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本单元的主题是“奇境”，要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型写故事。与此相关的写作维度有：①讲述一个故事；②完成故事续写。
考查学生写故事的命题方式有多种，如：根据文字叙述、表格信息、图片和思维导图等，写一篇记叙文、回一封信或电子邮件等，讲述神话故事、童话故事、成语故事、中外传说等。通常要介绍：故事发生的时间、地点、人物，故事的起因、经过、结局，以及从故事中得到的启示等内容。
写作实例
我国有很多经典故事，它们是中华传统文化的一部分。请你以“My favourite story”为题，用英语写一篇短文介绍你最喜爱的故事。内容包括：
1. What is your favourite story? 2. What does the story talk about? 3. What do you learn from this story?
要求：1.条理清晰，内容完整，语句通顺，书写工整；
2.包括所有提示内容，不少于 90 词。
参考词汇：经典的 classic 移山 move the mountains 受感动的 moved
My favourite story
审题指导
1.体裁：说明文 2.时态：以一般过去时为主 3.人称：以第三人称为主
4.必备词汇：①classic stories 经典故事 ②once upon a time 从前 ③an old man named...一位名为……的老人 ④walk to the other side 走到另一边 ⑤decide to do sth.决定做某事 ⑥keep doing sth.坚持做某事 ⑦day after day 日复一日 ⑧teach sb. a good lesson 给某人一个好的启示
谋篇布局
佳作剖析教材原文P99 I like the Monkey King best.P102... so she decided to...P101 That story teaches us a good lesson for life: never give up on our goals.
优秀范文My favourite storyThere are many classic stories in China. Among all the stories, I like Yu Gong Moves the Mountains best①.Once upon a time②, there was an old man named Yu Gong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that② it took him a long time to walk to the other side. So he decided to move the mountains. Yu Gong and his family began to move the mountains. They kept moving② them day after day②, year after year. Finally, a god was very moved and took the mountains away.②The story teaches us a good lesson for life: never give up on our goals.③
亮点评析①恰当使用最高级介绍故事名称。②该段中 once upon a time、keep doing sth.、day after day 以及 so...that...的复合句，是高级表达，提升了文章的档次。③结尾使用所学句型说明故事的启示。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①for the first time 第一次 ②main character 主要人物 ③live on a farm 住在农场 ④pick up 捡起 ⑤make new friends 结交新朋友 ⑥run away from danger 逃离危险 ⑦to one's surprise 令某人惊讶的是 ⑧The story begins in spring.故事开始于春天。⑨Luckily, his friends help save him in the end.幸运的是，他的朋友们最终帮忙救了他。
写作实战
答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D45
本单元主要节选了《爱丽丝梦游仙境》的一篇故事，看完这篇故事后你是否好奇后面的发展呢？请根据下列提示用英文续写之后的故事。要点提示：
1. 吃完写着“吃我”的蛋糕后，爱丽丝越长越高；
2. 她能拿到钥匙了，但她却不能变小，出不去了，于是她感到害怕，并坐下来哭了。她的眼泪变成了一个大水池；
3. 这时候白兔来了，看到爱丽丝之后它感到很害怕，于是迅速逃离，并掉下了一把扇子；
4. 爱丽丝捡起扇子给自己扇风，发现自己在迅速变小，在她的泪水里游泳，在水池里她遇见了一只小老鼠和一些其他动物。在它们的帮助下，爱丽丝离开了那个大厅。
要求：1.文章包括提示内容，语言流畅，内容连贯，可适当发挥；2.词数不少于 90。
参考词汇：眼泪 tear 水池 pool
本单元的主题是“奇境”，要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型写故事。与此相关的写作维度有：①讲述一个故事；②完成故事续写。
考查学生写故事的命题方式有多种，如：根据文字叙述、表格信息、图片和思维导图等，写一篇记叙文、回一封信或电子邮件等，讲述神话故事、童话故事、成语故事、中外传说等。通常要介绍：故事发生的时间、地点、人物，故事的起因、经过、结局，以及从故事中得到的启示等内容。
