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七、书面表达。
为进一步推进“书香校园”文化建设，学校英语社正在开展以“好书分享”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，推荐一本你最喜欢的书。参考书目：Journey to the West、Romance of the Three Kingdoms、Rickshaw Boy、20，000 Leagues Under the Sea 和 Harry Potter。
内容要点：
1. What's your favourite book?
2. What does it tell about?
3. What do you learn from it?
写作要求：
1. 80~120个词，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favourite Book
Books are our best friends.
为进一步推进“书香校园”文化建设，学校英语社正在开展以“好书分享”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，推荐一本你最喜欢的书。参考书目：Journey to the West、Romance of the Three Kingdoms、Rickshaw Boy、20，000 Leagues Under the Sea 和 Harry Potter。
内容要点：
1. What's your favourite book?
2. What does it tell about?
3. What do you learn from it?
写作要求：
1. 80~120个词，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favourite Book
Books are our best friends.
Among all the books I've read, The Monkey King is my favourite.
This book mainly talks about three things. Firstly, it tells us why the monkey can make 72 changes and what he can change into. Secondly, it shows us how the monkey uses his magic stick. Sometimes he can make the stick so small that it settles in his ear. Lastly, the book tells us how the monkey fights with bad people. I like reading this part best because the monkey always tries his best to beat the forces of evil and win the fights.
The book teaches us to be brave when we are in trouble. It also tells us to keep fighting to help the weak. Most importantly, it encourages us to keep trying and never give up.
This book mainly talks about three things. Firstly, it tells us why the monkey can make 72 changes and what he can change into. Secondly, it shows us how the monkey uses his magic stick. Sometimes he can make the stick so small that it settles in his ear. Lastly, the book tells us how the monkey fights with bad people. I like reading this part best because the monkey always tries his best to beat the forces of evil and win the fights.
The book teaches us to be brave when we are in trouble. It also tells us to keep fighting to help the weak. Most importantly, it encourages us to keep trying and never give up.
答案
One possible version:
My Favourite Book
Books are our best friends. Among all the books I've read, The Monkey King is my favourite.
This book mainly talks about three things. Firstly, it tells us why the monkey can make 72 changes and what he can change into. Secondly, it shows us how the monkey uses his magic stick. Sometimes he can make the stick so small that it settles in his ear. Lastly, the book tells us how the monkey fights with bad people. I like reading this part best because the monkey always tries his best to beat the forces of evil and win the fights.
The book teaches us to be brave when we are in trouble. It also tells us to keep fighting to help the weak. Most importantly, it encourages us to keep trying and never give up.
My Favourite Book
Books are our best friends. Among all the books I've read, The Monkey King is my favourite.
This book mainly talks about three things. Firstly, it tells us why the monkey can make 72 changes and what he can change into. Secondly, it shows us how the monkey uses his magic stick. Sometimes he can make the stick so small that it settles in his ear. Lastly, the book tells us how the monkey fights with bad people. I like reading this part best because the monkey always tries his best to beat the forces of evil and win the fights.
The book teaches us to be brave when we are in trouble. It also tells us to keep fighting to help the weak. Most importantly, it encourages us to keep trying and never give up.
解析
【分析】
首先审题，明确任务是“好书分享”主题征文，需包含三个核心要点：①最喜欢的书；②书的内容；③从书中学到的道理，同时要满足词数80~120、无个人信息、开头已给出的要求，参考书目里的《Journey to the West》（《西游记》）是合适的推荐选择。接着构思结构：承接开头后，先点明最喜欢的书，再围绕书的核心内容（美猴王的能力、金箍棒、斗坏人）展开，最后提炼从书中获得的感悟，确保语言简洁流畅，符合要求。
【解析】
按照写作要求，先承接开头“Books are our best friends.”，点明最喜欢的书：Among all the books I've read, The Monkey King is my favourite. 再介绍书的核心内容：This book mainly talks about three things. Firstly, it tells us why the monkey can make 72 changes and what he can change into. Secondly, it shows us how the monkey uses his magic stick. Sometimes he can make the stick so small that it settles in his ear. Lastly, the book tells us how the monkey fights with bad people. I like reading this part best because the monkey always tries his best to beat the forces of evil and win the fights. 最后说明学到的道理：The book teaches us to be brave when we are in trouble. It also tells us to keep fighting to help the weak. Most importantly, it encourages us to keep trying and never give up. 调整语句使其符合词数要求，形成完整短文。
【答案】
My Favourite Book
Books are our best friends. Among all the books I've read, The Monkey King is my favourite.
This book mainly talks about three things. Firstly, it tells us why the monkey can make 72 changes and what he can change into. Secondly, it shows us how the monkey uses his magic stick. Sometimes he can make the stick so small that it settles in his ear. Lastly, the book tells us how the monkey fights with bad people. I like reading this part best because the monkey always tries his best to beat the forces of evil and win the fights.
The book teaches us to be brave when we are in trouble. It also tells us to keep fighting to help the weak. Most importantly, it encourages us to keep trying and never give up.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、名著介绍类写作
【点评】
该作文紧扣“好书分享”主题，完整覆盖了题目要求的三个内容要点，语言通顺自然，传递了积极向上的价值观，符合词数和格式要求，是一篇优秀的英语书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先审题，明确任务是“好书分享”主题征文，需包含三个核心要点：①最喜欢的书；②书的内容；③从书中学到的道理，同时要满足词数80~120、无个人信息、开头已给出的要求，参考书目里的《Journey to the West》（《西游记》）是合适的推荐选择。接着构思结构：承接开头后，先点明最喜欢的书，再围绕书的核心内容（美猴王的能力、金箍棒、斗坏人）展开，最后提炼从书中获得的感悟，确保语言简洁流畅，符合要求。
【解析】
按照写作要求，先承接开头“Books are our best friends.”，点明最喜欢的书：Among all the books I've read, The Monkey King is my favourite. 再介绍书的核心内容：This book mainly talks about three things. Firstly, it tells us why the monkey can make 72 changes and what he can change into. Secondly, it shows us how the monkey uses his magic stick. Sometimes he can make the stick so small that it settles in his ear. Lastly, the book tells us how the monkey fights with bad people. I like reading this part best because the monkey always tries his best to beat the forces of evil and win the fights. 最后说明学到的道理：The book teaches us to be brave when we are in trouble. It also tells us to keep fighting to help the weak. Most importantly, it encourages us to keep trying and never give up. 调整语句使其符合词数要求，形成完整短文。
【答案】
My Favourite Book
Books are our best friends. Among all the books I've read, The Monkey King is my favourite.
This book mainly talks about three things. Firstly, it tells us why the monkey can make 72 changes and what he can change into. Secondly, it shows us how the monkey uses his magic stick. Sometimes he can make the stick so small that it settles in his ear. Lastly, the book tells us how the monkey fights with bad people. I like reading this part best because the monkey always tries his best to beat the forces of evil and win the fights.
The book teaches us to be brave when we are in trouble. It also tells us to keep fighting to help the weak. Most importantly, it encourages us to keep trying and never give up.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、名著介绍类写作
【点评】
该作文紧扣“好书分享”主题，完整覆盖了题目要求的三个内容要点，语言通顺自然，传递了积极向上的价值观，符合词数和格式要求，是一篇优秀的英语书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
