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[2026广东深圳期中]现在,几乎人人都拥有智能手机(smartphone)。智能手机在带给我们便利的同时,也造成了一些问题。请根据表格的内容,以“How to use smartphones properly?”为题写一篇短文。
要求:1.词数:100左右;
2.可以适当发挥,使短文连贯,通顺;
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分;
4.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to use smartphones properly?
Nowadays, nearly everyone has a smartphone.
[2026广东深圳期中]现在,几乎人人都拥有智能手机(smartphone)。智能手机在带给我们便利的同时,也造成了一些问题。请根据表格的内容,以“How to use smartphones properly?”为题写一篇短文。
要求:1.词数:100左右;
2.可以适当发挥,使短文连贯,通顺;
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分;
4.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to use smartphones properly?
Nowadays, nearly everyone has a smartphone.
It makes our life more convenient, but it also causes some problems.
On the one hand, there are some advantages. A smartphone is like a computer. We can do many things on it, such as searching for information, learning English, and so on. Besides, it is convenient for us to keep in touch with family members and friends. On the other hand, there are some disadvantages. Some students spend too much time playing phone games instead of studying. It is bad for their health and study. In addition, people talk less to others when they use their phones for too long. How to use the smartphone properly? In my opinion, we should control the time of using it. So for students, we should try to reduce the time of using smartphones to protect our health.
答案
【参考范文】
How to use smartphones properly?
Nowadays, nearly everyone has a smartphone. It makes our life more convenient, but it also causes some problems.
On the one hand, there are some advantages. A smartphone is like a computer. We can do many things on it, such as searching for information, learning English, and so on. Besides, it is convenient for us to keep in touch with family members and friends.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages. Some students spend too much time playing phone games instead of studying. It is bad for their health and study. In addition, people talk less to others when they use their phones for too long.
How to use the smartphone properly? In my opinion, we should control the time of using it. So for students, we should try to reduce the time of using smartphones to protect our health.
How to use smartphones properly?
Nowadays, nearly everyone has a smartphone. It makes our life more convenient, but it also causes some problems.
On the one hand, there are some advantages. A smartphone is like a computer. We can do many things on it, such as searching for information, learning English, and so on. Besides, it is convenient for us to keep in touch with family members and friends.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages. Some students spend too much time playing phone games instead of studying. It is bad for their health and study. In addition, people talk less to others when they use their phones for too long.
How to use the smartphone properly? In my opinion, we should control the time of using it. So for students, we should try to reduce the time of using smartphones to protect our health.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以“How to use smartphones properly?”为题写短文，开头已给出，需围绕智能手机的利弊展开，进而提出正确使用的方法，词数100左右，需语句连贯、符合要求。解题思路为：先承接开头点明智能手机的双重影响，再分别阐述其优点与缺点，最后给出合理使用的建议，确保内容紧扣主题，符合各项要求。
【解析】
首先承接开头说明智能手机带来便利的同时也引发问题；接着从正反两方面论述：优点包括方便搜索信息、学习知识、联系亲友；缺点是学生沉迷游戏影响学习与健康，过度使用减少人际交流；最后提出正确使用的建议，如控制使用时间，符合学生身份，确保内容完整、逻辑清晰。
【答案】
How to use smartphones properly?
Nowadays, nearly everyone has a smartphone. It makes our life more convenient, but it also causes some problems.
On the one hand, there are some advantages. A smartphone is like a computer. We can do many things on it, such as searching for information, learning English, and so on. Besides, it is convenient for us to keep in touch with family members and friends.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages. Some students spend too much time playing phone games instead of studying. It is bad for their health and study. In addition, people talk less to others when they use their phones for too long.
How to use the smartphone properly? In my opinion, we should control the time of using it. So for students, we should try to reduce the time of using smartphones to protect our health.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、词汇运用、语篇连贯
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，涵盖了智能手机的利弊及正确使用方法，符合词数要求，语言通顺，符合初中英语写作的规范。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以“How to use smartphones properly?”为题写短文，开头已给出，需围绕智能手机的利弊展开，进而提出正确使用的方法，词数100左右，需语句连贯、符合要求。解题思路为：先承接开头点明智能手机的双重影响，再分别阐述其优点与缺点，最后给出合理使用的建议，确保内容紧扣主题，符合各项要求。
【解析】
首先承接开头说明智能手机带来便利的同时也引发问题；接着从正反两方面论述：优点包括方便搜索信息、学习知识、联系亲友；缺点是学生沉迷游戏影响学习与健康，过度使用减少人际交流；最后提出正确使用的建议，如控制使用时间，符合学生身份，确保内容完整、逻辑清晰。
【答案】
How to use smartphones properly?
Nowadays, nearly everyone has a smartphone. It makes our life more convenient, but it also causes some problems.
On the one hand, there are some advantages. A smartphone is like a computer. We can do many things on it, such as searching for information, learning English, and so on. Besides, it is convenient for us to keep in touch with family members and friends.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages. Some students spend too much time playing phone games instead of studying. It is bad for their health and study. In addition, people talk less to others when they use their phones for too long.
How to use the smartphone properly? In my opinion, we should control the time of using it. So for students, we should try to reduce the time of using smartphones to protect our health.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、词汇运用、语篇连贯
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，涵盖了智能手机的利弊及正确使用方法，符合词数要求，语言通顺，符合初中英语写作的规范。
【难度系数】
0.6
