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Ⅵ. 书面表达
怎样成为更好的自己？请你根据以下内容提示，以“How to Be a Better Teenager?”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，在毕业典礼上发言。
写作要点：
1. 养成健康的生活习惯；
2. 学习有计划、有行动；
3. 友善待人；
4. 培养良好的兴趣爱好，参加志愿活动。
要求：
1. 内容必须包括所给要点，并适当发挥一至两点；
2. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文章中不得出现真实的姓名、地址、学校等相关信息；
4. 不少于 80 词(标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：develop hobbies 培养爱好；volunteer activities 志愿活动
How to Be a Better Teenager?
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
怎样成为更好的自己？请你根据以下内容提示，以“How to Be a Better Teenager?”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，在毕业典礼上发言。
写作要点：
1. 养成健康的生活习惯；
2. 学习有计划、有行动；
3. 友善待人；
4. 培养良好的兴趣爱好，参加志愿活动。
要求：
1. 内容必须包括所给要点，并适当发挥一至两点；
2. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文章中不得出现真实的姓名、地址、学校等相关信息；
4. 不少于 80 词(标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：develop hobbies 培养爱好；volunteer activities 志愿活动
How to Be a Better Teenager?
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
First of all, we should develop healthy living habits. We can run for half an hour every day to keep healthy. What's more, we should make a study plan and take action to achieve it. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. And we had better be friendly to others. When others need help, we should try our best to help them. Finally, it is good to develop good hobbies and take part in volunteer activities, such as cleaning the city park.
In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better.
Thank you!
In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better.
Thank you!
答案
One possible version:
How to Be a Better Teenager?
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
First of all, we should develop healthy living habits. We can run for half an hour every day to keep healthy. What's more, we should make a study plan and take action to achieve it. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. And we had better be friendly to others. When others need help, we should try our best to help them. Finally, it is good to develop good hobbies and take part in volunteer activities, such as cleaning the city park.
In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better.
Thank you!
How to Be a Better Teenager?
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
First of all, we should develop healthy living habits. We can run for half an hour every day to keep healthy. What's more, we should make a study plan and take action to achieve it. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. And we had better be friendly to others. When others need help, we should try our best to help them. Finally, it is good to develop good hobbies and take part in volunteer activities, such as cleaning the city park.
In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better.
Thank you!
解析
【解析】
1. 围绕题目给定的四大写作要点展开，每个要点补充具体细节，如健康习惯可写日常运动，学习部分点明知识与未来的关联，友善待人举例乐于助人，爱好与志愿活动举例打扫公园；
2. 结尾总结升华主题，呼应开篇，同时适当拓展内容，满足字数及演讲稿的结构要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
How to Be a Better Teenager?
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
First of all, we should develop healthy living habits. We can run for half an hour every day to keep healthy. What's more, we should make a study plan and take action to achieve it. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. And we had better be friendly to others. When others need help, we should try our best to help them. Finally, it is good to develop good hobbies and take part in volunteer activities, such as cleaning the city park.
In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、话题类英语写作、日常行为类表达
【点评】
本文紧扣所有写作要点，结构清晰，采用分点阐述的逻辑展开内容，每个要点都搭配具体实例，语言通顺自然，符合演讲稿的正式语境，同时合理拓展内容，完全满足题目各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
1. 围绕题目给定的四大写作要点展开，每个要点补充具体细节，如健康习惯可写日常运动，学习部分点明知识与未来的关联，友善待人举例乐于助人，爱好与志愿活动举例打扫公园；
2. 结尾总结升华主题，呼应开篇，同时适当拓展内容，满足字数及演讲稿的结构要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
How to Be a Better Teenager?
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
First of all, we should develop healthy living habits. We can run for half an hour every day to keep healthy. What's more, we should make a study plan and take action to achieve it. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. And we had better be friendly to others. When others need help, we should try our best to help them. Finally, it is good to develop good hobbies and take part in volunteer activities, such as cleaning the city park.
In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、话题类英语写作、日常行为类表达
【点评】
本文紧扣所有写作要点，结构清晰，采用分点阐述的逻辑展开内容，每个要点都搭配具体实例，语言通顺自然，符合演讲稿的正式语境，同时合理拓展内容，完全满足题目各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
