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答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D35
每个人都有精彩的旅游经历。哪次旅行给你留下了难忘的印象呢？请你以“An Unforgettable Trip”为题，根据以下思维导图提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的这一次难忘的旅行。
注意：(1)词数不少于 80；(2)必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥。
An Unforgettable Trip
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答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D35
每个人都有精彩的旅游经历。哪次旅行给你留下了难忘的印象呢？请你以“An Unforgettable Trip”为题，根据以下思维导图提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的这一次难忘的旅行。
注意：(1)词数不少于 80；(2)必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥。
An Unforgettable Trip
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答案
Unit 6 主题写作专项
基础版范文
An Unforgettable Trip
Everyone has a wonderful trip. I will never forget my trip to Harbin. I went there with my family last winter.
When we arrived there, Harbin was covered with snow and looked like a winter wonderland. My family and I had fun throwing snowballs at each other in the beautiful ice world. We also enjoyed delicious local food, for example, guobaorou. What's more, I took lots of photos of amazing ice works.
How unforgettable this trip was! It not only was exciting but also taught me the importance of spending time with my loved ones.
进阶版范文
An Unforgettable Trip
Everyone has a wonderful trip. I will never forget my trip to Harbin. I went there with my family last winter. It was the most unforgettable trip I've ever had.
When we arrived there, we were surprised to discover that Harbin was covered with snow and looked like a winter wonderland. My family and I had fun while we were throwing snowballs at each other in the beautiful ice world. We also had a chance to enjoy delicious local food, for example, guobaorou. What's more, I took lots of photos of amazing ice works.
There was no doubt that this trip was very unforgettable. It not only was exciting but also taught me the importance of spending time with my loved ones.
基础版范文
An Unforgettable Trip
Everyone has a wonderful trip. I will never forget my trip to Harbin. I went there with my family last winter.
When we arrived there, Harbin was covered with snow and looked like a winter wonderland. My family and I had fun throwing snowballs at each other in the beautiful ice world. We also enjoyed delicious local food, for example, guobaorou. What's more, I took lots of photos of amazing ice works.
How unforgettable this trip was! It not only was exciting but also taught me the importance of spending time with my loved ones.
进阶版范文
An Unforgettable Trip
Everyone has a wonderful trip. I will never forget my trip to Harbin. I went there with my family last winter. It was the most unforgettable trip I've ever had.
When we arrived there, we were surprised to discover that Harbin was covered with snow and looked like a winter wonderland. My family and I had fun while we were throwing snowballs at each other in the beautiful ice world. We also had a chance to enjoy delicious local food, for example, guobaorou. What's more, I took lots of photos of amazing ice works.
There was no doubt that this trip was very unforgettable. It not only was exciting but also taught me the importance of spending time with my loved ones.
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语记叙文写作题，主题为“An Unforgettable Trip”。解题思路如下：1. 梳理思维导图的核心要点：时间（last winter）、地点（Harbin）、活动（throw snowballs, eat delicious food, take photos等）、感受（unforgettable的具体体现）；2. 搭建文章结构：开头引出难忘的哈尔滨之旅，中间详细描述旅行中的具体活动，结尾总结旅行的感受与意义；3. 注意词数要求，适当补充细节（如同行人员、当地美食举例、冰雕场景等），确保所有提示信息都被包含，语言通顺连贯。
【解析】
写作时，首先开头点明主题，说明旅行的时间、地点及同行人员；接着中间部分按活动顺序展开：描述到达哈尔滨后被雪覆盖的美景，与家人扔雪球的乐趣，品尝当地美食（如锅包肉），拍摄冰雕的照片；最后结尾总结这次旅行的难忘之处，以及从中体会到的与家人相处的重要性，确保词数不少于80，所有提示信息均覆盖。
【答案】
An Unforgettable Trip
Everyone has a wonderful trip. I will never forget my trip to Harbin. I went there with my family last winter.
When we arrived there, Harbin was covered with snow and looked like a winter wonderland. My family and I had fun throwing snowballs at each other in the beautiful ice world. We also enjoyed delicious local food, for example, guobaorou. What's more, I took lots of photos of amazing ice works.
How unforgettable this trip was! It not only was exciting but also taught me the importance of spending time with my loved ones.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、思维导图写作、英语话题表达
【点评】
本题结合思维导图提示考查英语记叙文写作，要求学生整合给定信息并适当拓展，既考察基础语言表达能力，又锻炼信息组织能力，是初中英语常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一道英语记叙文写作题，主题为“An Unforgettable Trip”。解题思路如下：1. 梳理思维导图的核心要点：时间（last winter）、地点（Harbin）、活动（throw snowballs, eat delicious food, take photos等）、感受（unforgettable的具体体现）；2. 搭建文章结构：开头引出难忘的哈尔滨之旅，中间详细描述旅行中的具体活动，结尾总结旅行的感受与意义；3. 注意词数要求，适当补充细节（如同行人员、当地美食举例、冰雕场景等），确保所有提示信息都被包含，语言通顺连贯。
【解析】
写作时，首先开头点明主题，说明旅行的时间、地点及同行人员；接着中间部分按活动顺序展开：描述到达哈尔滨后被雪覆盖的美景，与家人扔雪球的乐趣，品尝当地美食（如锅包肉），拍摄冰雕的照片；最后结尾总结这次旅行的难忘之处，以及从中体会到的与家人相处的重要性，确保词数不少于80，所有提示信息均覆盖。
【答案】
An Unforgettable Trip
Everyone has a wonderful trip. I will never forget my trip to Harbin. I went there with my family last winter.
When we arrived there, Harbin was covered with snow and looked like a winter wonderland. My family and I had fun throwing snowballs at each other in the beautiful ice world. We also enjoyed delicious local food, for example, guobaorou. What's more, I took lots of photos of amazing ice works.
How unforgettable this trip was! It not only was exciting but also taught me the importance of spending time with my loved ones.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、思维导图写作、英语话题表达
【点评】
本题结合思维导图提示考查英语记叙文写作，要求学生整合给定信息并适当拓展，既考察基础语言表达能力，又锻炼信息组织能力，是初中英语常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
