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年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭。年夜饭的菜肴很丰富，像年糕(New Year cake)、鱼等都带有美好的祝愿。请以“The Family Dinner on Chinese New Year's Eve”为题，写一篇短文，向外国朋友介绍自己家乡的年夜饭，让他们更好地了解中国丰富多彩的文化习俗。
要求：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
The Family Dinner on Chinese New Year's Eve
要求：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
The Family Dinner on Chinese New Year's Eve
答案
【写作指导】
1. 审题
人称：以第三人称为主
时态：以一般现在时为主
注意事项：除题干中的要点外，还应适当发挥，确保行文连贯，表意正确
2. 谋篇
第一部分：引出主题——年夜饭的重要性
the most important dinner
第二部分：介绍年夜饭的食物及其意义
The New Year cake means having more luck and becoming better.
The fish means getting more than you wish for.
第三部分：总结
It is a Chinese tradition that...
3. 成文
The Family Dinner on Chinese New Year's Eve
The family dinner on Chinese New Year's Eve is the most important dinner in traditional Chinese culture.
There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks at the family dinner. Most of them usually have good meanings. For example，in some places，the New Year cake is often the first dish，which means having more luck and becoming better in Chinese pronunciation. Another dish is fish，which means getting more than you wish for.
The big meal is not only a Chinese tradition that we have kept for thousands of years，but also a good chance for family members to get together.
1. 审题
人称：以第三人称为主
时态：以一般现在时为主
注意事项：除题干中的要点外，还应适当发挥，确保行文连贯，表意正确
2. 谋篇
第一部分：引出主题——年夜饭的重要性
the most important dinner
第二部分：介绍年夜饭的食物及其意义
The New Year cake means having more luck and becoming better.
The fish means getting more than you wish for.
第三部分：总结
It is a Chinese tradition that...
3. 成文
The Family Dinner on Chinese New Year's Eve
The family dinner on Chinese New Year's Eve is the most important dinner in traditional Chinese culture.
There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks at the family dinner. Most of them usually have good meanings. For example，in some places，the New Year cake is often the first dish，which means having more luck and becoming better in Chinese pronunciation. Another dish is fish，which means getting more than you wish for.
The big meal is not only a Chinese tradition that we have kept for thousands of years，but also a good chance for family members to get together.
解析
【解析】
1. 审题：人称以第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主，需围绕年夜饭主题展开，适当发挥以保证行文连贯。
2. 谋篇：
开头：点明年夜饭在中国传统文化中的核心地位；
主体：介绍年夜饭的特色食物及其美好寓意，如年糕寓意好运进步，鱼寓意年年有余；
结尾：总结年夜饭既是传承千年的传统，也是家人团聚的契机。
3. 成文：围绕上述要点组织语言，确保词数达标、表意准确流畅。
【答案】
The Family Dinner on Chinese New Year's Eve
The family dinner on Chinese New Year's Eve is the most important dinner in traditional Chinese culture.
There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks at the family dinner. Most of them usually have good meanings. For example，in some places，the New Year cake is often the first dish，which means having more luck and becoming better in Chinese pronunciation. Another dish is fish，which means getting more than you wish for.
The big meal is not only a Chinese tradition that we have kept for thousands of years，but also a good chance for family members to get together.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作、中国年俗文化表达、一般现在时运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结构层次清晰，内容完整充实，准确传递了年夜饭的文化内涵，用词恰当自然，符合词数要求，能有效帮助外国友人了解中国年俗文化。
【难度系数】
0.6
1. 审题：人称以第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主，需围绕年夜饭主题展开，适当发挥以保证行文连贯。
2. 谋篇：
开头：点明年夜饭在中国传统文化中的核心地位；
主体：介绍年夜饭的特色食物及其美好寓意，如年糕寓意好运进步，鱼寓意年年有余；
结尾：总结年夜饭既是传承千年的传统，也是家人团聚的契机。
3. 成文：围绕上述要点组织语言，确保词数达标、表意准确流畅。
【答案】
The Family Dinner on Chinese New Year's Eve
The family dinner on Chinese New Year's Eve is the most important dinner in traditional Chinese culture.
There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks at the family dinner. Most of them usually have good meanings. For example，in some places，the New Year cake is often the first dish，which means having more luck and becoming better in Chinese pronunciation. Another dish is fish，which means getting more than you wish for.
The big meal is not only a Chinese tradition that we have kept for thousands of years，but also a good chance for family members to get together.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作、中国年俗文化表达、一般现在时运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结构层次清晰，内容完整充实，准确传递了年夜饭的文化内涵，用词恰当自然，符合词数要求，能有效帮助外国友人了解中国年俗文化。
【难度系数】
0.6
教育部发文要求中小学校开展劳动教育必修课，并且规定了中小学每周课外活动和家庭生活中的劳动时间。根据下面的思维导图的提示，请你谈一谈作为中学生你们可以在校内外参与哪些劳动，以及劳动教育的意义。
要求：
1. 内容必须包括所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 不少于 80 词(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Labor education is becoming more and more important among teenagers.
