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十二、写作。(共10分)
1.补充要点(每空1分,共2分)
同学们,我们学习了梦想这个单元,说说你的梦想是什么?你准备怎样来实现梦想?
I want to be
I
2.书面表达。(共8分)
国家卫健委在3月份宣布启动"体重管理年"三年行动。同学们,请以"How to keep
healthy"为题,围绕思维导图提示,展开写一写你将如何保持健康。
要求:1.单词拼写正确,语句通顺,时态正确、标点正确,书写规范。
2.内容需包含思维导图中的三个方面,可适当拓展。
3.60~70个单词(不包括已给单词)
How to keep healthy
More and more people want to have a healthy body. To keep healthy, I
1.补充要点(每空1分,共2分)
同学们,我们学习了梦想这个单元,说说你的梦想是什么?你准备怎样来实现梦想?
I want to be
a doctor
I
will study hard and read medical books in my free time
2.书面表达。(共8分)
国家卫健委在3月份宣布启动"体重管理年"三年行动。同学们,请以"How to keep
healthy"为题,围绕思维导图提示,展开写一写你将如何保持健康。
要求:1.单词拼写正确,语句通顺,时态正确、标点正确,书写规范。
2.内容需包含思维导图中的三个方面,可适当拓展。
3.60~70个单词(不包括已给单词)
How to keep healthy
More and more people want to have a healthy body. To keep healthy, I
will have good eating habits, like eating more fruits and vegetables. I'll keep regular living habits, such as going to bed early and getting up early. Also, I'll do sport often, such as running and jumping. Good habits can help me stay healthy.
答案
1. I want to be a doctor. To make it come
true, I'll study hard. I'll also read medical
books in my free time.（答案不唯一）
2. One possible version:
How to keep healthy
More and more people want to have a
healthy body. To keep healthy, I will have
good eating habits, like eating more fruits
and vegetables. I'll keep regular living
habits, such as going to bed early and
getting up early. Also, I'll do sport often,
such as running and jumping. Good habits
can help me stay healthy.
true, I'll study hard. I'll also read medical
books in my free time.（答案不唯一）
2. One possible version:
How to keep healthy
More and more people want to have a
healthy body. To keep healthy, I will have
good eating habits, like eating more fruits
and vegetables. I'll keep regular living
habits, such as going to bed early and
getting up early. Also, I'll do sport often,
such as running and jumping. Good habits
can help me stay healthy.
解析
【分析】
本题分为两部分，第一部分围绕“梦想”话题补充要点，需先确定合理的梦想职业，再写出实现梦想的具体措施，答案不唯一；第二部分以“How to keep healthy”为题写作，需结合思维导图的三个核心要点（饮食习惯、生活习惯、运动习惯）展开，适当拓展，注意字数、时态、语句通顺，符合英语写作规范。
【解析】
1. 补充要点：选择常见的梦想职业（如医生），用一般将来时写出实现梦想的具体行动，比如努力学习、阅读相关书籍，确保语法正确、语句通顺。
2. 书面表达：
（1）开头点明保持健康的重要性；
（2）围绕思维导图的三个方面展开：①饮食习惯：多吃蔬果等健康食物；②生活习惯：早睡早起，规律作息；③运动习惯：经常进行跑步等运动；
（3）结尾总结好习惯对健康的益处，控制字数在60-70词左右，时态以一般将来时为主，确保拼写、标点正确。
【答案】
1. I want to be a doctor. To make it come true, I'll study hard. I'll also read medical books in my free time.
2. One possible version:
How to keep healthy
More and more people want to have a healthy body. To keep healthy, I will have good eating habits, like eating more fruits and vegetables. I'll keep regular living habits, such as going to bed early and getting up early. Also, I'll do sport often, such as running and jumping. Good habits can help me stay healthy.
【知识点】
英语写作、健康话题、梦想话题
【点评】
本题考查初中英语写作能力，分为补充要点和书面表达两部分，围绕给定话题和思维导图要求展开，既考察学生的词汇、句式运用能力，也注重内容的逻辑性和规范性，符合初中英语学习要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题分为两部分，第一部分围绕“梦想”话题补充要点，需先确定合理的梦想职业，再写出实现梦想的具体措施，答案不唯一；第二部分以“How to keep healthy”为题写作，需结合思维导图的三个核心要点（饮食习惯、生活习惯、运动习惯）展开，适当拓展，注意字数、时态、语句通顺，符合英语写作规范。
【解析】
1. 补充要点：选择常见的梦想职业（如医生），用一般将来时写出实现梦想的具体行动，比如努力学习、阅读相关书籍，确保语法正确、语句通顺。
2. 书面表达：
（1）开头点明保持健康的重要性；
（2）围绕思维导图的三个方面展开：①饮食习惯：多吃蔬果等健康食物；②生活习惯：早睡早起，规律作息；③运动习惯：经常进行跑步等运动；
（3）结尾总结好习惯对健康的益处，控制字数在60-70词左右，时态以一般将来时为主，确保拼写、标点正确。
【答案】
1. I want to be a doctor. To make it come true, I'll study hard. I'll also read medical books in my free time.
2. One possible version:
How to keep healthy
More and more people want to have a healthy body. To keep healthy, I will have good eating habits, like eating more fruits and vegetables. I'll keep regular living habits, such as going to bed early and getting up early. Also, I'll do sport often, such as running and jumping. Good habits can help me stay healthy.
【知识点】
英语写作、健康话题、梦想话题
【点评】
本题考查初中英语写作能力，分为补充要点和书面表达两部分，围绕给定话题和思维导图要求展开，既考察学生的词汇、句式运用能力，也注重内容的逻辑性和规范性，符合初中英语学习要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
