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进入初中以来,很多同学发觉英语比小学时难了很多,心里着急,却又找不到合适的方法。你愿意帮助他们吗?请写一份演讲稿,为他们学好英语提供一些有价值的建议。要求:80—100词。
| 听力 | 每天早晨花十分钟听英语…… |
| 口语 | 每天花十分钟练习语音;找一个朋友一起练习英语 |
| 阅读 | 经常阅读很重要;从简单的课文开始,慢慢转向困难的文章
|
| 写作 | …… |
| 其他 | 熟能生巧,勤加练习…… |
审题指导:
1.体裁:应用文 2.时态:以一般现在时为主 3.人称:以第二人称为主
写作框架:
38 英语 八年级 上册 译林版
优秀范文:
Dear friends,
Do you find it a little difficult to learn English well now? Many students feel worried as English becomes harder. Here I have some useful advice for you.
For listening, spend ten minutes listening to English every morning. It helps you get used to① English sounds. As for speaking, spend ten minutes practising pronunciation every day. You can talk with② your friends
in English often. Reading is also important. Start with③ easy passages and then move on to more difficult articles. For writing, keep English diaries④ and try to use new words.
Practice makes perfect. ⑤ Keep practising every day, and you will make great progress.
Thank you!
亮点词块
①get used to 习惯于
②talk with 交谈
③Start with 以……开始
④keep English diaries 写英文日记
高分句子
⑤Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
进入初中以来,很多同学发觉英语比小学时难了很多,心里着急,却又找不到合适的方法。你愿意帮助他们吗?请写一份演讲稿,为他们学好英语提供一些有价值的建议。要求:80—100词。
| 听力 | 每天早晨花十分钟听英语…… |
| 口语 | 每天花十分钟练习语音;找一个朋友一起练习英语 |
| 阅读 | 经常阅读很重要;从简单的课文开始,慢慢转向困难的文章
|| 写作 | …… |
| 其他 | 熟能生巧,勤加练习…… |
审题指导:
1.体裁:应用文 2.时态:以一般现在时为主 3.人称:以第二人称为主
写作框架:
38 英语 八年级 上册 译林版
优秀范文:
Dear friends,
Do you find it a little difficult to learn English well now? Many students feel worried as English becomes harder. Here I have some useful advice for you.
For listening, spend ten minutes listening to English every morning. It helps you get used to① English sounds. As for speaking, spend ten minutes practising pronunciation every day. You can talk with② your friends
in English often. Reading is also important. Start with③ easy passages and then move on to more difficult articles. For writing, keep English diaries④ and try to use new words.Practice makes perfect. ⑤ Keep practising every day, and you will make great progress.
Thank you!
亮点词块
①get used to 习惯于
②talk with 交谈
③Start with 以……开始
④keep English diaries 写英文日记
高分句子
⑤Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
答案
Dear friends,
Do you find it a little difficult to learn English well now? Many students feel worried as English becomes harder. Here I have some useful advice for you.
For listening, spend ten minutes listening to English every morning to get used to English sounds. As for speaking, spend ten minutes practising pronunciation daily and talk with your friends in English often. Reading is important: start with easy passages then move to harder articles. For writing, keep English diaries and try to use new words.
Practice makes perfect. Keep practising and you will make great progress.
Thank you!
Do you find it a little difficult to learn English well now? Many students feel worried as English becomes harder. Here I have some useful advice for you.
For listening, spend ten minutes listening to English every morning to get used to English sounds. As for speaking, spend ten minutes practising pronunciation daily and talk with your friends in English often. Reading is important: start with easy passages then move to harder articles. For writing, keep English diaries and try to use new words.
Practice makes perfect. Keep practising and you will make great progress.
Thank you!
解析
【分析】本题要求写一篇80-100词的英语演讲稿，体裁为应用文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称为主，需围绕听力、口语、阅读、写作等方面给同学提供学好英语的建议。解题思路：先开头问候点明主题，引出很多同学觉得英语难的现状；再分点给出各方面具体可行的建议；最后用鼓励性语句结尾并致谢，注意运用亮点短语和高分句子，控制词数。
【解析】1. 开头：问候听众，点明很多同学觉得英语难，引出要提供建议；2. 分述建议：听力方面，每天花10分钟听英语；口语方面，每天花10分钟练发音，和朋友用英语交流；阅读方面，从简单文章开始，再转向难的；写作方面，写英文日记并尝试用新词；3. 结尾：用高分句子“Practice makes perfect.”鼓励坚持练习，最后致谢。
【答案】Dear friends,
Do you find it a little difficult to learn English well now? Many students feel worried as English becomes harder. Here I have some useful advice for you.
For listening, spend ten minutes listening to English every morning to get used to English sounds. As for speaking, spend ten minutes practising pronunciation daily and talk with your friends in English often. Reading is important: start with easy passages then move to harder articles. For writing, keep English diaries and try to use new words.
Practice makes perfect. Keep practising and you will make great progress.
Thank you!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语建议类表达、常用英语短语运用
【点评】该范文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰完整，内容具体可行，语言简洁流畅，运用了指定的亮点词块和高分句子，符合八年级学生的英语水平，能有效帮助同学掌握英语学习方法，达到了演讲稿的写作目的。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】1. 开头：问候听众，点明很多同学觉得英语难，引出要提供建议；2. 分述建议：听力方面，每天花10分钟听英语；口语方面，每天花10分钟练发音，和朋友用英语交流；阅读方面，从简单文章开始，再转向难的；写作方面，写英文日记并尝试用新词；3. 结尾：用高分句子“Practice makes perfect.”鼓励坚持练习，最后致谢。
【答案】Dear friends,
Do you find it a little difficult to learn English well now? Many students feel worried as English becomes harder. Here I have some useful advice for you.
For listening, spend ten minutes listening to English every morning to get used to English sounds. As for speaking, spend ten minutes practising pronunciation daily and talk with your friends in English often. Reading is important: start with easy passages then move to harder articles. For writing, keep English diaries and try to use new words.
Practice makes perfect. Keep practising and you will make great progress.
Thank you!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语建议类表达、常用英语短语运用
【点评】该范文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰完整，内容具体可行，语言简洁流畅，运用了指定的亮点词块和高分句子，符合八年级学生的英语水平，能有效帮助同学掌握英语学习方法，达到了演讲稿的写作目的。
【难度系数】0.3
