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答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D25
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Mike 对中国寓言故事很感兴趣。请你根据以下提示,告诉他《守株待兔》的寓言故事,内容包括:
1.时间、地点——古代中国;2.开始——农民曾经努力工作;3.经过——农民看到一只兔子撞到了树干;4.结果;5.寓言道理。
要求:1.90 词以上(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称;3.可适当增加细节,以使语句通顺、条理清楚、语义连贯;4.书写规范,卷面整洁。
参考词汇:树干(trunk);撞上(run into);寓言(fable);寓意(moral);庄稼(crop)
Dear Mike,
Learning that you're interested in Chinese fables, I am writing to
Yours,
Li Hua
答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D25
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Mike 对中国寓言故事很感兴趣。请你根据以下提示,告诉他《守株待兔》的寓言故事,内容包括:
1.时间、地点——古代中国;2.开始——农民曾经努力工作;3.经过——农民看到一只兔子撞到了树干;4.结果;5.寓言道理。
要求:1.90 词以上(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称;3.可适当增加细节,以使语句通顺、条理清楚、语义连贯;4.书写规范,卷面整洁。
参考词汇:树干(trunk);撞上(run into);寓言(fable);寓意(moral);庄稼(crop)
Dear Mike,
Learning that you're interested in Chinese fables, I am writing to
share a story about a farmer and a rabbit with you.
In ancient China, there was a farmer. Because of his hard work, his crops grew best in the village. One day, while working, he saw a rabbit run into a tree trunk and die. The farmer got the rabbit without any effort. From that day on, instead of working hard, the farmer sat beside the tree trunk every day, waiting for more rabbits to come. Days turned into weeks, but no more rabbits appeared. What's worse, his crops were all dead.
The moral of the fable is that we should never depend on luck. The harder we work, the luckier we will be. How do you find this fable? I'm looking forward to your reply.
In ancient China, there was a farmer. Because of his hard work, his crops grew best in the village. One day, while working, he saw a rabbit run into a tree trunk and die. The farmer got the rabbit without any effort. From that day on, instead of working hard, the farmer sat beside the tree trunk every day, waiting for more rabbits to come. Days turned into weeks, but no more rabbits appeared. What's worse, his crops were all dead.
The moral of the fable is that we should never depend on luck. The harder we work, the luckier we will be. How do you find this fable? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
主题写作专项
＞ 基础版范文
Dear Mike,
Learning that you're interested in Chinese fables, I am writing to share a story about a farmer and a rabbit with you.
In ancient China, there was a farmer. Because of his hard work, his crops grew best in the village. One day, while working, he saw a rabbit run into a tree trunk and die. The farmer got the rabbit without any effort. From that day on, instead of working hard, the farmer sat beside the tree trunk every day, waiting for more rabbits to come. Days turned into weeks, but no more rabbits appeared. What's worse, his crops were all dead.
The moral of the fable is that we should never depend on luck. The harder we work, the luckier we will be. How do you find this fable? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear Mike,
Learning that you're interested in Chinese fables, I am writing to share a story about a farmer and a rabbit with you.
In ancient China, there lived a farmer who spent all his days working hard in the fields, so his crops grew better than anyone else's. One day, while he was busy working, a rabbit, running in a hurry, crashed into a tree trunk. It died right away. The farmer got the rabbit without any effort. After that, he no longer wanted to work and just sat beside the tree trunk, waiting for more rabbits to come and hit the tree. Days passed, but not a single rabbit showed up. To make things even worse, all of his crops died.
This fable teaches us that we should never rely on luck. The harder we work, the more luck we seem to have. How do you find this fable? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 基础版范文
Dear Mike,
Learning that you're interested in Chinese fables, I am writing to share a story about a farmer and a rabbit with you.
In ancient China, there was a farmer. Because of his hard work, his crops grew best in the village. One day, while working, he saw a rabbit run into a tree trunk and die. The farmer got the rabbit without any effort. From that day on, instead of working hard, the farmer sat beside the tree trunk every day, waiting for more rabbits to come. Days turned into weeks, but no more rabbits appeared. What's worse, his crops were all dead.
The moral of the fable is that we should never depend on luck. The harder we work, the luckier we will be. How do you find this fable? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear Mike,
Learning that you're interested in Chinese fables, I am writing to share a story about a farmer and a rabbit with you.
