Writing 4
每个人的成长过程都不可能一帆风顺。请你结合下面的图示信息,以“Growing up”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你在初中生活中遇到的问题,并分享你的亲身经历以及解决措施。

写作要求:
1. 围绕以上提示展开作文并适当补充,以使文章内容充实;
2. 语义通顺,表达准确,条理清晰,书写规范;
3. 80 词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Growing up
During my middle school life, I have met with some problems and I have tried my best to deal with them. Let me share some of my own experiences with you.
每个人的成长过程都不可能一帆风顺。请你结合下面的图示信息,以“Growing up”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你在初中生活中遇到的问题,并分享你的亲身经历以及解决措施。
写作要求:
1. 围绕以上提示展开作文并适当补充,以使文章内容充实;
2. 语义通顺,表达准确,条理清晰,书写规范;
3. 80 词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Growing up
During my middle school life, I have met with some problems and I have tried my best to deal with them. Let me share some of my own experiences with you.
I once struggled with schoolwork and got really poor grades in Maths. So I asked my Maths teacher for help. She offered me practical and useful study skills, and even helped me review key points after class, so my grades improved quickly. I also argued with my parents because they were rather strict about my studies. Later, I had a talk with them. We then understood each other better.
Growing up isn't always smooth, but solving problems bravely makes me grow stronger.
答案
Writing 4
One possible version:
Growing up
During my middle school life, I have met with some problems and I have tried my best to deal with them. Let me share some of my own experiences with you.
I once struggled with schoolwork and got really poor grades in Maths. So I asked my Maths teacher for help. She offered me practical and useful study skills, and even helped me review key points after class, so my grades improved quickly. I also argued with my parents because they were rather strict about my studies. Later, I had a talk with them. We then understood each other better.
Growing up isn't always smooth, but solving problems bravely makes me grow stronger.
One possible version:
Growing up
During my middle school life, I have met with some problems and I have tried my best to deal with them. Let me share some of my own experiences with you.
I once struggled with schoolwork and got really poor grades in Maths. So I asked my Maths teacher for help. She offered me practical and useful study skills, and even helped me review key points after class, so my grades improved quickly. I also argued with my parents because they were rather strict about my studies. Later, I had a talk with them. We then understood each other better.
Growing up isn't always smooth, but solving problems bravely makes me grow stronger.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“Growing up”为题写英语短文,需结合图示的“问题、经历、解决措施”展开,开头已给出。解题思路:1. 承接开头,明确初中遇到的具体问题,如学业(成绩差)、与父母的关系(争吵);2. 对应问题,写出亲身经历和解决方法,如找老师帮忙、和父母沟通;3. 最后总结成长感悟,使文章完整,符合80词左右的要求。
【解析】
承接开头后,先写学业问题:描述数学成绩差,向老师求助,老师提供学习技巧,成绩提升;再写与父母的问题:因学业和父母争吵,沟通后互相理解;最后总结成长的道理,确保语义通顺、内容充实,符合写作要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Growing up
During my middle school life, I have met with some problems and I have tried my best to deal with them. Let me share some of my own experiences with you.
I once struggled with schoolwork and got really poor grades in Maths. So I asked my Maths teacher for help. She offered me practical and useful study skills, and even helped me review key points after class, so my grades improved quickly. I also argued with my parents because they were rather strict about my studies. Later, I had a talk with them. We then understood each other better.
Growing up isn't always smooth, but solving problems bravely makes me grow stronger.
【知识点】英语话题写作、成长主题表达、应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣“成长”主题,结合图示的问题、经历与解决措施展开,内容具体充实,条理清晰,语言准确通顺,符合初中英语写作要求,很好地完成了题目任务。
【难度系数】0.5
本题要求以“Growing up”为题写英语短文,需结合图示的“问题、经历、解决措施”展开,开头已给出。解题思路:1. 承接开头,明确初中遇到的具体问题,如学业(成绩差)、与父母的关系(争吵);2. 对应问题,写出亲身经历和解决方法,如找老师帮忙、和父母沟通;3. 最后总结成长感悟,使文章完整,符合80词左右的要求。
【解析】
承接开头后,先写学业问题:描述数学成绩差,向老师求助,老师提供学习技巧,成绩提升;再写与父母的问题:因学业和父母争吵,沟通后互相理解;最后总结成长的道理,确保语义通顺、内容充实,符合写作要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Growing up
During my middle school life, I have met with some problems and I have tried my best to deal with them. Let me share some of my own experiences with you.
