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[高分范文]
Helping the old adapt to a digital society
Nowadays, mobile payment is very popular in China. So how to help the old adapt to a digital society is very important. ①
As everyone knows, the old have difficulty learning new things. Whenever we meet the old in trouble, we are supposed to make every effort to teach them. Only in this way can they keep up with the times. ② The more they learn, the more easily they can adapt to society. Last but not least, it's time for our government to take steps to bridge the digital gap and provide them with convenient living services. ③
Hopefully, with our joint efforts, the old can adapt themselves to a digital society quickly and live a good life.
[名师点评]
本文是一篇议论文,从个人和政府两个层面提出了帮助老年人适应数字化社会的建议。
① 文章开篇点题,介绍了主旨大意。
② Whenever 引导的时间状语从句和 Only 引导的倒装句丰富了文章的内涵,增强了文章的可读性。
③ have difficulty doing sth.、be supposed to do sth. 和 provide sb. with sth. 等短语的使用体现了作者扎实的写作功底。
[高分范文]
Helping the old adapt to a digital society
Nowadays, mobile payment is very popular in China. So how to help the old adapt to a digital society is very important. ①
As everyone knows, the old have difficulty learning new things. Whenever we meet the old in trouble, we are supposed to make every effort to teach them. Only in this way can they keep up with the times. ② The more they learn, the more easily they can adapt to society. Last but not least, it's time for our government to take steps to bridge the digital gap and provide them with convenient living services. ③
Hopefully, with our joint efforts, the old can adapt themselves to a digital society quickly and live a good life.
[名师点评]
本文是一篇议论文,从个人和政府两个层面提出了帮助老年人适应数字化社会的建议。
① 文章开篇点题,介绍了主旨大意。
② Whenever 引导的时间状语从句和 Only 引导的倒装句丰富了文章的内涵,增强了文章的可读性。
③ have difficulty doing sth.、be supposed to do sth. 和 provide sb. with sth. 等短语的使用体现了作者扎实的写作功底。
答案
Helping the old adapt to a digital society
Nowadays, mobile payment is very popular in China. So how to help the old adapt to a digital society is very important.
As everyone knows, the old have difficulty learning new things. Whenever we meet the old in trouble, we are supposed to make every effort to teach them. Only in this way can they keep up with the times. The more they learn, the more easily they can adapt to society. Last but not least, it's time for our government to take steps to bridge the digital gap and provide them with convenient living services.
Hopefully, with our joint efforts, the old can adapt themselves to a digital society quickly and live a good life.
Nowadays, mobile payment is very popular in China. So how to help the old adapt to a digital society is very important.
As everyone knows, the old have difficulty learning new things. Whenever we meet the old in trouble, we are supposed to make every effort to teach them. Only in this way can they keep up with the times. The more they learn, the more easily they can adapt to society. Last but not least, it's time for our government to take steps to bridge the digital gap and provide them with convenient living services.
Hopefully, with our joint efforts, the old can adapt themselves to a digital society quickly and live a good life.
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以“Helping the old adapt to a digital society”为题写一篇不少于80词的投稿短文，需阐述观点与建议。解题思路为：首先开篇点题，点明数字社会（如移动支付普及）的背景，引出帮助老人适应数字社会的重要性；其次主体部分从个人和政府两个层面提出具体建议，运用所学短语与句式丰富表达；最后结尾总结，表达美好期望，确保符合投稿的正式且自然的语气。
【解析】写作时遵循以下步骤：① 开篇：直接点明数字社会现状，如“Nowadays, mobile payment is very popular in China.”，引出主题“how to help the old adapt to a digital society is very important”；② 主体：从个人层面说明老人学习新事物有困难，我们应主动帮助，运用“have difficulty learning”“be supposed to”“Only引导的倒装句”等表达，再从政府层面提出采取措施缩小数字鸿沟、提供便利服务；③ 结尾：总结并表达对老人适应数字社会的期望，确保词数达标、语言流畅。
【答案】Helping the old adapt to a digital society
Nowadays, mobile payment is very popular in China. So how to help the old adapt to a digital society is very important.
As everyone knows, the old have difficulty learning new things. Whenever we meet the old in trouble, we are supposed to make every effort to teach them. Only in this way can they keep up with the times. The more they learn, the more easily they can adapt to society. Last but not least, it's time for our government to take steps to bridge the digital gap and provide them with convenient living services.
Hopefully, with our joint efforts, the old can adapt themselves to a digital society quickly and live a good life.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语短语运用、英语特殊句式
【点评】本文结构清晰，紧扣主题，从个人与政府双维度提出合理建议，运用了丰富的短语与句式，语言地道，符合投稿要求，是一篇优秀的英语写作范文。
【难度系数】0.4
【解析】写作时遵循以下步骤：① 开篇：直接点明数字社会现状，如“Nowadays, mobile payment is very popular in China.”，引出主题“how to help the old adapt to a digital society is very important”；② 主体：从个人层面说明老人学习新事物有困难，我们应主动帮助，运用“have difficulty learning”“be supposed to”“Only引导的倒装句”等表达，再从政府层面提出采取措施缩小数字鸿沟、提供便利服务；③ 结尾：总结并表达对老人适应数字社会的期望，确保词数达标、语言流畅。
【答案】Helping the old adapt to a digital society
Nowadays, mobile payment is very popular in China. So how to help the old adapt to a digital society is very important.
