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十四、书面表达。(10分)(2024·金华东阳)
六年级即将毕业,学校将举行“最难忘的一次旅行”分享会,请你完成旅行记录单并完成书面介绍稿。
任务一:完成旅行记录单。(2分)
注意:没有提供选项的,请直接填在横线处,有提供选项的可以勾选一项或者多项,也可以在横线处填上自己不同的想法。
A(n)
□busy □relaxing □meaningful □interesting □colourful
□Others:
|When|□Last summer vacation □Last May Day holiday
□Last winter vacation □Last National Day holiday|
|Who|
|Where|
|How|□by bus □by car □by bike □on foot
□Others:
|What|□saw beautiful scenery □rode a bike
□rode a horse/camel □swam in the sea
□played on the beach □went hiking
□ate... fruits/seafood/... □took pictures
□Others:
任务二:根据旅行记录单完成书面介绍稿,不少于40词(已给出部分不计入总词数)。(8分)
I had a(n)
How unforgettable!
六年级即将毕业,学校将举行“最难忘的一次旅行”分享会,请你完成旅行记录单并完成书面介绍稿。
任务一:完成旅行记录单。(2分)
注意:没有提供选项的,请直接填在横线处,有提供选项的可以勾选一项或者多项,也可以在横线处填上自己不同的想法。
A(n)
interesting
Trip□busy □relaxing □meaningful □interesting □colourful
□Others:
|When|□Last summer vacation □Last May Day holiday
□Last winter vacation □Last National Day holiday|
|Who|
My family and I
||Where|
Beijing
||How|□by bus □by car □by bike □on foot
□Others:
by train
||What|□saw beautiful scenery □rode a bike
□rode a horse/camel □swam in the sea
□played on the beach □went hiking
□ate... fruits/seafood/... □took pictures
□Others:
went to the Great Wall, visited the Palace Museum, went to Tian'anmen
|任务二:根据旅行记录单完成书面介绍稿,不少于40词(已给出部分不计入总词数)。(8分)
I had a(n)
interesting
trip last summer vacation
. I went to Beijing
with my family
. We went there by train
. We saw beautiful scenery. We went to the Great Wall and visited the Palace Museum. We also went to Tian'anmen. We took many pictures and ate delicious food there. We had a good time.
How unforgettable!
答案
任务一:interesting, Last summer vacation, My family and I, Beijing, Others: by train, saw beautiful scenery, ate... fruits/seafood/..., took pictures, Others: went to the Great Wall, visited the Palace Museum, went to Tian'anmen(答案不唯一,与书面介绍稿对应即可)
任务二:参考范文：
I had an interesting trip last summer vacation. I went to Beijing with my family. We went there by train. We saw beautiful scenery. We went to the Great Wall and visited the Palace Museum. We also went to Tian'anmen. We took many pictures and ate delicious food there. We had a good time.
How unforgettable!
任务二:参考范文：
I had an interesting trip last summer vacation. I went to Beijing with my family. We went there by train. We saw beautiful scenery. We went to the Great Wall and visited the Palace Museum. We also went to Tian'anmen. We took many pictures and ate delicious food there. We had a good time.
How unforgettable!
解析
【分析】
本题分为两个任务，任务一需完成旅行记录单，要先确定旅行的主题形容词，再依次填写时间、同行人物、地点、交通方式、活动内容，填写时可结合自身实际或参考选项，确保内容合理；任务二需根据任务一的记录单，用一般过去时完成不少于40词的旅行介绍稿，要将记录单的信息点串联，补充细节，语句通顺，呼应“最难忘的旅行”的主题。
【解析】
任务一：1. 选择合适的旅行主题形容词，如interesting（符合难忘的旅行主题）；2. 时间选Last summer vacation；3. 同行人物填My family and I；4. 地点填Beijing；5. 交通方式选Others: by train；6. 活动内容选saw beautiful scenery，再补充Others: went to the Great Wall, visited the Palace Museum, went to Tian'anmen等，确保内容丰富。任务二：根据记录单的信息，用一般过去时，依次说明旅行的时间、地点、同行者、交通方式，再补充具体活动（如看风景、参观景点、拍照、吃美食等），最后点出旅行难忘，语句连贯，字数达标。
【答案】
任务一:interesting, Last summer vacation, My family and I, Beijing, Others: by train, saw beautiful scenery, Others: went to the Great Wall, visited the Palace Museum, went to Tian'anmen；任务二:I had an interesting trip last summer vacation. I went to Beijing with my family. We went there by train. We saw beautiful scenery. We went to the Great Wall and visited the Palace Museum. We also went to Tian'anmen. We took many pictures and ate delicious food there. We had a good time. How unforgettable!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般过去时、旅行话题词汇运用
【点评】
本题结合六年级毕业“最难忘的旅行”分享会的真实场景，既考查学生对旅行相关话题的词汇、句型及一般过去时的掌握，又要求学生能根据记录单完成连贯的书面表达，贴近学生生活实际，难度适中，能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题分为两个任务，任务一需完成旅行记录单，要先确定旅行的主题形容词，再依次填写时间、同行人物、地点、交通方式、活动内容，填写时可结合自身实际或参考选项，确保内容合理；任务二需根据任务一的记录单，用一般过去时完成不少于40词的旅行介绍稿，要将记录单的信息点串联，补充细节，语句通顺，呼应“最难忘的旅行”的主题。
【解析】
任务一：1. 选择合适的旅行主题形容词，如interesting（符合难忘的旅行主题）；2. 时间选Last summer vacation；3. 同行人物填My family and I；4. 地点填Beijing；5. 交通方式选Others: by train；6. 活动内容选saw beautiful scenery，再补充Others: went to the Great Wall, visited the Palace Museum, went to Tian'anmen等，确保内容丰富。任务二：根据记录单的信息，用一般过去时，依次说明旅行的时间、地点、同行者、交通方式，再补充具体活动（如看风景、参观景点、拍照、吃美食等），最后点出旅行难忘，语句连贯，字数达标。
【答案】
任务一:interesting, Last summer vacation, My family and I, Beijing, Others: by train, saw beautiful scenery, Others: went to the Great Wall, visited the Palace Museum, went to Tian'anmen；任务二:I had an interesting trip last summer vacation. I went to Beijing with my family. We went there by train. We saw beautiful scenery. We went to the Great Wall and visited the Palace Museum. We also went to Tian'anmen. We took many pictures and ate delicious food there. We had a good time. How unforgettable!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般过去时、旅行话题词汇运用
【点评】
本题结合六年级毕业“最难忘的旅行”分享会的真实场景，既考查学生对旅行相关话题的词汇、句型及一般过去时的掌握，又要求学生能根据记录单完成连贯的书面表达，贴近学生生活实际，难度适中，能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
