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1 教材原句: I'd like a sweater.
仿写:
(skirt)
2 教材原句: I'd like to buy some school things.
仿写:
(three pens)
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高分范文
I have ninety yuan as pocket money.
¹I'd like to buy some things.
I need a new notebook and two pens.
²I want to use twenty yuan for the school things. I also need a pair of shoes. I want to use fifty yuan for the shoes.
³This is my shopping plan. It helps me use money well.
名师点评
①运用固定句型 "I'd like to buy ..." 表达购买物品的意愿。
②运用固定短语 "want to use ... yuan for ..." 表达想为某(些)物品花费的金额。
③运用 "This is my shopping plan" 对第二段的内容进行总结。
本篇范文紧扣购物计划主题,句式简单流畅,用词贴合单元重点,逻辑清晰,能体现理性购物理念。
结构分析
高分实战
你拿着100元零花钱来超市购物,请用英文写一篇短文讲述一下你想要买什么,买多少,每种商品多少钱等。
提示词:a bag of一袋; a bottle of一瓶; a pair of一副; sunglasses 太阳镜; crisp 炸薯片; flour 面粉
要求:1.条理清晰,句意明确、连贯,语法正确,书写工整、规范;
2.可适当发挥,不少于60词。
I have 100 yuan. I want to buy
仿写:
(skirt) I'd like a skirt.
2 教材原句: I'd like to buy some school things.
仿写:
(three pens) I'd like to buy three pens.
高分写作
✎范文点评
高分范文
I have ninety yuan as pocket money.
¹I'd like to buy some things.
I need a new notebook and two pens.
²I want to use twenty yuan for the school things. I also need a pair of shoes. I want to use fifty yuan for the shoes.
³This is my shopping plan. It helps me use money well.
名师点评
①运用固定句型 "I'd like to buy ..." 表达购买物品的意愿。
②运用固定短语 "want to use ... yuan for ..." 表达想为某(些)物品花费的金额。
③运用 "This is my shopping plan" 对第二段的内容进行总结。
本篇范文紧扣购物计划主题,句式简单流畅,用词贴合单元重点,逻辑清晰,能体现理性购物理念。
结构分析
高分实战
你拿着100元零花钱来超市购物,请用英文写一篇短文讲述一下你想要买什么,买多少,每种商品多少钱等。
提示词:a bag of一袋; a bottle of一瓶; a pair of一副; sunglasses 太阳镜; crisp 炸薯片; flour 面粉
要求:1.条理清晰,句意明确、连贯,语法正确,书写工整、规范;
2.可适当发挥,不少于60词。
I have 100 yuan. I want to buy
a bag of flour. It is fifteen yuan. Crisps are very yummy. I like crisps. I want to buy two bags of crisps. They are sixteen yuan. I also like milk. I want to buy a bottle of milk. It is good. It's twelve yuan. I also want to buy a pair of sunglasses. They're twenty yuan. They're very cool. I don't have any pencils. So I want to buy a pencil. It's only two yuan.
答案
1. I'd like a skirt.
2. I'd like to buy three pens.
参考范文:
I have 100 yuan. I want to buy a bag of flour. It is fifteen yuan. Crisps are very yummy. I like crisps. I want to buy two bags of crisps. They are sixteen yuan. I also like milk. I want to buy a bottle of milk. It is good. It's twelve yuan. I also want to buy a pair of sunglasses. They're twenty yuan. They're very cool. I don't have any pencils. So I want to buy a pencil. It's only two yuan.
2. I'd like to buy three pens.
参考范文:
I have 100 yuan. I want to buy a bag of flour. It is fifteen yuan. Crisps are very yummy. I like crisps. I want to buy two bags of crisps. They are sixteen yuan. I also like milk. I want to buy a bottle of milk. It is good. It's twelve yuan. I also want to buy a pair of sunglasses. They're twenty yuan. They're very cool. I don't have any pencils. So I want to buy a pencil. It's only two yuan.
