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写作提优专题
话题分析
本单元核心写作话题是介绍你敬佩的人物(An Inspiring Person You Admire)，属于中考高频的人物介绍类写作。要求围绕人物的基本信息、主要成就、优秀品质、个人感悟展开写作，引导学生学习榜样精神、锻炼人物描写与书面表达能力。
写作积累
[高分词汇]
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2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
9.
10.
[高分句式]
1. 在我知道的所有励志人物中，居里夫人是对我影响最大的人。
2. 无论问题有多难，他都保持冷静并尽自己最大的努力。
3. 她激励我勇敢地面对挑战，永不放弃自己的梦想。
4. 我会向他学习，在成长的道路上不断前行。
典例讲解
假如你是李华，你校英文报开展征文，请以“My Role Model”为题，根据思维导图的提示写一篇短文，介绍一位你敬佩的当代杰出人物并分享你的体会。
注意:1. 词数100左右，标题和开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的校名、班级名及个人隐私信息；可使用公众人物姓名。
My Role Model
Role models help us become better people. And my role model of our time is
[审题思路]
▶审体裁:本篇写作的核心目的是向读者介绍一位当代杰出人物，包括其基本信息、为国家做出的
话题分析
本单元核心写作话题是介绍你敬佩的人物(An Inspiring Person You Admire)，属于中考高频的人物介绍类写作。要求围绕人物的基本信息、主要成就、优秀品质、个人感悟展开写作，引导学生学习榜样精神、锻炼人物描写与书面表达能力。
写作积累
[高分词汇]
1.
look up to
敬佩；仰慕2.
make great achievements
取得巨大成就3.
have a strong will
意志坚定4.
never give up
永不放弃5.
face challenges bravely
勇敢地面对挑战6.
make a difference
产生影响；有所作为7.
set a good example
树立一个好榜样8.
try one's best
尽最大努力9.
stick to one's dream
坚持自己的梦想10.
pass on the spirit
传承精神[高分句式]
1. 在我知道的所有励志人物中，居里夫人是对我影响最大的人。
Among all the inspiring people I know, Marie Curie is the one who has influenced me most.
2. 无论问题有多难，他都保持冷静并尽自己最大的努力。
No matter how difficult the problem is, he keeps calm and tries his best.
3. 她激励我勇敢地面对挑战，永不放弃自己的梦想。
She inspires me to be brave in the face of challenges and never give up on my dreams.
4. 我会向他学习，在成长的道路上不断前行。
I will learn from him and keep moving forward on my way to growth.
典例讲解
假如你是李华，你校英文报开展征文，请以“My Role Model”为题，根据思维导图的提示写一篇短文，介绍一位你敬佩的当代杰出人物并分享你的体会。
注意:1. 词数100左右，标题和开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的校名、班级名及个人隐私信息；可使用公众人物姓名。
My Role Model
Role models help us become better people. And my role model of our time is
[审题思路]
▶审体裁:本篇写作的核心目的是向读者介绍一位当代杰出人物，包括其基本信息、为国家做出的
答案
[高分词汇]
1. look up to
2. make great achievements
3. have a strong will
4. never give up
5. face challenges bravely
6. make a difference
7. set a good example
8. try one's best
9. stick to one's dream
10. pass on the spirit
[高分句式]
1. Among all the inspiring people I know, Marie Curie is the one who has influenced me most.
2. No matter how difficult the problem is, he keeps calm and tries his best.
3. She inspires me to be brave in the face of challenges and never give up on my dreams.
4. I will learn from him and keep moving forward on my way to growth.
1. look up to
2. make great achievements
3. have a strong will
4. never give up
5. face challenges bravely
6. make a difference
7. set a good example
8. try one's best
9. stick to one's dream
10. pass on the spirit
[高分句式]
