要求:1.包含提示中的内容,可适当增加细节;
2.用词准确,意思完整,表达通顺;
3.不少于80词。
My Favourite Sport
运动是保持身体健康的一种重要方式，无论是跑步还是球类运动都可以起到很好的锻炼作用。请根据提示，谈一谈你最喜欢的一项运动。
内容提示:1. What's your favourite sport?
2. Who do you usually do sports with?
3. What did you learn from doing sports?
要求:1.包含提示中的内容,可适当增加细节;
2.用词准确,意思完整,表达通顺;
3.不少于80词。
My Favourite Sport
My favourite sport is basketball. I play basketball not only for fun but also to keep fit.
My father is a big fan of basketball. I often watched him play in the gym when I was a kid. I became interested in basketball at the age of six.
On weekends, I sometimes practice basketball skills with my father. I don't play as well as he does, but he encourages me not to give up.
Practice makes perfect. With lots of practice, I get better at basketball day after day.
At school I often play basketball with my classmates after class.
Basketball shows me that the key to success is to keep playing hard.
答案
My Favourite Sport
My favourite sport is basketball. I play basketball not only for fun but also to keep fit.
My father is a big fan of basketball. I often watched him play in the gym when I was a kid. I became interested in basketball at the age of six. On weekends, I sometimes practice basketball skills with my father. I don't play as well as he does, but he encourages me not to give up. Practice makes perfect. With lots of practice, I get better at basketball day after day. At school I often play basketball with my classmates after class.
Basketball shows me that the key to success is to keep playing hard.
My favourite sport is basketball. I play basketball not only for fun but also to keep fit.
My father is a big fan of basketball. I often watched him play in the gym when I was a kid. I became interested in basketball at the age of six. On weekends, I sometimes practice basketball skills with my father. I don't play as well as he does, but he encourages me not to give up. Practice makes perfect. With lots of practice, I get better at basketball day after day. At school I often play basketball with my classmates after class.
Basketball shows me that the key to success is to keep playing hard.
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题写作题，要求围绕“最喜欢的运动”展开，需涵盖三个核心提示：①最喜欢的运动项目；②常一起运动的对象；③从运动中获得的感悟。解题思路为：先选定具体运动项目，再围绕三个提示补充相关细节，确保内容完整、语言通顺，满足不少于80词的要求。
【解析】1. 开篇点明最喜欢的运动是篮球，说明运动兼具娱乐与健身的意义；2. 结合提示2，讲述与父亲的渊源（童年受父亲影响爱上篮球，周末和父亲练球，学校课后与同学打球）；3. 结合提示3，总结从篮球中领悟的道理（成功需坚持努力）；4. 调整语句使表达流畅，检查内容是否覆盖所有提示，确保字数达标。
【答案】My Favourite Sport
My favourite sport is basketball. I play basketball not only for fun but also to keep fit.
My father is a big fan of basketball. I often watched him play in the gym when I was a kid. I became interested in basketball at the age of six. On weekends, I sometimes practice basketball skills with my father. I don't play as well as he does, but he encourages me not to give up. Practice makes perfect. With lots of practice, I get better at basketball day after day. At school I often play basketball with my classmates after class.
Basketball shows me that the key to success is to keep playing hard.
【知识点】英语话题写作、英语句子表达
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，细节充实，主题积极向上，语言通顺自然，符合初中英语写作的规范要求，是一篇优秀的话题写作范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 开篇点明最喜欢的运动是篮球，说明运动兼具娱乐与健身的意义；2. 结合提示2，讲述与父亲的渊源（童年受父亲影响爱上篮球，周末和父亲练球，学校课后与同学打球）；3. 结合提示3，总结从篮球中领悟的道理（成功需坚持努力）；4. 调整语句使表达流畅，检查内容是否覆盖所有提示，确保字数达标。
【答案】My Favourite Sport
My favourite sport is basketball. I play basketball not only for fun but also to keep fit.
My father is a big fan of basketball. I often watched him play in the gym when I was a kid. I became interested in basketball at the age of six. On weekends, I sometimes practice basketball skills with my father. I don't play as well as he does, but he encourages me not to give up. Practice makes perfect. With lots of practice, I get better at basketball day after day. At school I often play basketball with my classmates after class.
Basketball shows me that the key to success is to keep playing hard.
【知识点】英语话题写作、英语句子表达
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，细节充实，主题积极向上，语言通顺自然，符合初中英语写作的规范要求，是一篇优秀的话题写作范文。
【难度系数】0.6