As everyone knows, the old have difficulty learning new things. Whenever we meet the old in trouble, we are supposed to make every effort to teach them. Only in this way can they keep up with the times. The more they learn, the more easily they can adapt to society. Last but not least, it's time for our government to take steps to bridge the digital gap and provide them with convenient living services.
Hopefully, with our joint efforts, the old can adapt themselves to a digital society quickly and live a good life.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语短语运用、英语特殊句式
【点评】本文结构清晰，紧扣主题，从个人与政府双维度提出合理建议，运用了丰富的短语与句式，语言地道，符合投稿要求，是一篇优秀的英语写作范文。
【难度系数】0.4
[名言警句]
So near, yet so far, just a screen apart.
咫尺天涯，一屏之隔。
写作演练＞＞
请你根据下面表格里的内容，以“My view（看法）on watching videos on the mobile phone”为话题，完成80～100词的短文。
[思路点拨]
1. 时态：一般现在时。2. 人称：在介绍现象和优缺点时，用第三人称；在介绍自己的观点时，用第一人称。3. 写作时，应先写现状，再写优点和缺点，最后写自己的观点。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
So near, yet so far, just a screen apart.
咫尺天涯，一屏之隔。
写作演练＞＞
请你根据下面表格里的内容，以“My view（看法）on watching videos on the mobile phone”为话题，完成80～100词的短文。
[思路点拨]
1. 时态：一般现在时。2. 人称：在介绍现象和优缺点时，用第三人称；在介绍自己的观点时，用第一人称。3. 写作时，应先写现状，再写优点和缺点，最后写自己的观点。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
答案
One possible version:
More and more young people are interested in watching videos on the mobile phone.
By watching the videos, we can not only relax ourselves but also learn the latest information. They also play an educational role in our daily lives.
However, the videos are bad for our eyes. What's more, watching too many videos can influence our health because we have no time to exercise.
In my opinion, to keep our eyes and body healthy, we should take more exercise instead of watching the videos on the mobile phones. And we should spend most of our time studying.
More and more young people are interested in watching videos on the mobile phone.
By watching the videos, we can not only relax ourselves but also learn the latest information. They also play an educational role in our daily lives.
However, the videos are bad for our eyes. What's more, watching too many videos can influence our health because we have no time to exercise.
In my opinion, to keep our eyes and body healthy, we should take more exercise instead of watching the videos on the mobile phones. And we should spend most of our time studying.
解析
【分析】
本次写作要求围绕“My view on watching videos on the mobile phone”话题，完成80～100词的短文，需遵循“现状→优点→缺点→个人观点”的结构；时态统一用一般现在时，介绍现象、优缺点时用第三人称，表达个人观点时用第一人称；需紧扣核心要点，语言通顺自然。
【解析】
第一步，描述现状：点明越来越多年轻人喜欢用手机看视频的现象；第二步，阐述优点：说明看视频可放松身心、获取最新信息，还具有教育作用；第三步，说明缺点：指出看视频伤眼，且过度观看会因占用运动时间影响健康；第四步，表达观点：提出多锻炼、少看视频、多花时间学习的建议，确保内容符合字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
More and more young people are interested in watching videos on the mobile phone.
By watching the videos, we can not only relax ourselves but also learn the latest information. They also play an educational role in our daily lives.
However, the videos are bad for our eyes. What's more, watching too many videos can influence our health because we have no time to exercise.
In my opinion, to keep our eyes and body healthy, we should take more exercise instead of watching the videos on the mobile phones. And we should spend most of our time studying.
【知识点】
英语话题作文写作、一般现在时运用、优缺点论述结构
【点评】
该作文结构清晰，紧扣话题核心要点，时态、人称使用准确，语言简洁流畅，符合80～100词的字数要求，是一篇符合题目要求的优秀范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
本次写作要求围绕“My view on watching videos on the mobile phone”话题，完成80～100词的短文，需遵循“现状→优点→缺点→个人观点”的结构；时态统一用一般现在时，介绍现象、优缺点时用第三人称，表达个人观点时用第一人称；需紧扣核心要点，语言通顺自然。
【解析】
第一步，描述现状：点明越来越多年轻人喜欢用手机看视频的现象；第二步，阐述优点：说明看视频可放松身心、获取最新信息，还具有教育作用；第三步，说明缺点：指出看视频伤眼，且过度观看会因占用运动时间影响健康；第四步，表达观点：提出多锻炼、少看视频、多花时间学习的建议，确保内容符合字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
More and more young people are interested in watching videos on the mobile phone.
By watching the videos, we can not only relax ourselves but also learn the latest information. They also play an educational role in our daily lives.
However, the videos are bad for our eyes. What's more, watching too many videos can influence our health because we have no time to exercise.
In my opinion, to keep our eyes and body healthy, we should take more exercise instead of watching the videos on the mobile phones. And we should spend most of our time studying.
【知识点】
英语话题作文写作、一般现在时运用、优缺点论述结构
【点评】
该作文结构清晰，紧扣话题核心要点，时态、人称使用准确，语言简洁流畅，符合80～100词的字数要求，是一篇符合题目要求的优秀范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
