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五、书面表达。
➡写作指导见《综合素养评价》卷P25
废物利用在环境保护中发挥着重要作用。在日常生活中,你可以重复利用哪些物品? 你打算如何“变废为宝”? 请联系实际写一篇短文,不少于60词。
要求:1.时态准确,标点恰当,语句通顺,书写规范。2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
There are a lot of things we can reuse in our life.
➡写作指导见《综合素养评价》卷P25
废物利用在环境保护中发挥着重要作用。在日常生活中,你可以重复利用哪些物品? 你打算如何“变废为宝”? 请联系实际写一篇短文,不少于60词。
要求:1.时态准确,标点恰当,语句通顺,书写规范。2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
There are a lot of things we can reuse in our life.
We can reuse old clothes, plastic bottles, cardboard boxes and so on. We can make small flower pots with plastic bottles.
We can put our books and pens in the cardboard boxes. We can put some water in an empty bottle, and then we can keep fish in it.
We can make bags and dolls with old clothes.
Using old things again makes our life better and better.
答案
【写作指导】
1. 主题:废物利用
2. 写作类型:说明文
3. 人称:第一人称
4. 框架:
点明物品 We can reuse...
阐述具体方法 We can make...with...
阐述意义 Using old things again makes...
5. 注意:情态动词后动词的形式。
【参考范文】There are a lot of things we can reuse in our life. We can reuse old clothes, plastic bottles, card-board boxes and so on. We can make small flower pots with plastic bottles. We can put our books and pens in the cardboard boxes. We can put some water in an empty bottle, and then we can keep fish in it. We can make bags and dolls with old clothes. Using old things again makes our life better and better.
1. 主题:废物利用
2. 写作类型:说明文
3. 人称:第一人称
4. 框架:
点明物品 We can reuse...
阐述具体方法 We can make...with...
阐述意义 Using old things again makes...
5. 注意:情态动词后动词的形式。
【参考范文】There are a lot of things we can reuse in our life. We can reuse old clothes, plastic bottles, card-board boxes and so on. We can make small flower pots with plastic bottles. We can put our books and pens in the cardboard boxes. We can put some water in an empty bottle, and then we can keep fish in it. We can make bags and dolls with old clothes. Using old things again makes our life better and better.
解析
【分析】首先承接给定开头，列举日常生活中可重复利用的物品（如旧衣服、塑料瓶、纸箱等）；接着具体说明这些物品“变废为宝”的方法，比如用塑料瓶做花盆、纸箱收纳文具等；最后点明废物利用对生活的积极意义，全程使用一般现在时，确保语句通顺、符合字数要求。
【解析】按照写作框架：1. 承接开头点明可重复利用的物品；2. 具体阐述各类物品的再利用方式；3. 说明废物利用的意义，严格遵循时态要求，保证内容连贯、符合题目规定。
【答案】There are a lot of things we can reuse in our life. We can reuse old clothes, plastic bottles, cardboard boxes and so on. We can make small flower pots with plastic bottles. We can put our books and pens in the cardboard boxes. We can put some water in an empty bottle, and then we can keep fish in it. We can make bags and dolls with old clothes. Using old things again makes our life better and better.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般现在时、实用写作
【点评】本文围绕“废物利用”主题，结构清晰，内容贴近生活，时态准确，语句通顺，完全符合题目要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照写作框架：1. 承接开头点明可重复利用的物品；2. 具体阐述各类物品的再利用方式；3. 说明废物利用的意义，严格遵循时态要求，保证内容连贯、符合题目规定。
【答案】There are a lot of things we can reuse in our life. We can reuse old clothes, plastic bottles, cardboard boxes and so on. We can make small flower pots with plastic bottles. We can put our books and pens in the cardboard boxes. We can put some water in an empty bottle, and then we can keep fish in it. We can make bags and dolls with old clothes. Using old things again makes our life better and better.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般现在时、实用写作
【点评】本文围绕“废物利用”主题，结构清晰，内容贴近生活，时态准确，语句通顺，完全符合题目要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