I once struggled with schoolwork and got really poor grades in Maths. So I asked my Maths teacher for help. She offered me practical and useful study skills, and even helped me review key points after class, so my grades improved quickly. I also argued with my parents because they were rather strict about my studies. Later, I had a talk with them. We then understood each other better.
Growing up isn't always smooth, but solving problems bravely makes me grow stronger.
【知识点】英语话题写作、成长主题表达、应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣“成长”主题,结合图示的问题、经历与解决措施展开,内容具体充实,条理清晰,语言准确通顺,符合初中英语写作要求,很好地完成了题目任务。
【难度系数】0.5
Writing 5
随着手机与社交软件的普及应用,许多人沉浸于手机和网络世界,导致“社恐”人群不断出现。我们当中也有部分学生存在这种问题。请你根据以下表格内容提示,以“Facing social anxiety(面对社交恐惧)”为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈社恐现象、成因以及我们应该如何克服社交恐惧。

注意:
1. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 内容完整,条理清晰,语句通顺,可在表格内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息。
Facing social anxiety
In our lives, there are more and more people who have to face social anxiety. Some of us have difficulties in communicating with others too.
All in all, it needs courage and practice to deal with it. If you can do these, you'll be good at communicating and confident some day.
Writing 6(2025·宿迁市宿豫区期末)
寒假即将开始,请写一篇演讲稿,给你的同学们讲一讲应该如何度过一个有意义的寒假。
1. 仔细地计划好每天的生活,将所有的作业列一个清单,从而……(至少两点)
2. 完成作业之后,多看书,通过书本更多地了解这个世界;
3. 听听音乐,了解不同的音乐类型,我最喜欢的作曲家是谭盾……(至少一点)
4. 如果整日待在家中,感到烦躁的话,可以看看自己喜欢的电影。
要求:1. 100词左右(开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
How to have a meaningful winter holiday
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. How can we have a meaningful winter holiday? I have some good ideas to share with you.
Wish you all have a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
Thank you for listening!
随着手机与社交软件的普及应用,许多人沉浸于手机和网络世界,导致“社恐”人群不断出现。我们当中也有部分学生存在这种问题。请你根据以下表格内容提示,以“Facing social anxiety(面对社交恐惧)”为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈社恐现象、成因以及我们应该如何克服社交恐惧。
注意:
1. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 内容完整,条理清晰,语句通顺,可在表格内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息。
Facing social anxiety
In our lives, there are more and more people who have to face social anxiety. Some of us have difficulties in communicating with others too.
People with social anxiety often feel afraid to talk to strangers and do not like joining in group activities. Why does this happen? First, many people are used to communicating online and feel uncomfortable talking in real life. Second, they may worry too much about what others think of them.
To overcome it, you can try these steps. Try to talk more with family and friends in real life. You can also join a school club to meet new people. Remember to smile and be yourself.
All in all, it needs courage and practice to deal with it. If you can do these, you'll be good at communicating and confident some day.
Writing 6(2025·宿迁市宿豫区期末)
寒假即将开始,请写一篇演讲稿,给你的同学们讲一讲应该如何度过一个有意义的寒假。
1. 仔细地计划好每天的生活,将所有的作业列一个清单,从而……(至少两点)
2. 完成作业之后,多看书,通过书本更多地了解这个世界;
3. 听听音乐,了解不同的音乐类型,我最喜欢的作曲家是谭盾……(至少一点)
4. 如果整日待在家中,感到烦躁的话,可以看看自己喜欢的电影。
要求:1. 100词左右(开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
How to have a meaningful winter holiday
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. How can we have a meaningful winter holiday? I have some good ideas to share with you.