1. Among all the inspiring people I know, Marie Curie is the one who has influenced me most.
2. No matter how difficult the problem is, he keeps calm and tries his best.
3. She inspires me to be brave in the face of challenges and never give up on my dreams.
4. I will learn from him and keep moving forward on my way to growth.
解析
【分析】
本题是中考高频的人物介绍类英语写作提优题，需围绕思维导图的三个核心问题（谁是榜样、榜样为国家做了什么、能从榜样身上学到什么）展开写作，解题时需结合积累的高分词汇与句式，确保内容贴合主题、语言准确，同时满足词数、行文连贯等要求，避免出现真实隐私信息。
【解析】
本题需填写写作积累中的高分词汇和高分句式，根据英语常用表达及参考答案，依次对应填写：
高分词汇：
1. look up to
2. make great achievements
3. have a strong will
4. never give up
5. face challenges bravely
6. make a difference
7. set a good example
8. try one's best
9. stick to one's dream
10. pass on the spirit
高分句式：
1. Among all the inspiring people I know, Marie Curie is the one who has influenced me most.
2. No matter how difficult the problem is, he keeps calm and tries his best.
3. She inspires me to be brave in the face of challenges and never give up on my dreams.
4. I will learn from him and keep moving forward on my way to growth.
【答案】
高分词汇：
1. look up to
2. make great achievements
3. have a strong will
4. never give up
5. face challenges bravely
6. make a difference
7. set a good example
8. try one's best
9. stick to one's dream
10. pass on the spirit
高分句式：
1. Among all the inspiring people I know, Marie Curie is the one who has influenced me most.
2. No matter how difficult the problem is, he keeps calm and tries his best.
3. She inspires me to be brave in the face of challenges and never give up on my dreams.
4. I will learn from him and keep moving forward on my way to growth.
【知识点】
英语人物写作；高分词汇运用；英语句式运用
【点评】
本题围绕“榜样”主题，聚焦中考高频人物介绍类写作，通过积累高分词汇和句式，帮助学生掌握人物描写的方法，引导学生学习榜样精神，提升书面表达能力，贴合单元写作要求，实用性较强。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是中考高频的人物介绍类英语写作提优题，需围绕思维导图的三个核心问题（谁是榜样、榜样为国家做了什么、能从榜样身上学到什么）展开写作，解题时需结合积累的高分词汇与句式，确保内容贴合主题、语言准确，同时满足词数、行文连贯等要求，避免出现真实隐私信息。
【解析】
本题需填写写作积累中的高分词汇和高分句式，根据英语常用表达及参考答案，依次对应填写：
高分词汇：
1. look up to
2. make great achievements
3. have a strong will
4. never give up
5. face challenges bravely
6. make a difference
7. set a good example
8. try one's best
9. stick to one's dream
10. pass on the spirit
高分句式：
1. Among all the inspiring people I know, Marie Curie is the one who has influenced me most.
2. No matter how difficult the problem is, he keeps calm and tries his best.
3. She inspires me to be brave in the face of challenges and never give up on my dreams.
4. I will learn from him and keep moving forward on my way to growth.
【答案】
高分词汇：
1. look up to
2. make great achievements
3. have a strong will
4. never give up
5. face challenges bravely
6. make a difference
7. set a good example
8. try one's best
9. stick to one's dream
10. pass on the spirit
高分句式：
1. Among all the inspiring people I know, Marie Curie is the one who has influenced me most.
2. No matter how difficult the problem is, he keeps calm and tries his best.
3. She inspires me to be brave in the face of challenges and never give up on my dreams.
4. I will learn from him and keep moving forward on my way to growth.
【知识点】
英语人物写作；高分词汇运用；英语句式运用
【点评】
本题围绕“榜样”主题，聚焦中考高频人物介绍类写作，通过积累高分词汇和句式，帮助学生掌握人物描写的方法，引导学生学习榜样精神，提升书面表达能力，贴合单元写作要求，实用性较强。
【难度系数】
0.5
