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假如你是来自山东的董军，你经常给在美国的笔友汤姆写信，这次，汤姆想了解中国的传统节日——春节，请根据以下信息提示，给他写一封信介绍春节。词数80左右。
提示:1. 简介:春节是中国重要的传统节日，一般在二月份，有时也在一月份。2. 准备:春节前大约一个月，人们就开始打扫屋子、购物、准备美食等。3. 活动:除夕夜，人们吃大餐、看春晚；大年初一，人们穿新衣，走亲访友，互道“新年好”。4. ……
[思路点拨]
1. 文体:应用文。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主。4. 要点提示:首先开门见山点明春节的重要性，然后具体描述人们的节前准备及庆祝活动，最后谈谈自己的感受。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Tom,
I’d like to tell you something about the Spring Festival.
Yours,
Dong Jun
实战练笔.夯实写作功底
假如你是来自山东的董军，你经常给在美国的笔友汤姆写信，这次，汤姆想了解中国的传统节日——春节，请根据以下信息提示，给他写一封信介绍春节。词数80左右。
提示:1. 简介:春节是中国重要的传统节日，一般在二月份，有时也在一月份。2. 准备:春节前大约一个月，人们就开始打扫屋子、购物、准备美食等。3. 活动:除夕夜，人们吃大餐、看春晚；大年初一，人们穿新衣，走亲访友，互道“新年好”。4. ……
[思路点拨]
1. 文体:应用文。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主。4. 要点提示:首先开门见山点明春节的重要性，然后具体描述人们的节前准备及庆祝活动，最后谈谈自己的感受。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Tom,
I’d like to tell you something about the Spring Festival.
It's a traditional festival in China. It is important to Chinese people. It usually comes in February, but sometimes in January.
About a month before it, people clean their houses, go shopping and cook delicious food to get ready for it.
They celebrate it with a big family dinner on the evening before the Spring Festival.
They enjoy the delicious food and watch a special TV programme.
On the day of the Spring Festival, people wear new clothes and visit their friends and family members. They say "Xin Nian Hao" to each other. People are very happy. I like the Spring Festival because I always have a great time.
Yours,
Dong Jun
答案
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'd like to tell you something about the Spring Festival. It's a traditional festival in China. It is important to Chinese people. It usually comes in February, but sometimes in January. About a month before it, people clean their houses, go shopping and cook delicious food to get ready for it. They celebrate it with a big family dinner on the evening before the Spring Festival. They enjoy the delicious food and watch a special TV programme. On the day of the Spring Festival, people wear new clothes and visit their friends and family members. They say "Xin Nian Hao" to each other. People are very happy. I like the Spring Festival because I always have a great time.
Yours,
Dong Jun
Dear Tom,
I'd like to tell you something about the Spring Festival. It's a traditional festival in China. It is important to Chinese people. It usually comes in February, but sometimes in January. About a month before it, people clean their houses, go shopping and cook delicious food to get ready for it. They celebrate it with a big family dinner on the evening before the Spring Festival. They enjoy the delicious food and watch a special TV programme. On the day of the Spring Festival, people wear new clothes and visit their friends and family members. They say "Xin Nian Hao" to each other. People are very happy. I like the Spring Festival because I always have a great time.
Yours,
Dong Jun
解析
【分析】这是一道英语书信写作题，要求给笔友汤姆介绍中国传统节日春节。解题思路：1. 明确文体为书信，开头已给出，需补充正文；2. 按照提示要点依次展开：先点明春节是中国重要传统节日及时间，再描述节前准备、节日当天的活动，最后表达自己对春节的喜爱；3. 注意使用一般现在时，人称以第三人称介绍节日、第一人称表达感受，确保语句通顺、要点齐全，词数符合要求。
【解析】首先承接开头，说明春节是中国重要传统节日，通常在二月，有时在一月；接着写节前一个月人们打扫房屋、购物、准备美食；然后描述除夕夜的活动：吃大餐、看特别的电视节目；再写大年初一的活动：穿新衣、走亲访友、互道“新年好”；最后表达自己喜欢春节因为能玩得开心，注意用词准确，符合书信格式，时态正确。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'd like to tell you something about the Spring Festival. It's a traditional festival in China. It is important to Chinese people. It usually comes in February, but sometimes in January. About a month before it, people clean their houses, go shopping and cook delicious food to get ready for it. They celebrate it with a big family dinner on the evening before the Spring Festival. They enjoy the delicious food and watch a special TV programme. On the day of the Spring Festival, people wear new clothes and visit their friends and family members. They say "Xin Nian Hao" to each other. People are very happy. I like the Spring Festival because I always have a great time.
Yours,
Dong Jun
【知识点】英语书信写作、节日话题英语表达、一般现在时运用
【点评】本题考查学生对中国传统节日的英语写作能力，要求涵盖所有提示要点，符合书信格式，语言通顺，难度适中，能帮助学生夯实节日相关的英语表达功底。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先承接开头，说明春节是中国重要传统节日，通常在二月，有时在一月；接着写节前一个月人们打扫房屋、购物、准备美食；然后描述除夕夜的活动：吃大餐、看特别的电视节目；再写大年初一的活动：穿新衣、走亲访友、互道“新年好”；最后表达自己喜欢春节因为能玩得开心，注意用词准确，符合书信格式，时态正确。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'd like to tell you something about the Spring Festival. It's a traditional festival in China. It is important to Chinese people. It usually comes in February, but sometimes in January. About a month before it, people clean their houses, go shopping and cook delicious food to get ready for it. They celebrate it with a big family dinner on the evening before the Spring Festival. They enjoy the delicious food and watch a special TV programme. On the day of the Spring Festival, people wear new clothes and visit their friends and family members. They say "Xin Nian Hao" to each other. People are very happy. I like the Spring Festival because I always have a great time.
Yours,
Dong Jun
【知识点】英语书信写作、节日话题英语表达、一般现在时运用
【点评】本题考查学生对中国传统节日的英语写作能力，要求涵盖所有提示要点，符合书信格式，语言通顺，难度适中，能帮助学生夯实节日相关的英语表达功底。
【难度系数】0.5