First of all, plan our day carefully. I think we should make a list of all the homework we have. Then work out how much time we need to finish it all. This will give us an idea of how much spare time we have. Reading can help us to learn more about the world. So after finishing our homework, we can read some books. Listening to different kinds of music is also a good choice. Music can always make us feel relaxed. My favourite composer is Tan Dun, because his music makes me full of power. If we get bored with staying at home all day, we can go to the cinema to watch some films. My favourite film star is Jackie Chan. His action films are very exciting. In addition, don't forget to help our parents to do some housework.
Wish you all have a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
Thank you for listening!
答案
Writing 5
One possible version:
Facing social anxiety
In our lives, there are more and more people who have to face social anxiety. Some of us have difficulties in communicating with others too.
People with social anxiety often feel afraid to talk to strangers and do not like joining in group activities. Why does this happen? First, many people are used to communicating online and feel uncomfortable talking in real life. Second, they may worry too much about what others think of them.
To overcome it, you can try these steps. Try to talk more with family and friends in real life. You can also join a school club to meet new people. Remember to smile and be yourself.
All in all, it needs courage and practice to deal with it. If you can do these, you'll be good at communicating and confident some day.
Writing 6
One possible version:
How to have a meaningful winter holiday
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. How can we have a meaningful winter holiday? I have some good ideas to share with you.
First of all, plan our day carefully. I think we should make a list of all the homework we have. Then work out how much time we need to finish it all. This will give us an idea of how much spare time we have. Reading can help us to learn more about the world. So after finishing our homework, we can read some books. Listening to different kinds of music is also a good choice. Music can always make us feel relaxed. My favourite composer is Tan Dun, because his music makes me full of power. If we get bored with staying at home all day, we can go to the cinema to watch some films. My favourite film star is Jackie Chan. His action films are very exciting. In addition, don't forget to help our parents to do some housework.
Wish you all have a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
Thank you for listening!
One possible version:
Facing social anxiety
In our lives, there are more and more people who have to face social anxiety. Some of us have difficulties in communicating with others too.
People with social anxiety often feel afraid to talk to strangers and do not like joining in group activities. Why does this happen? First, many people are used to communicating online and feel uncomfortable talking in real life. Second, they may worry too much about what others think of them.
To overcome it, you can try these steps. Try to talk more with family and friends in real life. You can also join a school club to meet new people. Remember to smile and be yourself.
All in all, it needs courage and practice to deal with it. If you can do these, you'll be good at communicating and confident some day.
Writing 6
One possible version:
How to have a meaningful winter holiday
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. How can we have a meaningful winter holiday? I have some good ideas to share with you.
First of all, plan our day carefully. I think we should make a list of all the homework we have. Then work out how much time we need to finish it all. This will give us an idea of how much spare time we have. Reading can help us to learn more about the world. So after finishing our homework, we can read some books. Listening to different kinds of music is also a good choice. Music can always make us feel relaxed. My favourite composer is Tan Dun, because his music makes me full of power. If we get bored with staying at home all day, we can go to the cinema to watch some films. My favourite film star is Jackie Chan. His action films are very exciting. In addition, don't forget to help our parents to do some housework.
Wish you all have a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
Thank you for listening!
解析
【分析】
首先明确两篇英语写作的任务:Writing5要求围绕“面对社交恐惧”,结合表格提示的社恐表现、成因、克服建议,补充合理拓展内容,控制词数,衔接给定的开头与结尾;Writing6要求写关于“如何度过有意义的寒假”的演讲稿,需覆盖给定的所有要点(计划每日生活、读书、听音乐、看电影等),适当补充细节,符合演讲稿格式,控制词数。解题时需先梳理核心要点,再用通顺的英语串联,注意词数和格式规范。
【解析】
Writing5的写作逻辑:先承接开头引出社恐的具体表现(如害怕与陌生人交谈、不愿参与集体活动),再分析成因(沉迷网络、过度在意他人看法),最后给出克服建议(多与亲友交流、加入社团等),衔接结尾;Writing6的写作逻辑:先引出主题,再依次阐述计划每日生活(列作业清单、规划时间)、完成作业后读书、听音乐(提及谭盾)、烦躁时看电影,补充帮父母做家务的细节,最后收尾,符合演讲稿要求。
【答案】
Writing 5
One possible version:
Facing social anxiety
In our lives, there are more and more people who have to face social anxiety. Some of us have difficulties in communicating with others too.
