十四、书面表达。(共5分)
张涛梦想当一名警察,为此他打算参加今年暑假的夏令营,以改正自己的不良习惯。为了得到好友的支持,他想给Jacky写一封邮件,告诉他自己的暑假安排。请你根据以上内容及图片提示,完成张涛的邮件。
要求:1. 邮件内容要包含图片所提供的全部信息,可适当地添加内容;
2. 语言通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
3. 词数40左右,已给内容不计入总词数。

Dear Jacky,
I am very happy to tell you about my dream. I want to be a policeman. But
Summer holiday is coming. I am going to join a summer camp.
I think I can make my dream come true.
Love,
Zhang Tao

One possible version:
Dear Jacky,
I am very happy to tell you about my dream. I
want to be a policeman. But I have some bad habits.
I often eat too much sweet food, like ice creams and
candies. And I always stay up late to watch TV or
play games, so I get up late in the morning. And I
can't put my things in order.
Summer holiday is coming. I am going to join a
summer camp. I'll get up early every day, play some
sport and read more books about police stories. I
also plan to make new friends and learn how to work
with others. And I will keep a healthy diet too.
I think I can make my dream come true.
Love,
Zhang Tao

【分析】
本题要求完成一封给好友Jacky的英语邮件，需结合图片信息：左图对应张涛的坏习惯（吃过多甜食、起床晚、物品杂乱），右图对应他参加夏令营的计划（早起、运动、读书、健康饮食），同时要结合张涛想当警察的梦想，先说明自身坏习惯，再介绍夏令营安排，语言需通顺连贯，符合邮件格式与词数要求。
【解析】
首先承接已给内容，用“but”引出张涛的坏习惯，对应左图的三个信息：吃太多甜食（如冰淇淋、糖果）、起床晚、物品杂乱；接着介绍夏令营计划，对应右图的内容：早起、运动（如踢足球）、读书、健康饮食，将这些信息组织成通顺的英语句子，确保符合邮件结构，词数达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Jacky,
I am very happy to tell you about my dream. I want to be a policeman. But I have some bad habits. I often eat too much sweet food, like ice creams and candies. And I always stay up late to watch TV or play games, so I get up late in the morning. And I can't put my things in order.
Summer holiday is coming. I am going to join a summer camp. I'll get up early every day, play some sport and read more books about police stories. I also plan to make new friends and learn how to work with others. And I will keep a healthy diet too.
I think I can make my dream come true.
Love,
Zhang Tao
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、看图写话
【点评】
本题结合图片信息考查英语应用文写作，既考查学生提取图片关键信息的能力，又考查英语语言的组织与表达能力，要求学生围绕“改正坏习惯、实现警察梦想”的主题完成邮件，符合初中英语书面表达的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.5