要求：
1. 内容必须包括所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 不少于 80 词(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Labor education is becoming more and more important among teenagers.
答案
【写作指导】
1. 审题
人称：以第一人称为主
时态：以一般现在时为主
注意事项：根据提示内容进行写作，信息要点应齐全，可适当发挥；可适当使用连接词和过渡词，以使文章条理更清晰、行文更连贯
2. 谋篇
第一部分：引出话题并介绍参加各种劳动的目的
to learn valuable skills and appreciate the importance of labor
第二部分：分别介绍可以在家里、学校和社区进行的劳动
At home，we can... At school，we can... Besides，we can...
第三部分：说明劳动教育的意义
Labor education is good for us. It is educational and helpful. It can...
3. 成文
Labor education is becoming more and more important among teenagers. As middle school students，we should do different types of labor to learn valuable skills and appreciate the importance of labor.
At home，we can help do some housework. For example，we can do the dishes，take out the rubbish and so on. At school，we can clean the classroom more often and grow vegetables if possible. Besides，we can also sign up as volunteers at our community center to clean up the city parks and plant trees with our classmates outside.
In my opinion，labor education is educational and helpful. Not only can it develop our independence and responsibility，but also help us better understand our parents.
(四)计划安排类范例及写作指导
1. 审题
人称：以第一人称为主
时态：以一般现在时为主
注意事项：根据提示内容进行写作，信息要点应齐全，可适当发挥；可适当使用连接词和过渡词，以使文章条理更清晰、行文更连贯
2. 谋篇
第一部分：引出话题并介绍参加各种劳动的目的
to learn valuable skills and appreciate the importance of labor
第二部分：分别介绍可以在家里、学校和社区进行的劳动
At home，we can... At school，we can... Besides，we can...
第三部分：说明劳动教育的意义
Labor education is good for us. It is educational and helpful. It can...
3. 成文
Labor education is becoming more and more important among teenagers. As middle school students，we should do different types of labor to learn valuable skills and appreciate the importance of labor.
At home，we can help do some housework. For example，we can do the dishes，take out the rubbish and so on. At school，we can clean the classroom more often and grow vegetables if possible. Besides，we can also sign up as volunteers at our community center to clean up the city parks and plant trees with our classmates outside.
In my opinion，labor education is educational and helpful. Not only can it develop our independence and responsibility，but also help us better understand our parents.
(四)计划安排类范例及写作指导
解析
【解析】
这是一篇话题作文，需结合思维导图提示完成写作。确定以第一人称为主，时态用一般现在时。写作时可分为三部分：先引出话题，点明参与劳动的目的；再分别介绍在家、学校及校外其他场所可参与的劳动；最后阐述劳动教育的意义。需涵盖所有提示信息，合理使用连接词，保证行文连贯。
【答案】
Labor education is becoming more and more important among teenagers. As middle school students，we should do different types of labor to learn valuable skills and appreciate the importance of labor.
At home，we can help do some housework. For example，we can do the dishes，take out the rubbish and so on. At school，we can clean the classroom more often and grow vegetables if possible. Besides，we can also sign up as volunteers at our community center to clean up the city parks and plant trees with our classmates outside.
In my opinion，labor education is educational and helpful. Not only can it develop our independence and responsibility，but also help us better understand our parents.
【知识点】
英语话题作文写作、劳动教育表达、情景写作
【点评】
本题结合劳动教育热点话题，考查学生用英语表达日常劳动内容与阐述劳动意义的能力，贴合学生生活实际，引导学生重视劳动教育。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇话题作文，需结合思维导图提示完成写作。确定以第一人称为主，时态用一般现在时。写作时可分为三部分：先引出话题，点明参与劳动的目的；再分别介绍在家、学校及校外其他场所可参与的劳动；最后阐述劳动教育的意义。需涵盖所有提示信息，合理使用连接词，保证行文连贯。
【答案】
Labor education is becoming more and more important among teenagers. As middle school students，we should do different types of labor to learn valuable skills and appreciate the importance of labor.
At home，we can help do some housework. For example，we can do the dishes，take out the rubbish and so on. At school，we can clean the classroom more often and grow vegetables if possible. Besides，we can also sign up as volunteers at our community center to clean up the city parks and plant trees with our classmates outside.
In my opinion，labor education is educational and helpful. Not only can it develop our independence and responsibility，but also help us better understand our parents.
【知识点】
英语话题作文写作、劳动教育表达、情景写作
【点评】
本题结合劳动教育热点话题，考查学生用英语表达日常劳动内容与阐述劳动意义的能力，贴合学生生活实际，引导学生重视劳动教育。
【难度系数】
0.6
