“读万卷书，行万里路”，旅行越来越成为人们放松和开阔眼界的好方法。假设你是李华，你的好友付兴发邮件询问你的暑假旅行，请你给他回一封邮件，向他讲述你的旅行。
内容提示：(1) Where did you go?
(2) What did you see or do there?
(3) What did you learn from this experience?
写作要求：(1) 不得使用真实姓名和学校名；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
(3) 字迹工整、表达准确、条理清晰；
(4) 词数不少于100。
Dear Fu Xing,
How's everything going?



I'm looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua

【参考范文】
Dear Fu Xing,
How's everything going?
I'm glad to share my summer trip with you! This year, I travelled to Guilin with my family. It's a famous city for its beautiful mountains and rivers.
We took a boat tour along the Li River. The clear water reflected the green hills, which looked like a nice painting. We also climbed Elephant Trunk Hill—its shape was so amazing that I couldn't stop taking photos. At night, we walked around West Street and tried local snacks like rice noodles.
This trip taught me a lot. Seeing the tall mountains and clear rivers made me feel how amazing nature is. Being away from daily routines relaxed me and filled me with energy. I realized the world is big and full of different things, and that every trip can help us grow. I feel refreshed and ready for the new term!
I'm looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua

【分析】本题是英语书信写作题，要求以李华的身份回复好友付兴的邮件，讲述暑假旅行。解题思路：首先确定写作核心需覆盖三个提示点（旅行地点、所见所做、旅行收获）；接着选择易拓展细节的旅行地点（如桂林）；然后补充具体活动细节（如漓江游船、象鼻山游览、西街尝小吃）让内容充实；最后点明旅行收获升华主题，同时遵循书信格式，确保行文连贯、词数达标，不使用真实信息。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头：问候后引出分享暑假旅行，如“I'm glad to share my summer trip with you!”；2. 主体：先说明旅行地点为桂林，再具体描述活动：乘船游漓江（清澈江水映着青山如画卷）、爬象鼻山（形状奇特忍不住拍照）、逛西街尝当地小吃（米粉）；3. 结尾：阐述旅行收获（感受自然之美、放松身心、明白世界之大），最后按书信格式收尾。
【答案】Dear Fu Xing,
How's everything going?
I'm glad to share my summer trip with you! This year, I travelled to Guilin with my family. It's a famous city for its beautiful mountains and rivers.
We took a boat tour along the Li River. The clear water reflected the green hills, which looked like a nice painting. We also climbed Elephant Trunk Hill—its shape was so amazing that I couldn't stop taking photos. At night, we walked around West Street and tried local snacks like rice noodles.
This trip taught me a lot. Seeing the tall mountains and clear rivers made me feel how amazing nature is. Being away from daily routines relaxed me and filled me with energy. I realized the world is big and full of different things, and that every trip can help us grow. I feel refreshed and ready for the new term!
I'm looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、旅行话题表达、英语写作连贯技巧
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示内容，细节生动具体，语言准确流畅，符合书信格式，很好地完成了写作任务，是一篇优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】0.5