(一)写作任务
假如你校校报正在组织征文比赛,你想写一篇英语短文参赛。征文主题是“我最喜欢的季节”,词数80左右。
(二)写作语料
1. ... is my favourite season.
2. I always enjoy spring/summer/autumn/winter because...
3. The temperature is usually...
4. It is often sunny/windy/rainy...
5. During this season, you can/cannot...
6. My friends and I often...
(三)谋篇布局
Part 1:点明主题
1. Autumn is my favourite season.
2. In my city, autumn starts in September and ends in November.
Part 2:喜欢的原因
1. When autumn comes, the weather is cool and the sky is clear.
2. Leaves begin to turn yellow, brown and red.
3. Autumn is a harvest season. Farmers are busy harvesting crops in the fields.
4. During this season, we can celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival and National Day with our family.
Part 3:你的感想
I like autumn best because it's colourful.
(四)习作欣赏
My favourite season—autumn
Among the four seasons, autumn is my favourite.
It is usually sunny without clouds, and people always feel cool in this season. The temperature is not too high or too low. There are many things to do in autumn. It is the best time to go out and have a picnic. We can enjoy everything in nature. Also, many people will have a family trip outside at this time of the year.
The Mid-Autumn Festival is in September or October. People eat mooncakes and enjoy the full moon on that day. It is so fun.
What good memories I can have on autumn days!
(五)我的习作
假如你校校报正在组织征文比赛,你想写一篇英语短文参赛。征文主题是“我最喜欢的季节”,词数80左右。
(二)写作语料
1. ... is my favourite season.
2. I always enjoy spring/summer/autumn/winter because...
3. The temperature is usually...
4. It is often sunny/windy/rainy...
5. During this season, you can/cannot...
6. My friends and I often...
(三)谋篇布局
Part 1:点明主题
1. Autumn is my favourite season.
2. In my city, autumn starts in September and ends in November.
Part 2:喜欢的原因
1. When autumn comes, the weather is cool and the sky is clear.
2. Leaves begin to turn yellow, brown and red.
3. Autumn is a harvest season. Farmers are busy harvesting crops in the fields.
4. During this season, we can celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival and National Day with our family.
Part 3:你的感想
I like autumn best because it's colourful.
(四)习作欣赏
My favourite season—autumn
Among the four seasons, autumn is my favourite.
It is usually sunny without clouds, and people always feel cool in this season. The temperature is not too high or too low. There are many things to do in autumn. It is the best time to go out and have a picnic. We can enjoy everything in nature. Also, many people will have a family trip outside at this time of the year.
The Mid-Autumn Festival is in September or October. People eat mooncakes and enjoy the full moon on that day. It is so fun.
What good memories I can have on autumn days!
(五)我的习作
答案
My favourite season
Autumn is my favourite season. In my city, it starts in September and ends in November.
The temperature is usually not too high or too low. It is often sunny and the wind feels cool. Leaves turn yellow, brown and red, making the world very colourful. During this season, we can celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival with our family. My friends and I often go on a picnic in the open air on fine days.
I always enjoy autumn because it brings me so much fun.
Autumn is my favourite season. In my city, it starts in September and ends in November.
The temperature is usually not too high or too low. It is often sunny and the wind feels cool. Leaves turn yellow, brown and red, making the world very colourful. During this season, we can celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival with our family. My friends and I often go on a picnic in the open air on fine days.
I always enjoy autumn because it brings me so much fun.
解析
本次写作要求围绕“我最喜欢的季节”主题完成一篇80词左右的英语参赛短文,可参照给出的语料和谋篇布局完成:首先开篇点明自己最喜欢的季节,介绍该季节在本地的时间范围;接着描述对应季节的天气特征、自然景色、特色活动,说明喜爱该季节的理由;最后收尾抒发个人感想,注意使用八年级已学的词汇语法,保证语句通顺,词数符合要求。
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