写作实例
我国有很多经典故事，它们是中华传统文化的一部分。请你以“My favourite story”为题，用英语写一篇短文介绍你最喜爱的故事。内容包括：
1. What is your favourite story? 2. What does the story talk about? 3. What do you learn from this story?
要求：1.条理清晰，内容完整，语句通顺，书写工整；
2.包括所有提示内容，不少于 90 词。
参考词汇：经典的 classic 移山 move the mountains 受感动的 moved
My favourite story
审题指导
1.体裁：说明文 2.时态：以一般过去时为主 3.人称：以第三人称为主
4.必备词汇：①classic stories 经典故事 ②once upon a time 从前 ③an old man named...一位名为……的老人 ④walk to the other side 走到另一边 ⑤decide to do sth.决定做某事 ⑥keep doing sth.坚持做某事 ⑦day after day 日复一日 ⑧teach sb. a good lesson 给某人一个好的启示
谋篇布局
佳作剖析教材原文P99 I like the Monkey King best.P102... so she decided to...P101 That story teaches us a good lesson for life: never give up on our goals.
优秀范文My favourite storyThere are many classic stories in China. Among all the stories, I like Yu Gong Moves the Mountains best①.Once upon a time②, there was an old man named Yu Gong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that② it took him a long time to walk to the other side. So he decided to move the mountains. Yu Gong and his family began to move the mountains. They kept moving② them day after day②, year after year. Finally, a god was very moved and took the mountains away.②The story teaches us a good lesson for life: never give up on our goals.③
亮点评析①恰当使用最高级介绍故事名称。②该段中 once upon a time、keep doing sth.、day after day 以及 so...that...的复合句，是高级表达，提升了文章的档次。③结尾使用所学句型说明故事的启示。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①for the first time 第一次 ②main character 主要人物 ③live on a farm 住在农场 ④pick up 捡起 ⑤make new friends 结交新朋友 ⑥run away from danger 逃离危险 ⑦to one's surprise 令某人惊讶的是 ⑧The story begins in spring.故事开始于春天。⑨Luckily, his friends help save him in the end.幸运的是，他的朋友们最终帮忙救了他。
写作实战
答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D45
本单元主要节选了《爱丽丝梦游仙境》的一篇故事，看完这篇故事后你是否好奇后面的发展呢？请根据下列提示用英文续写之后的故事。要点提示：
1. 吃完写着“吃我”的蛋糕后，爱丽丝越长越高；
2. 她能拿到钥匙了，但她却不能变小，出不去了，于是她感到害怕，并坐下来哭了。她的眼泪变成了一个大水池；
3. 这时候白兔来了，看到爱丽丝之后它感到很害怕，于是迅速逃离，并掉下了一把扇子；
4. 爱丽丝捡起扇子给自己扇风，发现自己在迅速变小，在她的泪水里游泳，在水池里她遇见了一只小老鼠和一些其他动物。在它们的帮助下，爱丽丝离开了那个大厅。
要求：1.文章包括提示内容，语言流畅，内容连贯，可适当发挥；2.词数不少于 90。
参考词汇：眼泪 tear 水池 pool
答案
My favourite storyThere are many classic stories in China. Among all the stories, I like Yu Gong Moves the Mountains best①.Once upon a time②, there was an old man named Yu Gong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that② it took him a long time to walk to the other side. So he decided to move the mountains. Yu Gong and his family began to move the mountains. They kept moving② them day after day②, year after year. Finally, a god was very moved and took the mountains away.②The story teaches us a good lesson for life: never give up on our goals.③
@@基础版范文After eating the “EAT ME” cake, Alice grew taller and taller. She could reach the key, but she couldn't become small any more. She could not go out. She was very afraid and started to cry.Soon, there was a large pool full of tears around her. At this moment, the white rabbit came back. When it saw Alice, it felt afraid and ran away quickly and dropped a fan.Alice picked up the fan and fanned herself, and found herself becoming smaller fast. She swam through her own tears. In the pool, she met a little mouse and some other animals. Finally, they helped Alice leave the hall.进阶版范文After eating the “EAT ME” cake, Alice found herself growing taller and taller. She could reach the key, but she couldn't become small any more. She could not go out. She was so afraid that she started to cry sadly.After a while, there was a large pool full of tears around her. At this moment, the white rabbit came back. When it saw Alice, it felt afraid and ran away quickly, and dropped a fan.Alice picked up the fan and fanned herself, and found herself becoming smaller fast. She swam through her own tears. In the pool, she met a little mouse and some other animals. With their help, Alice was finally able to leave the hall.