In ancient China, there lived a farmer who spent all his days working hard in the fields, so his crops grew better than anyone else's. One day, while he was busy working, a rabbit, running in a hurry, crashed into a tree trunk. It died right away. The farmer got the rabbit without any effort. After that, he no longer wanted to work and just sat beside the tree trunk, waiting for more rabbits to come and hit the tree. Days passed, but not a single rabbit showed up. To make things even worse, all of his crops died.
This fable teaches us that we should never rely on luck. The harder we work, the more luck we seem to have. How do you find this fable? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语应用文写作题，要求以李华的身份给英国笔友Mike介绍中国寓言《守株待兔》。解题思路：1. 承接已给开头，点明要分享的寓言故事；2. 按要求依次补充核心要点：说明故事发生的时间（古代中国）、地点（田间），描述农民原本努力劳作使庄稼长势好的情况，讲述兔子撞树干的经过，说明农民后续坐等兔子不再劳作导致庄稼枯死的结果，最后点明寓言的寓意；3. 补充合理细节使语句连贯，控制词数在90词以上，符合书信格式，结尾按要求询问对方看法并期待回复。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开头：承接已给内容，明确提出要分享《守株待兔》的故事；
2. 主体部分：① 交代故事背景：古代中国，有一位努力劳作的农民，庄稼是村里最好的；② 讲述经过：劳作时看到兔子撞树干死亡，轻松得到兔子；③ 说明结果：农民不再劳作，坐等兔子，既没等到兔子，庄稼也枯死；④ 点明寓意：不能依赖运气，要靠努力；
3. 结尾：询问对方对寓言的看法，期待回复，符合书信格式。
【答案】
Dear Mike,
Learning that you're interested in Chinese fables, I am writing to share a story about a farmer and a rabbit with you.
In ancient China, there was a farmer. Because of his hard work, his crops grew best in the village. One day, while working, he saw a rabbit run into a tree trunk and die. The farmer got the rabbit without any effort. From that day on, instead of working hard, the farmer sat beside the tree trunk every day, waiting for more rabbits to come. Days turned into weeks, but no more rabbits appeared. What's worse, his crops were all dead.
The moral of the fable is that we should never depend on luck. The harder we work, the luckier we will be. How do you find this fable? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；寓言故事英文表达；英语书信格式
【点评】
本题考查学生英语应用文写作能力，要求准确传达寓言故事的核心内容，符合书信格式，补充细节使语句连贯，同时掌握寓言寓意的英文表达，是对学生语言组织和应用能力的综合考查。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一道英语应用文写作题，要求以李华的身份给英国笔友Mike介绍中国寓言《守株待兔》。解题思路：1. 承接已给开头，点明要分享的寓言故事；2. 按要求依次补充核心要点：说明故事发生的时间（古代中国）、地点（田间），描述农民原本努力劳作使庄稼长势好的情况，讲述兔子撞树干的经过，说明农民后续坐等兔子不再劳作导致庄稼枯死的结果，最后点明寓言的寓意；3. 补充合理细节使语句连贯，控制词数在90词以上，符合书信格式，结尾按要求询问对方看法并期待回复。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开头：承接已给内容，明确提出要分享《守株待兔》的故事；
2. 主体部分：① 交代故事背景：古代中国，有一位努力劳作的农民，庄稼是村里最好的；② 讲述经过：劳作时看到兔子撞树干死亡，轻松得到兔子；③ 说明结果：农民不再劳作，坐等兔子，既没等到兔子，庄稼也枯死；④ 点明寓意：不能依赖运气，要靠努力；
3. 结尾：询问对方对寓言的看法，期待回复，符合书信格式。
【答案】
Dear Mike,
Learning that you're interested in Chinese fables, I am writing to share a story about a farmer and a rabbit with you.
In ancient China, there was a farmer. Because of his hard work, his crops grew best in the village. One day, while working, he saw a rabbit run into a tree trunk and die. The farmer got the rabbit without any effort. From that day on, instead of working hard, the farmer sat beside the tree trunk every day, waiting for more rabbits to come. Days turned into weeks, but no more rabbits appeared. What's worse, his crops were all dead.
The moral of the fable is that we should never depend on luck. The harder we work, the luckier we will be. How do you find this fable? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；寓言故事英文表达；英语书信格式
【点评】
本题考查学生英语应用文写作能力，要求准确传达寓言故事的核心内容，符合书信格式，补充细节使语句连贯，同时掌握寓言寓意的英文表达，是对学生语言组织和应用能力的综合考查。
【难度系数】
0.5
