佳作赏析
品读范文，拆解核心技巧
最近你所在的班级进行了题为“我最喜欢的季节”的调查，50%的同学最喜欢春天，40%的同学最喜欢秋天，而你喜欢的季节与他们都不同。请根据讨论结果及下图写一篇 80 词左右的调查报告，并谈谈自己最喜欢的季节。

A Survey on Favourite Seasons
Recently our class did a survey on "My favourite season". Half of the students like spring best for its warm wind and fresh green trees. 40% of us love cool autumn, and they enjoy picking fresh fruits on farms.
My favourite season is different from theirs. I love summer most. It is sunny and hot, and I can go swimming and eat delicious ice cream with my family. I always have great fun in summer.

1. 写作要点梳理：
① 开篇点明班级开展“最喜爱的季节”主题调查的背景，清晰给出统计结果：半数同学最爱春天，四成同学最爱秋天；
② 说明自己的喜好和多数同学不同，选定一个季节后，结合思维导图的三个维度展开说明：先描述对应季节的天气特点，再列举该季节的特色活动，最后补充个人的真实感受，逻辑连贯；
③ 全文控制在80词左右，全部使用八年级已学的词汇和基础句式，避免超纲表达，符合调查报告的平实语气。