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Our school is big and nice. But it's not very clean in some places.
Some students throw rubbish everywhere. We can see empty bottles on the sports ground. Some students' desks are always in a mess. They even put dirty snack bags in the desks. To change this, we should put all rubbish in the bin. We need to tidy our desks every day. We can also pick up rubbish when we see it.
Let's work together to keep our school clean. It will become much better.
开头:点明主题——校园环境问题。
中间:着重介绍不整洁的表现并告诉大家应该怎么做。
结尾:呼吁大家共同努力,创造更美好的校园。
Some students throw rubbish everywhere. We can see empty bottles on the sports ground. Some students' desks are always in a mess. They even put dirty snack bags in the desks. To change this, we should put all rubbish in the bin. We need to tidy our desks every day. We can also pick up rubbish when we see it.
Let's work together to keep our school clean. It will become much better.
开头:点明主题——校园环境问题。
中间:着重介绍不整洁的表现并告诉大家应该怎么做。
结尾:呼吁大家共同努力,创造更美好的校园。
答案
参考范文：
Our school is big and nice. But it's not very clean in some places.
Some students throw rubbish everywhere. We can see empty bottles on the sports ground. Some students' desks are always in a mess. They even put dirty snack bags in the desks. To change this, we should put all rubbish in the bin. We need to tidy our desks every day. We can also pick up rubbish when we see it.
Let's work together to keep our school clean. It will become much better.
Our school is big and nice. But it's not very clean in some places.
Some students throw rubbish everywhere. We can see empty bottles on the sports ground. Some students' desks are always in a mess. They even put dirty snack bags in the desks. To change this, we should put all rubbish in the bin. We need to tidy our desks every day. We can also pick up rubbish when we see it.
Let's work together to keep our school clean. It will become much better.
解析
【分析】本题为英语写作题，要求围绕校园环境问题，按照指定结构（开头点明主题、中间阐述问题及改进方法、结尾发出呼吁）完成短文。解题时需先明确三段式写作结构，再选取校园不整洁的具体事例，对应给出可行的改进措施，最后发出呼吁，确保内容贴合主题、结构完整。
【解析】按照题目要求的结构写作：开头点明校园虽大但部分区域不清洁的主题；中间列举学生乱扔垃圾（操场空瓶、课桌杂乱、放置脏零食袋）的表现，再给出具体改进措施（将垃圾扔进垃圾桶、每天整理课桌、随手捡拾垃圾）；结尾呼吁大家共同努力保持校园清洁，让校园变得更好，形成完整短文。
【答案】Our school is big and nice. But it's not very clean in some places.
Some students throw rubbish everywhere. We can see empty bottles on the sports ground. Some students' desks are always in a mess. They even put dirty snack bags in the desks. To change this, we should put all rubbish in the bin. We need to tidy our desks every day. We can also pick up rubbish when we see it.
Let's work together to keep our school clean. It will become much better.
【知识点】英语应用文写作，校园话题表达
【点评】本题考查学生围绕指定主题和结构进行英语书面表达的能力，内容贴近学生校园生活，结构清晰，语言简洁易懂，符合基础写作要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照题目要求的结构写作：开头点明校园虽大但部分区域不清洁的主题；中间列举学生乱扔垃圾（操场空瓶、课桌杂乱、放置脏零食袋）的表现，再给出具体改进措施（将垃圾扔进垃圾桶、每天整理课桌、随手捡拾垃圾）；结尾呼吁大家共同努力保持校园清洁，让校园变得更好，形成完整短文。
【答案】Our school is big and nice. But it's not very clean in some places.
Some students throw rubbish everywhere. We can see empty bottles on the sports ground. Some students' desks are always in a mess. They even put dirty snack bags in the desks. To change this, we should put all rubbish in the bin. We need to tidy our desks every day. We can also pick up rubbish when we see it.
Let's work together to keep our school clean. It will become much better.
【知识点】英语应用文写作，校园话题表达
【点评】本题考查学生围绕指定主题和结构进行英语书面表达的能力，内容贴近学生校园生活，结构清晰，语言简洁易懂，符合基础写作要求。
【难度系数】0.6
世界环境日要到了，保护环境，人人有责。请你参考右边的图片，以“Keep our city clean”为主题写一篇短文。要求：句子通顺，书写工整；可作适当发挥；不少于50词。
World Environment Day is coming. It's everyone's duty to keep our city clean.
We can do lots of helpful things. We can pick up rubbish while jogging.
We can plant more trees together outside. We should put waste paper and plastic into different bins for sorting.
We can also sweep the streets to tidy them up.
Let's try our best and make our city clean and nice. The world will be better!
答案
【习作专项提优】
参考范文：
World Environment Day is coming. It's everyone's duty to keep our city clean.
We can do lots of helpful things. We can pick up rubbish while jogging. We can plant more trees together outside. We should put waste paper and plastic into different bins for sorting. We can also sweep the streets to tidy them up.
Let's try our best and make our city clean and nice. The world will be better!
参考范文：
World Environment Day is coming. It's everyone's duty to keep our city clean.
We can do lots of helpful things. We can pick up rubbish while jogging. We can plant more trees together outside. We should put waste paper and plastic into different bins for sorting. We can also sweep the streets to tidy them up.
Let's try our best and make our city clean and nice. The world will be better!
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作主题为“Keep our city clean”，结合图片呈现的捡垃圾、植树、垃圾分类、清扫街道等环保行为，先开篇点出世界环境日到来，引出保护环境的责任；中间分述具体可做的环保行动，结合图片素材展开；结尾发出呼吁，使文章结构完整、逻辑清晰，满足不少于50词的要求。
【解析】
World Environment Day is coming. It's everyone's duty to keep our city clean. We can do lots of helpful things. We can pick up rubbish while walking. We can plant more trees together outside. We should put waste paper and plastic into different bins for sorting. We can also sweep the streets to tidy them up. Let's try our best and make our city clean and nice. The world will be better!
【答案】
World Environment Day is coming. It's everyone's duty to keep our city clean. We can do lots of helpful things. We can pick up rubbish while walking. We can plant more trees together outside. We should put waste paper and plastic into different bins for sorting. We can also sweep the streets to tidy them up. Let's try our best and make our city clean and nice. The world will be better!
【知识点】
英语话题写作
【点评】
本文围绕环保主题，结合图片中的具体行为展开，结构清晰，语言通顺，符合写作要求，能有效表达保护环境的理念。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作主题为“Keep our city clean”，结合图片呈现的捡垃圾、植树、垃圾分类、清扫街道等环保行为，先开篇点出世界环境日到来，引出保护环境的责任；中间分述具体可做的环保行动，结合图片素材展开；结尾发出呼吁，使文章结构完整、逻辑清晰，满足不少于50词的要求。
【解析】
World Environment Day is coming. It's everyone's duty to keep our city clean. We can do lots of helpful things. We can pick up rubbish while walking. We can plant more trees together outside. We should put waste paper and plastic into different bins for sorting. We can also sweep the streets to tidy them up. Let's try our best and make our city clean and nice. The world will be better!
【答案】
World Environment Day is coming. It's everyone's duty to keep our city clean. We can do lots of helpful things. We can pick up rubbish while walking. We can plant more trees together outside. We should put waste paper and plastic into different bins for sorting. We can also sweep the streets to tidy them up. Let's try our best and make our city clean and nice. The world will be better!
【知识点】
英语话题写作
【点评】
本文围绕环保主题，结合图片中的具体行为展开，结构清晰，语言通顺，符合写作要求，能有效表达保护环境的理念。
【难度系数】
0.5
