五、学以致用·主题写作实战演练
时光荏苒，转眼同学们步入九年级已经半个学期。新的校园生活让我们学会更好地了解自己、悦纳自己、提升自己，不断成长。我校正在开展主题为“成为更好的自己”的演讲比赛。假如你是王华，请以“To be a better self”为题写一篇演讲稿，从性格塑造、兴趣爱好、青少年问题、榜样引领、未来职业规划等方面，选择其中的2-3点，谈一谈自己的理解。

注意事项：
（1）文章可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
（2）词数100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
To be a better self
Dear schoolmates,
I’m Wang Hua. I’m glad to be here to give a talk about “To be a better self”.








Thank you for your listening!

First, I am trying to build a more outgoing and patient personality. I used to be too shy to express myself in public, now I take part in more group activities and learn to be more understanding to my parents and classmates. Besides, I take astronaut Wang Yaping as my hero, her courage and strong will always encourage me to keep moving forward. My future dream job is to be a volunteer teacher, to help more children in poor areas get good education. I will keep working hard to become a better self step by step.

【分析】
首先明确题目要求：以“To be a better self”为题写演讲稿，需从给定的性格塑造、兴趣爱好等方面选2-3点展开，词数100左右，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 确定选取的2-3个贴合主题的方面，如性格塑造、榜样引领、未来职业规划；2. 结合自身实际补充具体细节，让内容真实可感；3. 用演讲稿的语气连贯表达，控制字数符合要求。
【解析】
选取性格塑造、榜样引领、未来职业规划三个方面展开：先说明自己在性格上的转变，从害羞不敢当众表达到参与集体活动、变得更耐心；再举榜样王亚平的例子，体现其精神对自己的鼓励；最后点明未来想当志愿者教师的梦想，表达努力的决心，使内容连贯，符合演讲稿语境和字数要求。
【答案】
First, I am trying to build a more outgoing and patient personality. I used to be too shy to express myself in public, now I take part in more group activities and learn to be more understanding to my parents and classmates. Besides, I take astronaut Wang Yaping as my hero, her courage and strong will always encourage me to keep moving forward. My future dream job is to be a volunteer teacher, to help more children in poor areas get good education. I will keep working hard to become a better self step by step.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、成长类话题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，选取了符合要求的三个方面，内容具体有细节，语气贴合演讲稿风格，字数达标，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.6