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：需根据给定提示续写《爱丽丝梦游仙境》的故事，要覆盖所有要点，语言流畅、内容连贯，词数不少于90词，时态以一般过去时为主。解题思路：1. 确定时态为一般过去时，确保动词形式正确；2. 按提示顺序梳理情节：吃蛋糕变高→拿钥匙却无法变小→害怕哭出眼泪池→白兔出现掉扇子→爱丽丝扇风变小→遇动物→离开大厅；3. 运用所学短语（如pick up, with one's help, so...that...）让表达更丰富；4. 检查是否覆盖所有要点，调整语句使逻辑连贯。
【解析】
续写时，先开篇点明爱丽丝吃完“吃我”蛋糕后的变化：After eating the “EAT ME” cake, Alice found herself growing taller and taller. 接着写她的困境：She could reach the key, but she couldn't become small any more. She could not go out. She was so afraid that she started to cry sadly. 然后写眼泪池的出现和白兔的情节：After a while, there was a large pool full of tears around her. At this moment, the white rabbit came back. When it saw Alice, it felt afraid and ran away quickly, and dropped a fan. 再写爱丽丝扇风变小，遇动物的情节：Alice picked up the fan and fanned herself, and found herself becoming smaller fast. She swam through her own tears. In the pool, she met a little mouse and some other animals. 最后写结局：With their help, Alice was finally able to leave the hall. 这样既覆盖所有要点，又语句通顺，符合要求。
【答案】
After eating the “EAT ME” cake, Alice found herself growing taller and taller. She could reach the key, but she couldn't become small any more. She could not go out. She was so afraid that she started to cry sadly. After a while, there was a large pool full of tears around her. At this moment, the white rabbit came back. When it saw Alice, it felt afraid and ran away quickly, and dropped a fan. Alice picked up the fan and fanned herself, and found herself becoming smaller fast. She swam through her own tears. In the pool, she met a little mouse and some other animals. With their help, Alice was finally able to leave the hall.
【知识点】
一般过去时运用；短语搭配；故事续写
【点评】
该续写紧扣题目提示的所有要点，时态准确，运用了so...that..., pick up, with one's help等丰富的短语和句型，内容连贯自然，适当添加细节让故事更生动，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的续写作品。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确题目要求：需根据给定提示续写《爱丽丝梦游仙境》的故事，要覆盖所有要点，语言流畅、内容连贯，词数不少于90词，时态以一般过去时为主。解题思路：1. 确定时态为一般过去时，确保动词形式正确；2. 按提示顺序梳理情节：吃蛋糕变高→拿钥匙却无法变小→害怕哭出眼泪池→白兔出现掉扇子→爱丽丝扇风变小→遇动物→离开大厅；3. 运用所学短语（如pick up, with one's help, so...that...）让表达更丰富；4. 检查是否覆盖所有要点，调整语句使逻辑连贯。
【解析】
续写时，先开篇点明爱丽丝吃完“吃我”蛋糕后的变化：After eating the “EAT ME” cake, Alice found herself growing taller and taller. 接着写她的困境：She could reach the key, but she couldn't become small any more. She could not go out. She was so afraid that she started to cry sadly. 然后写眼泪池的出现和白兔的情节：After a while, there was a large pool full of tears around her. At this moment, the white rabbit came back. When it saw Alice, it felt afraid and ran away quickly, and dropped a fan. 再写爱丽丝扇风变小，遇动物的情节：Alice picked up the fan and fanned herself, and found herself becoming smaller fast. She swam through her own tears. In the pool, she met a little mouse and some other animals. 最后写结局：With their help, Alice was finally able to leave the hall. 这样既覆盖所有要点，又语句通顺，符合要求。
【答案】
After eating the “EAT ME” cake, Alice found herself growing taller and taller. She could reach the key, but she couldn't become small any more. She could not go out. She was so afraid that she started to cry sadly. After a while, there was a large pool full of tears around her. At this moment, the white rabbit came back. When it saw Alice, it felt afraid and ran away quickly, and dropped a fan. Alice picked up the fan and fanned herself, and found herself becoming smaller fast. She swam through her own tears. In the pool, she met a little mouse and some other animals. With their help, Alice was finally able to leave the hall.
【知识点】
一般过去时运用；短语搭配；故事续写
【点评】
该续写紧扣题目提示的所有要点，时态准确，运用了so...that..., pick up, with one's help等丰富的短语和句型，内容连贯自然，适当添加细节让故事更生动，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的续写作品。
【难度系数】
0.5
