八、书面表达(19分)
假如你是李明,你的英国网友Peter给你写了一封信,想具体了解你和你的同学进行课外阅读的相关情况。请你根据Peter的来信,用英语写一封回信。
Dear Ming,
Glad to hear from you. You said at present only a few students do some reading in their free time. I'm very surprised to hear that. Why don't they have enough time to read books? What do they often do after class? Do they spend much time playing computer games? How much time do you spend on reading? What types of books do you like best? In your opinion,why do students need to read books?
Hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes!
Peter
注意事项:
1. 信件必须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;2. 词数100左右,信件的首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm very happy to share my ideas about reading with you.
Yours,
Li Ming
假如你是李明,你的英国网友Peter给你写了一封信,想具体了解你和你的同学进行课外阅读的相关情况。请你根据Peter的来信,用英语写一封回信。
Dear Ming,
Glad to hear from you. You said at present only a few students do some reading in their free time. I'm very surprised to hear that. Why don't they have enough time to read books? What do they often do after class? Do they spend much time playing computer games? How much time do you spend on reading? What types of books do you like best? In your opinion,why do students need to read books?
Hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes!
Peter
注意事项:
1. 信件必须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;2. 词数100左右,信件的首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm very happy to share my ideas about reading with you.
Yours,
Li Ming
答案
八、One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm very happy to share my ideas about reading with you.
Now most students have much homework to do every day. As a result, they don't have good reading habits. Moreover, they spend much time playing computer games and chatting on the internet in their spare time. Every day I read books for about half an hour, and I like reading history books best.
I think we should spend as much time as we can reading good books. Reading can not only help us get more knowledge but also make us wise. And it's also helpful to make us grow
→make sb/sth+adj.使某人/某物变得……
happily. Good books help us relax after a busy day. They also open up a whole new world to us.
In my opinion, reading is always wonderful. The more books we read, the better we will become.
Yours,
Li Ming
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为书信。②时态:以一般现在时为主。③提示:要根据信件中的问题一一阐述写作要点,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,回答为什么一些学生没有足够的时间阅读、他们课后都在做什么,并介绍自己喜欢阅读的书籍及所花的时间;
第二步,谈谈学生需要阅读的原因;第三步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①as a result 结果 ②reading habits 阅读习惯 ③spend time doing sth花时间做某事
[高分句型]
①Reading can not only help us get more knowledge but also make us wise. (not only ... but also ...并列结构)
②The more books we read, the better we will become. (the+比较级...,the+比较级...结构)
Dear Peter,
I'm very happy to share my ideas about reading with you.
Now most students have much homework to do every day. As a result, they don't have good reading habits. Moreover, they spend much time playing computer games and chatting on the internet in their spare time. Every day I read books for about half an hour, and I like reading history books best.
I think we should spend as much time as we can reading good books. Reading can not only help us get more knowledge but also make us wise. And it's also helpful to make us grow
→make sb/sth+adj.使某人/某物变得……
happily. Good books help us relax after a busy day. They also open up a whole new world to us.
In my opinion, reading is always wonderful. The more books we read, the better we will become.
Yours,
Li Ming
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为书信。②时态:以一般现在时为主。③提示:要根据信件中的问题一一阐述写作要点,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,回答为什么一些学生没有足够的时间阅读、他们课后都在做什么,并介绍自己喜欢阅读的书籍及所花的时间;
第二步,谈谈学生需要阅读的原因;第三步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①as a result 结果 ②reading habits 阅读习惯 ③spend time doing sth花时间做某事
[高分句型]
①Reading can not only help us get more knowledge but also make us wise. (not only ... but also ...并列结构)
②The more books we read, the better we will become. (the+比较级...,the+比较级...结构)
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书信写作题,需根据英国网友Peter提出的6个问题(学生没时间阅读的原因、课后活动、是否花时间玩电脑游戏、自己的阅读时间、喜欢的书籍类型、阅读的重要性)逐一回应,遵循书信格式,以一般现在时为主,词数控制在100左右,适当发挥使内容连贯。解题思路分三步:1. 回应前三个问题及自己的阅读情况;2. 阐述阅读对学生的重要性;3. 总结观点,确保覆盖所有要点,运用合适词汇和句型提升表达。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:1. 承接开头,第一段先说明多数学生因作业多没时间阅读,课后多花时间玩电脑游戏或上网;接着介绍自己每天阅读约半小时,最喜欢历史书。2. 第二段阐述阅读的重要性:用“not only...but also...”说明阅读能增知识、使人明智,还能放松、开阔视野;用“the+比较级...the+比较级”总结阅读的好处。3. 结尾总结观点,符合书信格式,控制词数,语句通顺。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I'm very happy to share my ideas about reading with you.
Now most students have much homework to do every day. As a result, they don't have good reading habits. Moreover, they spend much time playing computer games and chatting on the internet in their spare time. Every day I read books for about half an hour, and I like reading history books best.
I think we should spend as much time as we can reading good books. Reading can not only help us get more knowledge but also make us wise. And it's also helpful to make us grow happily. Good books help us relax after a busy day. They also open up a whole new world to us.
In my opinion, reading is always wonderful. The more books we read, the better we will become.
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英语书信写作、常用英语句式运用、一般现在时
【点评】
本文覆盖所有题目要点,结构清晰、逻辑连贯;运用了“not only...but also...”“the+比较级...the+比较级”等高分句型,词汇丰富恰当,符合英语书面表达要求,是优秀范文,适合学生借鉴学习。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书信写作题,需根据英国网友Peter提出的6个问题(学生没时间阅读的原因、课后活动、是否花时间玩电脑游戏、自己的阅读时间、喜欢的书籍类型、阅读的重要性)逐一回应,遵循书信格式,以一般现在时为主,词数控制在100左右,适当发挥使内容连贯。解题思路分三步:1. 回应前三个问题及自己的阅读情况;2. 阐述阅读对学生的重要性;3. 总结观点,确保覆盖所有要点,运用合适词汇和句型提升表达。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:1. 承接开头,第一段先说明多数学生因作业多没时间阅读,课后多花时间玩电脑游戏或上网;接着介绍自己每天阅读约半小时,最喜欢历史书。2. 第二段阐述阅读的重要性:用“not only...but also...”说明阅读能增知识、使人明智,还能放松、开阔视野;用“the+比较级...the+比较级”总结阅读的好处。3. 结尾总结观点,符合书信格式,控制词数,语句通顺。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I'm very happy to share my ideas about reading with you.
Now most students have much homework to do every day. As a result, they don't have good reading habits. Moreover, they spend much time playing computer games and chatting on the internet in their spare time. Every day I read books for about half an hour, and I like reading history books best.
I think we should spend as much time as we can reading good books. Reading can not only help us get more knowledge but also make us wise. And it's also helpful to make us grow happily. Good books help us relax after a busy day. They also open up a whole new world to us.
In my opinion, reading is always wonderful. The more books we read, the better we will become.
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英语书信写作、常用英语句式运用、一般现在时
【点评】
本文覆盖所有题目要点,结构清晰、逻辑连贯;运用了“not only...but also...”“the+比较级...the+比较级”等高分句型,词汇丰富恰当,符合英语书面表达要求,是优秀范文,适合学生借鉴学习。
【难度系数】
0.6
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