People with social anxiety often feel afraid to talk to strangers and do not like joining in group activities. Why does this happen? First, many people are used to communicating online and feel uncomfortable talking in real life. Second, they may worry too much about what others think of them.
To overcome it, you can try these steps. Try to talk more with family and friends in real life. You can also join a school club to meet new people. Remember to smile and be yourself.
All in all, it needs courage and practice to deal with it. If you can do these, you'll be good at communicating and confident some day.
Writing 6
One possible version:
How to have a meaningful winter holiday
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. How can we have a meaningful winter holiday? I have some good ideas to share with you.
First of all, plan our day carefully. I think we should make a list of all the homework we have. Then work out how much time we need to finish it all. This will give us an idea of how much spare time we have. Reading can help us to learn more about the world. So after finishing our homework, we can read some books. Listening to different kinds of music is also a good choice. Music can always make us feel relaxed. My favourite composer is Tan Dun, because his music makes me full of power. If we get bored with staying at home all day, we can go to the cinema to watch some films. My favourite film star is Jackie Chan. His action films are very exciting. In addition, don't forget to help our parents to do some housework.
Wish you all have a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作
【点评】
两篇写作均紧扣主题,覆盖所有提示要点,拓展内容合理,语句通顺,结构清晰,符合词数要求,是符合要求的优秀范文,适合学生参考模仿。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确两篇英语写作的任务:Writing5要求围绕“面对社交恐惧”,结合表格提示的社恐表现、成因、克服建议,补充合理拓展内容,控制词数,衔接给定的开头与结尾;Writing6要求写关于“如何度过有意义的寒假”的演讲稿,需覆盖给定的所有要点(计划每日生活、读书、听音乐、看电影等),适当补充细节,符合演讲稿格式,控制词数。解题时需先梳理核心要点,再用通顺的英语串联,注意词数和格式规范。
【解析】
Writing5的写作逻辑:先承接开头引出社恐的具体表现(如害怕与陌生人交谈、不愿参与集体活动),再分析成因(沉迷网络、过度在意他人看法),最后给出克服建议(多与亲友交流、加入社团等),衔接结尾;Writing6的写作逻辑:先引出主题,再依次阐述计划每日生活(列作业清单、规划时间)、完成作业后读书、听音乐(提及谭盾)、烦躁时看电影,补充帮父母做家务的细节,最后收尾,符合演讲稿要求。
【答案】
Writing 5
One possible version:
Facing social anxiety
In our lives, there are more and more people who have to face social anxiety. Some of us have difficulties in communicating with others too.
People with social anxiety often feel afraid to talk to strangers and do not like joining in group activities. Why does this happen? First, many people are used to communicating online and feel uncomfortable talking in real life. Second, they may worry too much about what others think of them.
To overcome it, you can try these steps. Try to talk more with family and friends in real life. You can also join a school club to meet new people. Remember to smile and be yourself.
All in all, it needs courage and practice to deal with it. If you can do these, you'll be good at communicating and confident some day.
Writing 6
One possible version:
How to have a meaningful winter holiday
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. How can we have a meaningful winter holiday? I have some good ideas to share with you.
First of all, plan our day carefully. I think we should make a list of all the homework we have. Then work out how much time we need to finish it all. This will give us an idea of how much spare time we have. Reading can help us to learn more about the world. So after finishing our homework, we can read some books. Listening to different kinds of music is also a good choice. Music can always make us feel relaxed. My favourite composer is Tan Dun, because his music makes me full of power. If we get bored with staying at home all day, we can go to the cinema to watch some films. My favourite film star is Jackie Chan. His action films are very exciting. In addition, don't forget to help our parents to do some housework.
Wish you all have a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作
【点评】
两篇写作均紧扣主题,覆盖所有提示要点,拓展内容合理,语句通顺,结构清晰,符合词数要求,是符合要求的优秀范文,适合学生参考模仿。
【难度系数】
0.5
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