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[2026 南京期末]假定你是李华,你的英国笔友汤姆计划来中国旅行。他了解到在一些区域,自然灾害偶有发生,特来邮件询问相关信息。请你回复他的邮件。
Dear Li Hua,
I've read online that some areas may sometimes have natural disasters like earthquakes or floods. I'd like to know some safe ways to deal with them. For example, what should I do if an earthquake hits suddenly? And I also want to learn how to keep myself safe during a flood. Besides, I hope to get some simple safety rules for my trip. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Tom
[思路点拨]
1. 文体:应用文。2. 时态:以一般现在时为主。3. 人称:以第二人称为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to share some safety tips with you.
I'm sure these tips will help you have a safe trip. Welcome to China!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Li Hua,
I've read online that some areas may sometimes have natural disasters like earthquakes or floods. I'd like to know some safe ways to deal with them. For example, what should I do if an earthquake hits suddenly? And I also want to learn how to keep myself safe during a flood. Besides, I hope to get some simple safety rules for my trip. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Tom
[思路点拨]
1. 文体:应用文。2. 时态:以一般现在时为主。3. 人称:以第二人称为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to share some safety tips with you.
If an earthquake hits suddenly, stay calm first. Try to hide under a strong table or stay in a corner. Stay away from windows. If you are outdoors, move to an open area.
During a flood, do not walk or drive through moving water. Go to higher ground as soon as possible.
Here are some simple safety rules: always listen to local weather reports, know the emergency numbers, and follow instructions from local people.
It's also good to have a small safety bag with water, food, and a flashlight.
I'm sure these tips will help you have a safe trip. Welcome to China!
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to share some safety tips with you.
If an earthquake hits suddenly, stay calm first. Try to hide under a strong table or stay in a corner. Stay away from windows. If you are outdoors, move to an open area.
During a flood, do not walk or drive through moving water. Go to higher ground as soon as possible.
Here are some simple safety rules: always listen to local weather reports, know the emergency numbers, and follow instructions from local people. It's also good to have a small safety bag with water, food, and a flashlight.
I'm sure these tips will help you have a safe trip. Welcome to China!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to share some safety tips with you.
If an earthquake hits suddenly, stay calm first. Try to hide under a strong table or stay in a corner. Stay away from windows. If you are outdoors, move to an open area.
During a flood, do not walk or drive through moving water. Go to higher ground as soon as possible.
Here are some simple safety rules: always listen to local weather reports, know the emergency numbers, and follow instructions from local people. It's also good to have a small safety bag with water, food, and a flashlight.
I'm sure these tips will help you have a safe trip. Welcome to China!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类英语应用文写作，你首先要明确需要完全回应笔友Tom提出的三个诉求：地震突发的应对方法、洪水期间的自保方式、旅行通用安全规则，完全匹配思维导图的三个分支。第一步先写地震相关内容：先点明地震发生时首先要保持冷静，分别给出室内、室外的合理避险操作，符合真实的地震避险常识；第二步写洪水相关内容，点明洪水场景下不能做的危险行为和正确的逃生选择；第三步写通用旅行安全规则，列举几条可落地的实用提示，全程使用第二人称、以一般现在时为主，语气贴合笔友交流的友好感，最后自然衔接题目给出的结尾内容即可完成全文。
【解析】
1. 完成地震场景的内容书写：承接开头，直接切入地震突发的场景，依次给出保持冷静、室内躲在坚固家具下/靠墙角落、远离窗户，室外前往开阔区域的合理建议，内容符合避险逻辑。
2. 完成洪水场景的内容书写：围绕洪水场景展开，明确指出不要蹚过流动的水流、不要涉水驾车，第一时间前往地势更高的区域避险，内容简洁清晰。
3. 完成通用安全规则的内容书写：围绕出行安全展开，列举收听当地气象预报、牢记紧急求助电话、听从当地人指引、配备装有水、食物、手电的应急小包等实用规则，内容详实合理。
4. 自然衔接题干给出的结尾语句，保证全文行文流畅，人称时态完全符合写作要求，没有语法错误。
【答案】
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to share some safety tips with you.
If an earthquake hits suddenly, stay calm first. Try to hide under a strong table or stay in a corner. Stay away from windows. If you are outdoors, move to an open area.
During a flood, do not walk or drive through moving water. Go to higher ground as soon as possible.
Here are some simple safety rules: always listen to local weather reports, know the emergency numbers, and follow instructions from local people. It's also good to have a small safety bag with water, food, and a flashlight.
I'm sure these tips will help you have a safe trip. Welcome to China!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，灾害安全常识，建议类英语表达
【点评】
本文完全覆盖了题干要求的全部写作要点，内容分层清晰，严格对应写作提纲的三个模块，给出的安全提示符合真实避险逻辑，语言地道自然，语气符合笔友交流的语境，时态人称使用准确，是一篇合格的应用文习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇提纲类英语应用文写作，你首先要明确需要完全回应笔友Tom提出的三个诉求：地震突发的应对方法、洪水期间的自保方式、旅行通用安全规则，完全匹配思维导图的三个分支。第一步先写地震相关内容：先点明地震发生时首先要保持冷静，分别给出室内、室外的合理避险操作，符合真实的地震避险常识；第二步写洪水相关内容，点明洪水场景下不能做的危险行为和正确的逃生选择；第三步写通用旅行安全规则，列举几条可落地的实用提示，全程使用第二人称、以一般现在时为主，语气贴合笔友交流的友好感，最后自然衔接题目给出的结尾内容即可完成全文。
【解析】
1. 完成地震场景的内容书写：承接开头，直接切入地震突发的场景，依次给出保持冷静、室内躲在坚固家具下/靠墙角落、远离窗户，室外前往开阔区域的合理建议，内容符合避险逻辑。
2. 完成洪水场景的内容书写：围绕洪水场景展开，明确指出不要蹚过流动的水流、不要涉水驾车，第一时间前往地势更高的区域避险，内容简洁清晰。
3. 完成通用安全规则的内容书写：围绕出行安全展开，列举收听当地气象预报、牢记紧急求助电话、听从当地人指引、配备装有水、食物、手电的应急小包等实用规则，内容详实合理。
4. 自然衔接题干给出的结尾语句，保证全文行文流畅，人称时态完全符合写作要求，没有语法错误。
【答案】
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to share some safety tips with you.
If an earthquake hits suddenly, stay calm first. Try to hide under a strong table or stay in a corner. Stay away from windows. If you are outdoors, move to an open area.
During a flood, do not walk or drive through moving water. Go to higher ground as soon as possible.
Here are some simple safety rules: always listen to local weather reports, know the emergency numbers, and follow instructions from local people. It's also good to have a small safety bag with water, food, and a flashlight.
I'm sure these tips will help you have a safe trip. Welcome to China!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，灾害安全常识，建议类英语表达
【点评】
本文完全覆盖了题干要求的全部写作要点，内容分层清晰，严格对应写作提纲的三个模块，给出的安全提示符合真实避险逻辑，语言地道自然，语气符合笔友交流的语境，时态人称使用准确，是一篇合格的应用文习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
