三、教材佳句仿写·核心句式训练
1. 教材原句:They keep my eyes from the sun.
仿写:人们穿雨衣保护自己避免淋雨。

2. 教材原句:It's a good idea to save for a rainy day.
仿写:为未来制订计划是很好的主意。

3. 教材原句:Money matters in every family.
仿写:健康对每个人的生活都很重要。

4. 教材原句:I try to manage my money well.
仿写:我努力管理好我的学习时间。

1. People wear raincoats to keep themselves from the rain.
2. It's a good idea to make plans for the future.
3. Health matters in everyone's life.
4. I try to manage my study time well.

四、典例剖析·主题写作行文指导
随着家庭生活水平的提高,同学们或多或少会有一些零花钱,请以“How to Spend Our Pocket Money”为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,内容必须包括以下要点:
语篇类型: 说明文
1. How do you get your pocket money?
人称: 第一人称
2. What do you usually use your pocket money to do?
时态: 一般现在时
3. What meaningful things do you think you can do with your pocket money?
How to Spend Our Pocket Money
As families are now living a better life, we kids can have some pocket money.




Step 1 谋篇布局指导


Step 2 高阶表达应用
1. We often use our pocket money to buy breakfast. (用 spend... doing... 升格)



2. We can donate our pocket money to help poor children. They can go to school and live happily. (用 so that 升格)



Step 3 佳作展示评析
How to Spend Our Pocket Money
As families are now living a better life, we kids can have some pocket money. We usually get our pocket money from our parents. Sometimes, we can get some by selling waste paper and bottles.
We often spend our pocket money buying breakfast. We also buy some books with our pocket money.
I think we can do something more meaningful. For example, we can donate our pocket money to help poor children so that they can go to school and live happily. If everyone can do like this, I believe that our world will be better.
①固定句型 spend... doing... 的使用增加了文章亮点。
②此处为含有 that 引导的宾语从句的复合句,省略了 that,丰富文章句式。
③For example 引出可做的有意义的事,增强文章的条理性。
④If 在此引导条件状语从句,号召大家合理使用零花钱。
本文围绕零花钱展开,内容包括如何得到零花钱、日常生活中如何使用零花钱以及如何将零花钱用得有意义。文章条理清晰,层次分明。

Step 2 高阶表达应用
1. We often spend our pocket money buying breakfast.
2. We can donate our pocket money to help poor children so that they can go to school and live happily.