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主题分析
本单元的主题是“生活与学习”中的“丰富、充实、积极向上的生活”。在写作时，要求学生会用一般过去时分享假期见闻。
写作素材
【词汇】
holiday, ancient, mountain, landscape, amazing, interesting, special, sunrise, fantastic, countryside, summer camp, take one’s breath away, have fun
【句型】
◆开头句
1. How was your holiday?
2. I had a fantastic holiday.
3. Where did you go on holiday/vacation?
◆中间句
1. It took my breath away.
2. We took a lot of photos there.
3. Everything seemed so different.
◆结尾句
1. This trip brought me so much joy.
2. I really hope I can go there again.
3. What a wonderful experience I had!
【名言积累】
1. Travel broadens the mind. 旅行开阔眼界。
2. It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.
读万卷书不如行万里路。
写作典范
旅行让人开阔眼界，增长知识。假如你们学校的英语报刊以“The Most Memorable（难忘的）Trip”为题进行征稿。请围绕下图所示的三个问题，用英语写一篇文章投稿。
注意:1. 根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右。
The Most Memorable Trip
【审题立意】
1. 审主题:介绍最难忘的旅行
2. 审体裁:记叙文
3. 审人称:以第一人称为主
4. 审时态:以一般过去时为主
【思路点拨】
【佳作欣赏】
The Most Memorable Trip
I have travelled to many places, but the most memorable trip is my trip to Beijing. I went to Beijing with my family on vacation in July. I was so excited because it was my first time to visit Beijing.
Beijing is famous for many places of interest. As an old saying says, “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.” So we drove to the Great Wall first. I made my way to the Platform. Standing there and looking down, the scenery took my breath away. In the afternoon, we visited the Palace Museum. I learned something important about Chinese culture and history. I also took quite a few pictures. The next day, I went to Beihai Park and bought something special for my friends.
We were tired but we had so much fun.
All in all, the trip to Beijing was so wonderful that we wanted to go there again.
本单元的主题是“生活与学习”中的“丰富、充实、积极向上的生活”。在写作时，要求学生会用一般过去时分享假期见闻。
写作素材
【词汇】
holiday, ancient, mountain, landscape, amazing, interesting, special, sunrise, fantastic, countryside, summer camp, take one’s breath away, have fun
【句型】
◆开头句
1. How was your holiday?
2. I had a fantastic holiday.
3. Where did you go on holiday/vacation?
◆中间句
1. It took my breath away.
2. We took a lot of photos there.
3. Everything seemed so different.
◆结尾句
1. This trip brought me so much joy.
2. I really hope I can go there again.
3. What a wonderful experience I had!
【名言积累】
1. Travel broadens the mind. 旅行开阔眼界。
2. It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.
读万卷书不如行万里路。
写作典范
旅行让人开阔眼界，增长知识。假如你们学校的英语报刊以“The Most Memorable（难忘的）Trip”为题进行征稿。请围绕下图所示的三个问题，用英语写一篇文章投稿。
注意:1. 根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右。
The Most Memorable Trip
【审题立意】
1. 审主题:介绍最难忘的旅行
2. 审体裁:记叙文
3. 审人称:以第一人称为主
4. 审时态:以一般过去时为主
【思路点拨】
【佳作欣赏】
The Most Memorable Trip
I have travelled to many places, but the most memorable trip is my trip to Beijing. I went to Beijing with my family on vacation in July. I was so excited because it was my first time to visit Beijing.
Beijing is famous for many places of interest. As an old saying says, “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.” So we drove to the Great Wall first. I made my way to the Platform. Standing there and looking down, the scenery took my breath away. In the afternoon, we visited the Palace Museum. I learned something important about Chinese culture and history. I also took quite a few pictures. The next day, I went to Beihai Park and bought something special for my friends.
We were tired but we had so much fun.
All in all, the trip to Beijing was so wonderful that we wanted to go there again.
答案
The Most Memorable Trip
I have taken many trips, but the most memorable one is my trip to Mount Tai with my parents last summer holiday.
We climbed the ancient mountain at night to wait for the sunrise. When we reached the top, the fantastic landscape took my breath away. We took a lot of photos there, and later we also had fun visiting the nearby countryside.
This trip brought me so much joy. What a wonderful experience I had!
I have taken many trips, but the most memorable one is my trip to Mount Tai with my parents last summer holiday.
We climbed the ancient mountain at night to wait for the sunrise. When we reached the top, the fantastic landscape took my breath away. We took a lot of photos there, and later we also had fun visiting the nearby countryside.
This trip brought me so much joy. What a wonderful experience I had!
解析
【分析】首先明确写作要求：主题为“The Most Memorable Trip”，体裁是记叙文，需用第一人称、一般过去时，词数80左右，结合给定词汇和句型完成。解题思路：1. 开头：直接点明最难忘的旅行是和父母去年暑假去泰山，呼应主题；2. 中间：叙述具体经历（夜间爬泰山等日出、山顶美景、拍照、乡村游玩），运用给定短语和句型；3. 结尾：总结旅行感受，表达难忘，符合要求。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头：用给定句型点明最难忘的旅行，即“I have taken many trips, but the most memorable one is my trip to Mount Tai with my parents last summer holiday.”；2. 中间：结合素材，写夜间爬泰山等日出，山顶美景令人惊叹，拍照、乡村游玩，运用给定词汇（ancient, mountain, sunrise, take one’s breath away等）和一般过去时；3. 结尾：用给定句型总结旅行带来快乐，是难忘的经历，词数符合要求。
【答案】The Most Memorable Trip
I have taken many trips, but the most memorable one is my trip to Mount Tai with my parents last summer holiday.
We climbed the ancient mountain at night to wait for the sunrise. When we reached the top, the fantastic landscape took my breath away. We took a lot of photos there, and later we also had fun visiting the nearby countryside.
This trip brought me so much joy. What a wonderful experience I had!
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、一般过去时运用、常用英语短语
【点评】该写作紧扣主题，结构清晰，时态正确，灵活运用题目给定的词汇、句型和素材，内容具体，情感真挚，符合征稿要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头：用给定句型点明最难忘的旅行，即“I have taken many trips, but the most memorable one is my trip to Mount Tai with my parents last summer holiday.”；2. 中间：结合素材，写夜间爬泰山等日出，山顶美景令人惊叹，拍照、乡村游玩，运用给定词汇（ancient, mountain, sunrise, take one’s breath away等）和一般过去时；3. 结尾：用给定句型总结旅行带来快乐，是难忘的经历，词数符合要求。
【答案】The Most Memorable Trip
I have taken many trips, but the most memorable one is my trip to Mount Tai with my parents last summer holiday.
We climbed the ancient mountain at night to wait for the sunrise. When we reached the top, the fantastic landscape took my breath away. We took a lot of photos there, and later we also had fun visiting the nearby countryside.
This trip brought me so much joy. What a wonderful experience I had!
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、一般过去时运用、常用英语短语
【点评】该写作紧扣主题，结构清晰，时态正确，灵活运用题目给定的词汇、句型和素材，内容具体，情感真挚，符合征稿要求。
【难度系数】0.6
