书面表达
假如你是李华,请给你加拿大的笔友 Eric 写一封 80 词左右的邮件,介绍你和你的朋友的一次志愿者活动的情况。要点如下:

参考词汇:
志愿者活动:volunteer work 街区:neighbourhood
打扫街道:clean the street 做家务:do housework
讲故事:tell stories 帮助他人:help others
Dear Eric,
How's it going?
Yours,
Li Hua
【点拨】
本篇书面表达是一篇话题作文,要求考生介绍和朋友的一次志愿者活动的情况。内容包括活动的时间、地点、内容和自己的感受等。写作时,人称以第一人称为主,第二人称为辅;时态以一般过去时为主,一般现在时为辅。注意要保证信息完整、语句通顺、语篇连贯、层次清晰、语言丰富、表达准确以及书写规范。

One possible version:
Dear Eric,
How's it going? I will tell you something about my volunteer work last Sunday. Early in the morning, my friends and I came to the neighbourhood near our school. There we cleaned the streets, and helped the old people do their housework. In the afternoon, we told stories to the children and we had a good time. Although we felt a little tired, we thought it's very happy to help others. Do you think so?
Hope everything goes well with you.

实时练习
假如你是李华,请给你加拿大的笔友 Eric 写一封 80 词左右的邮件,介绍你和你的朋友的一次志愿者活动的情况。要点如下:
参考词汇:
志愿者活动:volunteer work 街区:neighbourhood
打扫街道:clean the street 做家务:do housework
讲故事:tell stories 帮助他人:help others
Dear Eric,
How's it going?
Yours,
Li Hua
【点拨】
本篇书面表达是一篇话题作文,要求考生介绍和朋友的一次志愿者活动的情况。内容包括活动的时间、地点、内容和自己的感受等。写作时,人称以第一人称为主,第二人称为辅;时态以一般过去时为主,一般现在时为辅。注意要保证信息完整、语句通顺、语篇连贯、层次清晰、语言丰富、表达准确以及书写规范。
One possible version:
Dear Eric,
How's it going? I will tell you something about my volunteer work last Sunday. Early in the morning, my friends and I came to the neighbourhood near our school. There we cleaned the streets, and helped the old people do their housework. In the afternoon, we told stories to the children and we had a good time. Although we felt a little tired, we thought it's very happy to help others. Do you think so?
Hope everything goes well with you.
实时练习
答案
I will tell you something about my volunteer work last Sunday. Early in the morning, my friends and I came to the neighbourhood near our school. There we cleaned the streets, and helped the old people do their housework. In the afternoon, we told stories to the children and we had a good time. Although we felt a little tired, we thought it's very happy to help others. Do you think so?
Hope everything goes well with you.
Hope everything goes well with you.
解析
这是一篇写给笔友的邮件类书面表达,写作注意事项如下:1. 人称以第一人称为主,描述上周日的活动使用一般过去时,表达感受和结尾祝福使用一般现在时,符合七年级的语法要求;2. 写作要完整覆盖所有给定要点:点明活动时间为上周日,地点是学校附近的街区,依次介绍上午打扫街道、帮助老人做家务,下午给小朋友讲故事的活动内容,最后表达帮助别人是快乐的感悟,结尾给笔友送出祝福,控制词数在80词左右,保证语句通顺、信息完整。
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