写作提优专题
话题分析
本单元的核心写作话题是体育与体育精神，要求学生围绕体育相关内容，从体育赛事/经历（校运会、奥运会等）、敬佩的运动员、体育对个人的影响等方面展开写作，引导学生分享体育感悟、锻炼叙事与书面表达能力，同时渗透奥林匹克精神与团队合作意识。
写作积累
[高分词汇]
1. 参加(体育赛事/活动)
2. 参加……的选拔
3. 追上;赶上
4. 放弃
5. 创造纪录
6. 为某人加油
7. 身体健康
8. 增强体质
9. 奥林匹克精神
10. 合作
[高分句式]
1. 输赢都不是体育的全部。

2. 我和哥哥都喜欢踢足球。

3. 上周我参加了校运会的100米赛跑。

4. 虽然我没有拿到第一名，但我从未放弃，完成了比赛。

5. 我最敬佩的运动员是苏炳添，他永不放弃，为我们树立了好榜样。

[高分词汇]
1. take part in/join in
2. try out for
3. catch up with
4. give up
5. set a record
6. cheer sb on
7. in good health
8. build up one's body
9. the Olympic spirit
10. work together
[高分句式]
1. Neither winning nor losing is everything in sports.
2. Both my brother and I like playing football.
3. I took part in the 100-metre race in our school Sports Day last week.
4. Though I didn't win the first prize, I never gave up and finished the race.
5. My favourite athlete is Su Bingtian, who never gives up and sets a good example for us.

【分析】本题是围绕体育话题的写作积累题，需根据中文提示匹配对应的英语固定词汇或句式。解题思路为：先明确每个中文短语/句子的核心含义，再回忆英语中对应的固定表达，确保形式准确、语义匹配，完成词汇和句式的填空，为后续体育话题写作积累素材。
【解析】根据中文提示及英语固定表达，依次填写对应内容：
高分词汇部分：
1. take part in/join in
2. try out for
3. catch up with
4. give up
5. set a record
6. cheer sb on
7. in good health
8. build up one's body
9. the Olympic spirit
10. work together
高分句式部分：
1. Neither winning nor losing is everything in sports.
2. Both my brother and I like playing football.
3. I took part in the 100-metre race in our school Sports Day last week.
4. Though I didn't win the first prize, I never gave up and finished the race.
5. My favourite athlete is Su Bingtian, who never gives up and sets a good example for us.
【答案】[高分词汇]
1. take part in/join in
2. try out for
3. catch up with
4. give up
5. set a record
6. cheer sb on
7. in good health
8. build up one's body
9. the Olympic spirit
10. work together
[高分句式]
1. Neither winning nor losing is everything in sports.
2. Both my brother and I like playing football.
3. I took part in the 100-metre race in our school Sports Day last week.
4. Though I didn't win the first prize, I never gave up and finished the race.
5. My favourite athlete is Su Bingtian, who never gives up and sets a good example for us.
【知识点】英语固定搭配、英语常用句式、体育话题词汇
【点评】本题聚焦体育话题的写作基础积累，通过词汇和句式的匹配练习，帮助学生掌握体育相关的常用表达，为单元写作任务储备素材，贴合核心话题要求，实用性较强。
【难度系数】0.7

典例讲解
济南兴洲、泰山队给我们带来了很多快乐。足球的快乐不仅是输赢，还有友谊、坚持、团队精神、放松……在你心中足球是什么？你的英国笔友想了解济南学生对足球的看法，请你以“Football in My Heart”为题，用英语写一篇短文向他介绍一下。写作要点：
1. 你原先对足球有什么看法？
2. 你现在怎么看待足球运动？
3. 简单说说你对济南本土球队的看法。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 短文须包含写作要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Football in My Heart


[审题思路]
▶审体裁:本篇写作核心是分享个人对足球的认知变化与本土球队的看法,属于夹叙夹议的说明文,兼具叙事性与抒情性,符合书信/征文语境。
▶审人称:以第一人称为主,分享个人观点与感受,增强真实感,贴合笔友交流的语境。
▶审时态:用一般过去时描述原先对足球的看法;用一般现在时描述现在的认知、对本土球队的看法与感悟,时态逻辑清晰。
[写作提纲]

[优秀范文]
Football in My Heart
I used to think football was just a simple game about winning or losing, and I paid little attention to it at first, thinking it was only for professional players.
But now, I have totally changed my mind. Football is far more than a game. It brings us precious friendship, strong team spirit, the power to keep going, and a perfect way to relax after busy study. It also helps us build up our bodies and stay energetic all the time.
As for Jinan local football teams, they are the pride of all of us. Their spirit of never giving up and fighting hard encourages me a lot in my daily life. I will always cheer for them and love football forever.
[实战演练]
学校英语社团正在举办“The Athlete I Admire Most”主题征文,请你写一篇英语短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 介绍你最敬佩的一位运动员;
2. 分享他/她的一个励志故事;
3. 谈谈他/她对你的影响。
注意:1. 词数100左右,题目已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 短文须包含写作要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实的学校名、班级名及个人隐私信息;可使用公众人物姓名。
The Athlete I Admire Most

【实战演练】
One possible version：
The Athlete I Admire Most
The athlete I admire most is Su Bingtian, a famous Chinese sprinter who has greatly influenced many young people. He is well-known for breaking the Asian record in the 100-metre race and making history for our country.
Though he faced serious injuries and difficulties in his training for many years, he never lost hope or gave up his dream. He kept training strictly and patiently even at an age when most athletes choose to retire.
Su Bingtian sets a wonderful example for me. Whenever I meet difficulties in my study or daily life, I will think of his spirit and keep moving forward bravely. He is not only a sports star but also a real hero in my heart.

【分析】首先明确写作主题为介绍最敬佩的运动员，需涵盖三个核心要点：1. 介绍敬佩的运动员（选择公众人物，符合题目要求）；2. 分享其励志故事；3. 阐述对自己的影响。写作时需注意时态：介绍现状用一般现在时，讲述过去故事用一般过去时，语言要连贯，控制词数在100左右，不出现真实隐私信息。
【解析】第一步：确定写作对象，选择公众人物苏炳添，符合“可使用公众人物姓名”的要求；第二步：介绍苏炳添的身份与成就（打破亚洲100米纪录）；第三步：讲述其励志故事（多年训练中遇伤病仍坚持，在多数运动员选择退役的年龄仍严格训练）；第四步：结合自身，阐述其对自己的影响（遇到困难时以他为榜样，勇敢前行）；最后调整语句，使行文连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version：
The Athlete I Admire Most
The athlete I admire most is Su Bingtian, a famous Chinese sprinter who has greatly influenced many young people. He is well-known for breaking the Asian record in the 100-metre race and making history for our country.
Though he faced serious injuries and difficulties in his training for many years, he never lost hope or gave up his dream. He kept training strictly and patiently even at an age when most athletes choose to retire.
Su Bingtian sets a wonderful example for me. Whenever I meet difficulties in my study or daily life, I will think of his spirit and keep moving forward bravely. He is not only a sports star but also a real hero in my heart.
【知识点】英语写作、时态运用、要点整合
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求，涵盖所有写作要点，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，通过具体事例体现运动员的励志精神，同时清晰阐述了对自身的影响，符合征文要求。
【难度系数】0.5