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八、(2026·宿迁市宿豫中学月考)书面表达。(共17分)
2025年10月18日,我国受人尊敬的科学巨匠杨振宁(Chen-Ning Yang)先生于北京逝世。他毕生深耕物理科学领域,以卓越成就照亮科研之路,其爱国情怀与永不言弃的精神将永远激励我们前行。请你根据提示的内容,写一篇英语短文,简要介绍并适当发表自己的观点。内容要点如下:
要求:1. 内容须包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3. 词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
A Respected Scientific Giant
Chen-Ning Yang, a respected scientific giant in our country, passed away on October 18th, 2025.
2025年10月18日,我国受人尊敬的科学巨匠杨振宁(Chen-Ning Yang)先生于北京逝世。他毕生深耕物理科学领域,以卓越成就照亮科研之路,其爱国情怀与永不言弃的精神将永远激励我们前行。请你根据提示的内容,写一篇英语短文,简要介绍并适当发表自己的观点。内容要点如下:
要求:1. 内容须包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3. 词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
A Respected Scientific Giant
Chen-Ning Yang, a respected scientific giant in our country, passed away on October 18th, 2025.
He was born in Hefei in 1922.
From a young age, he showed an interest in science and had great talent. In 1942, he entered Tsinghua University to study.
Later, he went to the United States for further study in 1945, where he met many scientists from around the world.
As a scientist, he put all his life into scientific research. He is best known for winning the Nobel Prize in Physics.
We should learn from his never-give-up spirit.
His love for our country and his achievements will always inspire us to work harder.
答案
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A Respected Scientific Giant
Chen-Ning Yang, a respected scientific giant in our country, passed away on October 18th, 2025. He was born in Hefei in 1922.
From a young age, he showed an interest in science and had great talent. In 1942, he entered Tsinghua University to study. Later, he went to the United States for further study in 1945, where he met many scientists from around the world. As a scientist, he put all his life into scientific research. He is best known for winning the Nobel Prize in Physics. We should learn from his never-give-up spirit. His love for our country and his achievements will always inspire us to work harder.
A Respected Scientific Giant
Chen-Ning Yang, a respected scientific giant in our country, passed away on October 18th, 2025. He was born in Hefei in 1922.
From a young age, he showed an interest in science and had great talent. In 1942, he entered Tsinghua University to study. Later, he went to the United States for further study in 1945, where he met many scientists from around the world. As a scientist, he put all his life into scientific research. He is best known for winning the Nobel Prize in Physics. We should learn from his never-give-up spirit. His love for our country and his achievements will always inspire us to work harder.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，解题思路如下：首先明确需涵盖表格中所有核心要点（出生年份及地点、科学才能、学习历程、科研成就、感悟愿望）；其次结合已给出的开头，按逻辑顺序（从出生到成长、学习、成就再到感悟）组织内容；最后确保语句通顺连贯，词数符合要求，适当补充细节使文章更饱满，同时保证语法正确、用词恰当。
【解析】根据题目要求，需将给定的要点逐一融入短文：先承接开头介绍杨振宁的出生信息（1922年生于合肥），再依次说明其从小对科学感兴趣且有天赋、1942年入清华大学学习、1945年赴美深造并结识各国科学家，接着阐述他一生致力于科学研究、因获诺贝尔物理学奖闻名，最后表达要学习他永不放弃的精神等感悟，适当补充爱国情怀相关内容，使文章符合词数要求且连贯自然。
【答案】A Respected Scientific Giant
Chen-Ning Yang, a respected scientific giant in our country, passed away on October 18th, 2025. He was born in Hefei in 1922.
From a young age, he showed an interest in science and had great talent. In 1942, he entered Tsinghua University to study. Later, he went to the United States for further study in 1945, where he met many scientists from around the world. As a scientist, he put all his life into scientific research. He is best known for winning the Nobel Prize in Physics. We should learn from his never-give-up spirit. His love for our country and his achievements will always inspire us to work harder.
【知识点】英语书面表达、要点整合、词汇运用
【点评】本题考查学生的英语写作能力，要求学生准确整合给定信息，合理组织语言，适当发挥，既考查基础语言知识的运用，又考查信息整合与书面表达能力，是初中英语常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】根据题目要求，需将给定的要点逐一融入短文：先承接开头介绍杨振宁的出生信息（1922年生于合肥），再依次说明其从小对科学感兴趣且有天赋、1942年入清华大学学习、1945年赴美深造并结识各国科学家，接着阐述他一生致力于科学研究、因获诺贝尔物理学奖闻名，最后表达要学习他永不放弃的精神等感悟，适当补充爱国情怀相关内容，使文章符合词数要求且连贯自然。
【答案】A Respected Scientific Giant
Chen-Ning Yang, a respected scientific giant in our country, passed away on October 18th, 2025. He was born in Hefei in 1922.
From a young age, he showed an interest in science and had great talent. In 1942, he entered Tsinghua University to study. Later, he went to the United States for further study in 1945, where he met many scientists from around the world. As a scientist, he put all his life into scientific research. He is best known for winning the Nobel Prize in Physics. We should learn from his never-give-up spirit. His love for our country and his achievements will always inspire us to work harder.
【知识点】英语书面表达、要点整合、词汇运用
【点评】本题考查学生的英语写作能力，要求学生准确整合给定信息，合理组织语言，适当发挥，既考查基础语言知识的运用，又考查信息整合与书面表达能力，是初中英语常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
