【写作导引】
本单元写作主题为“音乐”，属于“人与社会”主题范畴中的“文学、艺术与体育”这一主题群，涉及子主题“音乐”。常见的写作任务涉及描述自己喜欢的音乐及音乐鉴赏等。
【写作任务】
老师要求同学们在下周的英语课上介绍自己最喜欢的一首歌。请你围绕下面的问题用英语写一篇短文，为下周的发言做准备。
提示:1.Who sings it? 2.What kind of song is it?
3.Why do you like it best?
要求:1.内容应包括提示中的问题,可适当发挥;2.语言表达准确,语义连贯;3.词数90-100(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Good afternoon, everyone! I'd like to introduce my favorite song to all of you.

Good afternoon, everyone! I'd like to introduce my favorite song to all of you.
My favorite song is Shaonian, which is sung by Mengran. It's a pop song that is full of energy. I like listening to it and singing along with it. Of course, I'm one of the fans who love it.
I like this song best for two reasons. First, the song sounds so lively that it can make me excited. Every time I listen to it, I feel like dancing to it. Second, the lyrics of the song are encouraging. Whenever something bad happens, I'll listen to this song. It cheers me up.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
亮点词块
① full of energy 充满活力
② cheer sb up 使某人振作起来
高分句子
③ which 引导的非限制性定语从句
④ so...that... 引导的结果状语从句

【分析】
首先承接给定开头，明确要介绍的歌曲《Shaonian》、歌手Mengran及歌曲类型（充满活力的流行歌）；接着分两点阐述喜欢的原因：一是歌曲旋律活泼，能让人兴奋、想跟着跳舞；二是歌词励志，遇到不顺时能让人振作；最后礼貌收尾，确保内容完整，语言连贯，符合词数要求，运用合适句式提升表达效果。
【解析】
先承接开头点明歌曲、歌手及类型，再分两点说明喜欢的原因，最后礼貌致谢，具体内容如下：
My favorite song is Shaonian, which is sung by Mengran. It's a pop song that is full of energy. I like listening to it and singing along with it. Of course, I'm one of the fans who love it.
I like this song best for two reasons. First, the song sounds so lively that it can make me excited. Every time I listen to it, I feel like dancing to it. Second, the lyrics of the song are encouraging. Whenever something bad happens, I'll listen to this song. It cheers me up.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
【答案】
Good afternoon, everyone! I'd like to introduce my favorite song to all of you.
My favorite song is Shaonian, which is sung by Mengran. It's a pop song that is full of energy. I like listening to it and singing along with it. Of course, I'm one of the fans who love it.
I like this song best for two reasons. First, the song sounds so lively that it can make me excited. Every time I listen to it, I feel like dancing to it. Second, the lyrics of the song are encouraging. Whenever something bad happens, I'll listen to this song. It cheers me up.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、定语从句、结果状语从句
【点评】
本次写作紧扣“介绍最喜欢的一首歌”的任务要求，涵盖了提示的所有问题，语言表达准确连贯，运用了非限制性定语从句、so...that...等高分句式及亮点词块，符合英语课堂发言的语境，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6

跟踪演练
音乐在我们的生活中起着很重要的作用。请根据以下思维导图提示，以“The Role of Music”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示：

注意:可根据自己对音乐的理解适当发挥。
The Role of Music

The Role of Music
Music plays an important role in our lives.
First, it can make us feel completely relaxed, and help reduce our pressure at work or in our lives. Second, music can cheer us up whenever we are in trouble or feel sad. What’s more, music has a comforting effect when we are worried and helps us step out of difficulty. In addition, music can be of great help in learning different cultures.
In a word, music is part of our lives. We can’t live a happy life without music.

【分析】
本题要求以“The Role of Music”为题写英语短文，需结合思维导图给出的音乐的四个作用（放松身心缓解压力、振奋鼓舞人心、抚慰心灵走出困境、帮助了解不同文化），先总述音乐在生活中的重要性，再分点阐述各作用，最后总结，保证内容连贯、要点齐全，词数符合要求。
【解析】
先总起说明音乐在生活中的重要性，再依次对应思维导图的四个作用展开：1. 放松身心，缓解压力；2. 振奋鼓舞人心；3. 抚慰心灵，帮助走出困境；4. 帮助了解不同文化，最后总结音乐与生活的关系，使短文结构完整、逻辑清晰。
【答案】
The Role of Music
Music plays an important role in our lives.
First, it can make us feel completely relaxed, and help reduce our pressure at work or in our lives. Second, music can cheer us up whenever we are in trouble or feel sad. What’s more, music has a comforting effect when we are worried and helps us step out of difficulty. In addition, music can be of great help in learning different cultures.
In a word, music is part of our lives. We can’t live a happy life without music.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语要点表达
【点评】
本题考查学生根据思维导图提示进行英语短文写作的能力，需准确提取信息并合理组织语言，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5