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假如你是李华，你的笔友Mary来信询问你做家务的相关情况。请根据下列要点提示给她回复一封信。
要点提示: 1. Do you often do housework?
2. What chores do you like or hate to do? Why?
3. Do you think children should do housework? Why?
提示词: responsibility 责任
要求: 词数80~100。
[审题指导]
1. 体裁: 书信 2. 话题: 做家务
3. 人称: 以第一人称为主
4. 时态: 以一般现在时为主
[思路构建]
[精彩范文]
Dear Mary,
How is everything going? I'm writing to tell you about doing housework.
I help my parents do housework almost every day, such as sweeping the floor, cleaning the table and watering flowers. I like to help my mother make meals very much. I will be happy when I cook a dish by myself. But I hate to do the dishes. I don't think it is very interesting.
I think we children should do some housework. We can not only give our parents a hand but also learn a
lot from it. Doing housework teaches us responsibility and helps us learn to take care of ourselves. Do you think so?
Yours,
Li Hua
高分点评: 1. 思路清晰, 采用“总—分—总”三段式结构。 2. such as, sweep the floor, water flowers, give sb. a hand, take care of 等短语的正确运用, 展示了作者扎实的基本功。 3. 文中when引导的时间状语从句以及not only...but also的正确运用成为文章的加分点。
实战演练
[宜宾中考]假如你是光明中学的李华, 准备参加学校举办的以“感恩”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“A Special Birthday Gift”为题, 用英语写一篇演讲稿, 讲述你在父(母)亲或其他长辈生日那天, 送上的一份特殊生日礼物: 家务劳动。
内容包括
1. 做家务的理由;
2. 做家务的过程(扫地、擦家具、收拾房间等);
3. 你的感受。
注意: 词数80~100, 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
A Special Birthday Gift
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Today, I'm very glad to have the chance to take part in this English speech contest (竞赛).
Thank you for your listening!
24 英语 八上R
假如你是李华，你的笔友Mary来信询问你做家务的相关情况。请根据下列要点提示给她回复一封信。
要点提示: 1. Do you often do housework?
2. What chores do you like or hate to do? Why?
3. Do you think children should do housework? Why?
提示词: responsibility 责任
要求: 词数80~100。
[审题指导]
1. 体裁: 书信 2. 话题: 做家务
3. 人称: 以第一人称为主
4. 时态: 以一般现在时为主
[思路构建]
[精彩范文]
Dear Mary,
How is everything going? I'm writing to tell you about doing housework.
I help my parents do housework almost every day, such as sweeping the floor, cleaning the table and watering flowers. I like to help my mother make meals very much. I will be happy when I cook a dish by myself. But I hate to do the dishes. I don't think it is very interesting.
I think we children should do some housework. We can not only give our parents a hand but also learn a
lot from it. Doing housework teaches us responsibility and helps us learn to take care of ourselves. Do you think so?
Yours,
Li Hua
高分点评: 1. 思路清晰, 采用“总—分—总”三段式结构。 2. such as, sweep the floor, water flowers, give sb. a hand, take care of 等短语的正确运用, 展示了作者扎实的基本功。 3. 文中when引导的时间状语从句以及not only...but also的正确运用成为文章的加分点。
实战演练
[宜宾中考]假如你是光明中学的李华, 准备参加学校举办的以“感恩”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“A Special Birthday Gift”为题, 用英语写一篇演讲稿, 讲述你在父(母)亲或其他长辈生日那天, 送上的一份特殊生日礼物: 家务劳动。
内容包括
1. 做家务的理由;
2. 做家务的过程(扫地、擦家具、收拾房间等);
3. 你的感受。
注意: 词数80~100, 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
A Special Birthday Gift
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Today, I'm very glad to have the chance to take part in this English speech contest (竞赛).
I'd like to share with you a story about a special birthday gift for my mother.
On my mother's birthday, I decided to give her a special present. I chose to do the housework for her, as a way to express my thanks.
I started by sweeping the floor. Then, I cleaned the furniture. Finally, I tidied up the rooms and put away clothes.
When my mother came home, her eyes lit up with happiness.
She gave me a big hug and said, "This is the best birthday gift for me."
I was tired, but I felt so happy!
Thank you for your listening!
24 英语 八上R
答案
创新表达—写作能力提升练
实战演练
A Special Birthday Gift
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Today, I'm very glad to have the chance to take part in this English speech contest（竞赛）. I'd like to share with you a story about a special birthday gift for my mother.
On my mother's birthday, I decided to give her a special present. I chose to do the housework for her, as a way to express my thanks. I started by sweeping the floor. Then, I cleaned the furniture. Finally, I tidied up the rooms and put away clothes.
When my mother came home, her eyes lit up with happiness. She gave me a big hug and said, "This is the best birthday gift for me." I was tired, but I felt so happy!
Thank you for your listening!
【思路分析】首段开篇点题写出作者“分享一个关于特殊礼物的故事”，接着写礼物如何特殊，然后写妈妈看到礼物的反应和心情，最后表达作者对听者的感谢。
实战演练
A Special Birthday Gift
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Today, I'm very glad to have the chance to take part in this English speech contest（竞赛）. I'd like to share with you a story about a special birthday gift for my mother.
On my mother's birthday, I decided to give her a special present. I chose to do the housework for her, as a way to express my thanks. I started by sweeping the floor. Then, I cleaned the furniture. Finally, I tidied up the rooms and put away clothes.
When my mother came home, her eyes lit up with happiness. She gave me a big hug and said, "This is the best birthday gift for me." I was tired, but I felt so happy!
Thank you for your listening!
【思路分析】首段开篇点题写出作者“分享一个关于特殊礼物的故事”，接着写礼物如何特殊，然后写妈妈看到礼物的反应和心情，最后表达作者对听者的感谢。
